User talk:Bearsona
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Re: ese's Pieces
I've never added reception-related information, so you're better off asking Tintor2 or Sephiroth BCR (which I see you're already done). And you're welcome to use and/or modify my archive box to fit your needs. ~SnapperTo 04:33, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
Naruto reception
The number of reception in the article seems good now. I dont know what else we can add, but for a GA, it may require copy-edit since it uses to many quotes without some common explanations.Tintor2 (talk) 14:16, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
The new content recently added in reception is what it needs some flow. Some parts need a bit flow such as the fights to focus a bit more on Naruto. There are two mentions of his fight against Gaara, so it could be replaced with "REVIEWER agreed and also noted...".Tintor2 (talk) 22:53, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
I made some clean up in the reception to relate more sentences and remove some unimportant things. They may require a bit of copyedit. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 23:02, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
Have a Barnstar!
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The Editor's Barnstar | |
| Thank you so much for your copyedits to Mediocre (album). You made outstanding decisions with your editing and selection of words, and you have definitely earned this barnstar for your hard work. Again, a million thanks for your hard work and dedication! – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 07:48, 18 November 2008 (UTC) |
Mediocre (album)
Well, I personally believe it has been drastically improved. It's definitely not the C-class article I wrote anymore! I looked over the criteria, wondering the same thing. I think we're really close. If we can find more pictures, we could probably submit it in the coming month. Thanks for all your help! I'll make some more song samples if you want. Thanks, – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 22:10, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
- If possible, could you check out the credits table and make grammatical or "voice" corrections if possible? – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 22:35, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
- I will definitely look into it. I'm actually doing work right now, too. – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 22:47, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
- I completed the nom and added a "Singles" section. Please copyedit if you feel you must. Para entretenimiento, puedes leer el artículo sobre el vídeo de música nuevo de Ximena aquí.
- I will definitely look into it. I'm actually doing work right now, too. – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 22:47, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
Barnstar
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The Washington State Highways Barnstar Thanks for copyediting Washington State Route 409, and thus I shall give you this barnstar. ~~ ComputerGuy 23:59, 21 November 2008 (UTC) |
Some help with copyediting
Hi. I saw your name listed at the project's page. If you find some time, could you run through Slovenian presidential election, 2007 and improve some styling? The article is a FAC at the moment and the only thing missing is some grammatical fixes, probably. Needs attention from a native speaker... Thanks a lot. --Tone 19:28, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
- I would be glad to help copyedit Slovenian presidential election, 2007, always happy to help in anyway I can. Cheers! Scapler (talk) 19:56, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
- Hi - Tone asked me to help copyedit it too. If you like, seeing as you are doing Thanksgiving and I, being Irish, have no truck with such things, I will do the remaining bit of the article, or even just give the whole thing another pass. You could either let me know what you haven't done (I'm sure it will be obvious) or else you could just give it another pass when you're free. Cheers. Lexo (talk) 23:12, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
Thanksgiving
You too. :) bibliomaniac15 21:12, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
Happy Thanksgiving!
Hey, same to you! Happy Thanksgiving! I'm going to work on a spiffy box so I can return the greeting to you. – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 00:27, 28 November 2008 (UTC)