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JUST IN

March 6

Mario Benedetti - quite poor as it is for his fame. Pfortuny

Reelin - another candidate from Special:Ancientpages, needs wikifying and content verifying

Abdel-Razak al-Yehiyeh - old page, needs updating since July 2002

Salam Faiad - old page, needs updating since July 2002

Short fiction by Stephen King - lacking something. Too many red links.

Information warfare - still needs serious editing for POV. Washington irving

Sputnik 2 - a diagram/photo would be nice. Pfortuny

MediaLens - very POV

Trace fossil - quite poor. Pfortuny

Diyala River - a map would be most welcome. Pfortuny

Nuclear Silo (StarCraft), Refinery (StarCraft), and so on... see what links to StarCraft. - Quite poor. I'd rather delete them but. Pfortuny

Tetracyclic antidepressant - probably a chemical diagram would come in handy. Also a bit deeper would be welcome. Pfortuny

Late Imperial China - surely deserves something longer. Pfortuny

27th Material Squadron - roster, not an article

The Source - needs general cleaning

Jacek Skalmierski - a person or software or both?

Corinth, Greece needs to be divided between into 2 articles: one about the city, the other about the prefecture llywrch

March 5

Little Three needs context; unwikified, unencyclopaedic

Battle of Lepanto (1500) - just one small fact on a battle participant - that's not even the right battle, Cervantes was in the Battle of Lepanto (1571)

Society of Cincinnati isn't even a stub, just an external link. moink

Memory dump is empty right now. No useful history. moink

Ocean University of China - wikify. moink

L'Aquila may be a machine translation? Needs work & wikification. moink

VEISHEA needs wikification, formatting, organization. moink

U.S.-North Korea relations has PD text added (top of article). I consider this not suitable fro Wikipedia (POV), can anyone check out, please? Kokiri 22:10, 5 Mar 2004 (UTC)

List of Vietnamese companies - huge text dump (as credited). May not be copyright viol (source asserts no copyright), but needs much work to be an article.

How to care for a pet cockatoo was listed on VfD consensus to keep byt needs TLC

Darth_Vader just uncool; redirects to Anakin Skywalker. A Star Wars fan should split them into two article, each of which #spoilers# referencing the other.

  • Check out the two articles. They seemed to readily split with references where necessary to each other. Revert if I have split a necessary plot. - Texture 20:18, 5 Mar 2004 (UTC)

International_criminal_law sub-stub; redundant; almost-orphaned. Clean quickly or VfD?

List_of_ambassadors (absurdly sparse/incomplete; merge into 1-2 pages?)

Microsoft antitrust case -- NPOV

March 4

Ethical fitnessism idiosyncratic, looks like original research only 1 Google hit. + listed on VfD

Unification shoes - not unsure enough about this to post on vfd.  ???

Korandje -- wikify, clarify

Popular science -- ironic phrasing. Make it normal. +major rewrite doneike9898

KBNT - not in English. My best guess is Spanish. + added to Wikipedia:Pages needing translation

Methodological relativism - needs everything.

Sebastiao Salgado - might or might not be important, links to a language i don't understand. moink

V. K. Ratliff - a miniStub orphan about a character from Faulkner's "Snopes" trilogy. However, there's no article about the trilogy or any of the novels within it.

Last Words of Dutch Shultz needs context, relevance, wikifying. moink -or removal for being source text? DJ Clayworth

The 20th Century in Review content, wikification & NPOV needed

Dormant Commerce Clause needs to be merged with Commerce Clause by someone with an interest in U.S. Constitution.

Transwiki:Zazaki needs to be moved to the mainspace after it is wikified. See m:transwiki

Sowing Ancient text with little if any relevance today.

Doordarshan Huh? Needs context, fmt, wiki--the works

Gorillas (game) - poor stub, needs wikifying, clarifying, more info. +worked on

Edgar Meyer - new article needs NPOV. moink

Arthur Gould - decent article, needs fact checking that I can't do (I know nothing about rugby football) also needs some copyediting. PMC

Zollverein - poor stub, no wiki links.

Levi Strauss & Co. - little more than a couple of links

Booger - needs help, and mucus redirects to it

Common Emitter has no text +added basic description DJ Clayworth

Logarithmic differentiation needs someone with a knowledge of math markup. +moink - now merged

Eastmoreland, Portland, Oregon - Is this article necessary? +llywrch -yes! This is what makes Wikipedia so great

March 3

Use of words for comedic effect - One incomplete sentence plus a see also list of four links, one red

Samuel Renshaw - poor stub, one line bio.

Intellectual property education Probably needs self promotion removed as does perhaps presumed autobio Shaheen Lakhan; Human memory process by same IP (noted at #February 4, 11th item), and those labelled "(Top)" at Contribs of (surely) the same person are also not yet edited by others, and may (or not!) still deserve scrutiny

WWF World Heavyweight Title - at the risk of being far too generous, this page just squeaks in as a microStub. +far too generous. Made it a redirect.


Folk_music - This is no way NPOV. It's one particular, very persuasive, and often-argued POV, but Louis Armstrong has his supporters (myself amongst them).

Marshall Rosenberg - NPOVing due -some done, mainly by removing vast swaths of fawning. Needs someone who knows about peace & conflict resolution to take a look.

Mid-levels - Formatting

Mamba - the text here is extremely minimal, appears to contain a misspelling I'm hesitant to correct, and is about the black mamba rather than mambas in general

Symbiotic algorithm, Emerging Symbiotic Clusters - primary research, not encyclopedic content

List of British Columbia Premiers - Table colors need help.

Generation Y - What does "Awakening-era" or "Unravelling-era" mean? Is this original research?

Steven Hawley - uniwified text dump (from public domain site, so not a copyvio)

I did what I could. Need better formating Quinwound 06:15, Mar 3, 2004 (UTC)

HMS Tireless (S88) - poor stub

Fred Tuttle - npov problems, define why he is significant (won 1998 GOP senatorial primary...)

Eliezer Ben-Yehuda - see talk page, not in standard format and POV

March 2

Serps has again been made into a (spelling error-rife) advertisement for a web page, replete with inappropriate "guest book." 68.94.207.19 + reverted, but is the Wikipedia: namespace crawled by search engines, and if so, is this very entry an attempt intended to be part of "competing"? Jerzy(t)

The Theory of Everything - ???

KPPP - substub

Thutmose I of Egypt - birth date makes no sense, German entry has altogether different dates

Religion in the United States - needs copyed

Express contract stublet definition. Make an article or delete

Steve Rochinski - poor stub

Wikipedia:Searching#Wildcards - an "I don't know how this works" answer

Danny Rolling - idiosyncratic, check facts, rewrite

March 1

Juicer - repetitive, needs heavy rephrasing

Biodynamic Agriculture - poor stub, does such a thing exist? - Added a little info, still a stub, but much better WormRunner

Lardal - poor stub, delete if can't be fixed.

The Delinquents - needs more info

TradeStation - poor stub

Eltham needs to be turned into a proper disambiguation page

Cristiane Alexandre famous?

Croatians grammars, unwikified, orphan, copyvio?

Battle of Freiburg - substub +replaced with correct stub (was about Battle of Freiberg anyway)

River - data given for ten longest rivers frequently doesn't match the data given on the actual page for that river.

Vladimir Akopian and David Janowski - needs expanding by someone who knows chess.

Abaris the Hyperborean - I don't understand what this is about - seems POV but might be quoting someone (but who?) - what's the connection between the article and the title? Andre Engels + Probably ought to be merged with Abaris, not sure why there are two articles (Smerdis of Tlön)

Boston transportation - extremely POV + POV removed on 3/2 DavidWBrooks

Alan West unwikified, copyvio? - wikified and cleared up the writing

Aaron J. Fink unwikified, POV tract

Alpine butterfly bend context, lacking content

Elamite Language - needs wikification

XXXX strange humour - factual + good and accurate article about a Queensland beer. DavidWBrooks

Ramification problem substub, no clue what's about - Nonsense, delete immediately --Faradn - not nonsense, just a wafer-thin AI stub

sound pressure needs verifikation and eventually merging with stuff in Acoustics by someone who knows about accoustics acoustics

February 29

Japanese pottery - unwikified, contains several untranslated Japanese language terms

Animation:Master - reads like an advert

Allan R. Bomhard - nothing more than a list of works, unwikified

Ammunition for infantry - only discusses subject circa 1911

Irish fiddling - unencyclopedic sub-stub

Physical property - Scrappy and neglected

Abbas I (Shah of Persia) and Abbas I of Safavid are about the same person.

Kakeru - needs a touchup

Art journal - lacking content

Arthur Gold - unwikified, obscure sports terminology

Arch Revision Control System - lacking context, unwikified, incomprehensible

Arbitrary - dictionary def.

Chairman of the National Defence Committee of North Korea - bogus crap, Kim Jong-il is not head of state

St. Mary's, Maryland -- needs wikif.

Todaiji temple - microStub

Kazuo Matsui - stub, needs more info

Shiso - Features many names of foreign dishes that need explanation.

USS Barney (DDG-6) - stub, could use table/picture of ship

Friedrich Nietzsche - final section "Misc" ends in what appears to be a tangential essay with no clear connection to Nietsche's ideas -- llywrch

Digital physics - unformatted, fringe theory?

February 28

System Shock - needs NPOV

LOUDNESS (about a band) - unwikified

Ratcliffe - strange unformated text dump. No google match to sample text. Salvagable, or vfd?

Auberon Herbert - lacking context, deadend

Mark_Hucko vanity?

Transport_on_other_planets Stubby, delete?

LinuxQuestions.org - advert, not article

Penultimate - dict def.

Paddywagon - questionable accuracy, orphan, dict def. Make real article or delete

Crime in Mumbai - lacking legitimate content

February 27

List of recurring characters from The Simpsons - messy, unencyclopaedic, inaccurate, wikifiable, non-NPOV. Kwekubo Please explain how this is inaccurate and non-NPOV. RickK 07:34, 28 Feb 2004 (UTC) Many of the details given about characters are just plainly wrong, and a lot of them are based on the authors' opinions as opposed to the actual show. - Kwekubo 20:33, 28 Feb 2004 (UTC) The details seem to be right, and no obvious opinions are inserted. Has it been fixed, or could you further elaborate? Cool Hand Luke

Ganglati - made it a little bigger, needs more info and could be rewritten

Claude Gauvreau - needs language editing, NPOVing, and TLC.

Hans Zwieidneck von Sudenhorst - needs formatting

Loreto - confusing, + clarifying (I think)

Fernando Lopes - needs formatting

The History of the Decline and Fall of the Roman Empire - Is the title correct? (My copy is different.) Also, article does not even touch on the theme of this influential book: the fall of the Roman Empire. llywrch

Listing removed from Wikipedia:Speedy deletions: Vroman's Bookstore is a popular bookstore in Southern California. However, it needs a lot of work.

Wettin_(city) wtf

7.62x39 mm - immediate delete; should not have the space +why delete?

List of Presidents of Somaliland - it needs frmt, it's not a software bug.

List Of Japanese Schools - a list with one entry, orphan + redirected to List of universities in Japan Adam Bishop

Jugemu - NPOV, fmt

Every Little Thing - NPOV

Setsubunn -cleanup

Tak Matsumoto -cleanup

Hitoto yo

Dahrumasan ga Koronda

Imperial Japanese Army - political rant

Bregenz - parts of it could benefit from list format

Blueball - unwikified, orphan. Similar article had already been deleted from Blueballs (also orphan). Make into an article or delete.

Siamese coup d'état of 1932 - unwikified, possibly copyright issues? + working on it (but not finished yet), grammar to bad for copyvio

February 26

Thomas Oliver for Power Rangers fans.

Planned obsolescence - slanted, thin, disorganized +reorganized, partially NPOVed; article was about all types of obs. so I moved it ike9898


Non-Christian perspectives on Jesus - listed on VfD Feb 20 to Feb 26, issue is now round naming of the article rather than existence of the article itself. See its talk page.

Al-Nakba Palestinian propaganda pov.

Marmorosphax - nearly empty stub (same type as Notoscincus)

Notoscincus - put in info and a website with more information for someone else

Gallery Fake - wikify, reword

Tourism of Argentina - expand, context, wikify, npov

History of Socialism: Part 2-subheadings but no content.Saul Taylor

February 25

International Meridian Conference. Wikisource?

List of important news web sites Wikipedia is not a web directory

Communication source - dictionary definition

Booya - mess

Stew - bad dic def

Creature

February 24

Biff Tannen - copyedit and wikification needed, as well as general style adjustments

Recycling - important topic but text is one sentence followed by some links. +has been expanded

A - The article contains @s instead of special forms of the letter A. It seems to derive from the scan of the 1911 Encyclopedia Brittanica, so it would probably be an easy fix for someone with access to the paper version.

5.45mm caliber - short

Type 21 frigate - only content is two msg-statements. Pico-Stub? I think this is under construction. DJ Clayworth - A bunch of such formulaic sub-stubs by this author

Tanaka Memorial - It's just a collection of links...

Codex Sinaiticus - prob. ESL damage

Le charme discret de la bourgeoisie - first-person film review that has been here since October.

Wah Mee Massacre - if these trials were so high profile, can we got some detail on them?

February 23

MMR vaccine - NPOV probs, see page's talk

Interconnection - dic def

Renting - dictionary entry, move to wiktionary +it is much more than a dictionary def

Normanton, Derby City accuracy?

Serous - dictionary definition

Southwestern Somalia - vague article attempt... is it a nation or not? Under what definition?

Lamina propria - dictionary definition

Slipmat - dictionary definition

Southern All Stars - messy

Scavenger - substub. Added a few linked examples and a msg:stub - MPF

Rumination - substub

Discordant - dict. def.

Robert C Craig - orphan

Urban guerrilla -- new, only contains a link, but could be developed -- BCorr ¤ Брайен

February 22

Inspiration expiration -dictionary definitions

Too Short - is it too short? +stub. - yep. VfD. Denni

Fremskrittspartiet - 2nd paragraph needs work, as it is vague and possibly POV.

Tensor derivative no content; just see alsos

Deadpool - substub; minor comic character.

Cel-shading - substub, needs more on how process works --Faradn

3G, WCDMA, CDMA2000, FOMA, TD-SCDMA - laughably small for such a popular tech topic -- Fuzheado

Radiation protection stub; needs content.

United World Colleges, Atlantic College wikif.

Chuckles - +redirect, keep.
Pierre Salinger syndrome - +NPOV, detail.  +sj+
Richard Genovese - artist whose website has disappeared; +reduced, +npov.  +sj+

February 21

Biosensor, Nondisjunction, resort -sub stub definitions; need trans to Wiktionary and then expansion.

Police procedure - needs rename to "police procedural"; inbound links need updating +sj+

Napoleonic medal - substub

Minatitlán - substub; unwikif.

Iain Cameron - substub; unwikif.

Southern Levant massive block of unwikified text; +wikified, but more about archeology than Levant, perhaps condense?

Thrill of a Lifetime - unwikified

Alpha blending - a fine stub.  +sj+ 
Gramm - +wik, fine now.  +sj+
William Griffith Wilson +wikified. 
Physician assistant - +wikified. (looks OK now +sj+)
Hurricane G +stubbified; ok now +sj+
German Federal Coast Guard list of ships could use an introd. +now a real article
Cooking With The Wolfman - +wiki +stubtag --Mishac
Shaanxi History Museum cut back; npov; no-copyvio.  ok now.  +sj+
Motoneuron many Web of Science refs; term seems alright.  
  redirects w/ "motor neuron" worked out for now.  +sj+

February 20

Forage Stub; links to five types of forage; better content on three of those five pages.

Telephone - Mess of "related articles" needs subdivision in some orderly manner. (Excellent article cluster; overall revision also needed -- article could be better divided into paragraphs and topics; move to PNA when "related articles" is cleaned up +sj+)

Began the process of re-working this article. The actual content in the history section was mostly a massive quote from a circa 1900 project Gutenberg book (Heros of the Telegraph) -- the article needs an introduction which describes what a telephone IS, and some discussion of the various types... Then, we need LINKS to sub-pages for telephone(history) and telephone(signaling) and telephone(Switching). The basic link cluster at the bottom is EXCELLENT.... it's the stuff on the telephone ITSELF that sucks. Rick Boatright 16:19, 1 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Fundamental Laws - sub-stub; needs more context.

Raiffeisen stub; confusing? see the talk page. Lupo

MUD trees. Undeleted, clean. Possible copyright issues. See Talk:MUD trees

Gene duplication + Many of User:Dmb000006's substubs merged by Lexor

February 19

VFD for Anjali - Somesh

Kronhausen, Phyllis & Eberhard, misnamed, lacking content, unwikified, orphan; delete? rename? +sj+

Patty Stonesifer cpvio?; lightly wikified press release

drug addiction is currently undergoing some massive edits.

List of well-known expeditions add to list

List of English competitions add to list! only one item.

List of Internet stations (Radio, TV) needs expansion. Could use some formatting, possibly merging with the (template for) the list of ordinary stations.

KOMPILER - another jargon filled FOLDOC entry

KMODEL - needing context, lacking content

Cash flow statement - unwikified, need fact checking, rewording

Escuela Moderna - sub-stub

Equality of outcome - stub; just a quotation.

Neoseps - + de-stubbed. But there are hundreds of such stubs— just go to Skink and click on any species link! automatically generated.

Lists of cities by country, most with only a coupld of cities: from the break-up of list of cities. Please help expand them.

Ecuador, El_Salvador, the Gambia, Hungary, Jordan, Madagascar, Moldov, Panama, Paraguay, Somalia, Syria, Macedonia, Tunisia, Venezuela, Zambia, Zimbabwe


Ted Husing - not copyvio, but needs wikifying and editing

ISO_3166-2:AR, ISO_3166-2:EC, ISO_3166-2:ES, ISO_3166-2:KG, ISO_3166-2:TJ, ISO_3166-2:TL, ISO_3166-2:UZ, ISO_3166-2:YE

these each need a link to subnational entites

Iraqi opposition - update? stub.

Image retrieval - needs update, wikif.

Flighted pet parrots - who wants to make an article out of this? rename to Pet parrots, link from species-listing page Parrots?

Teddy Boy - looks good; move to PNA if more detail desired.
Edwin M. Wright - +reworded and wikified. 
Celtic Pride - +wiki, not too stubby.  looks ok +sj+

February 16-18

The Real Definition of a Republic Needs renaming? Americocentric, not NPOV. Looks like someone's Political Science homework. Could become a good article but needs work. (thanks to Charles M for recent efforts, looks much better) + redirected to republic

War Crimes committed by Israel during the Al-Aqsa Intifada. + Moved to Accusations against Israel of war crimes during the Al-Aqsa Intifada, and orphaned redirects deleted. still prolly POV; only one major author.

STS-93 - Good start; needs some copyediting

Guillermo Lora - I don't understand all this splitting, and where and why comes Argentina in? It's about some Trotzkyist leader in Bolivia. Lupo

Petrus Plancius - sub-stub Isomorphic

Mark Viduka - fan's POV of the soccer player; needs further npov +sj+ - more nPOV Paul W

Mark Satin - resume style mini-bio. needs npov, reduction, formatting and fleshing out.

Culture of Liechtenstein. This might be accurate. Needs work.

Edwin Thanhouser - stub; =no context

February 17

Light Poetry - link farm; rename/merge with Doggerel? Linked only from Poetry, as a verse form.

Soufflé - pls transwiki this recipe 'how-to' appropriately.

Bokharaby -- merge with Bessarabia?

Guthlac - somebody's homework: an essay containing first person singular and plural. Needs major cleanup by someone familiar with Old English poetry. Lupo

Homer Lea - great bio; needs fact-checking, NPOV, dates filled in

Donny Hamzik - related to Manowar; stub; needs context.

List of Croatians - Most linked pages need copyediting, as do the pages about Croation locations. Needs fact checking by non-anonymous Croatian w'pedians; much anon contrib. Check also for exactly duplicated entries with slightly different spelling or phrases in the title that shd be redirects.

Practical equine psychology needs wikif. +copyvio warning

Fusient Media Ventures - fmt, NPOV if that's (excuse my POV) possible w. WWF wrestling... Denni

Bob Smith -- stub; needs dates.

The Sun Don't Lie - needs album fmt

War All the Time - needs album fmt; NPOV.

Paralus sub-stub. needs context.

Toto (actor) - +wik, detail; Duplicates [[Tot%F2]] -144.138.194.169; still needs work.

Black Tiger Kung Fu -- stub. + wikified, removed POV CYvH

totalitarian democracy +rewritten; submitted for peer review. Denni

Present-day proponents of subordinating horses by force +redirect to Horse breaking; good now.  +sj+
Manowar (band) - +stubbified from copyvio Meelar
The Roxie - ad? - not really; improved recently to full art.  
    lovely.  (still on VfD for a few days) +sj+

February 16 Three ball cascade. A how-to. Should this be on wikibooks?

Practice. Was on VfD. See Talk:Practice

Kay Petre - +wik, still needs fmt

Brockhaus - needs work

1920 in Germany, 1921 in Germany, 1922 in Germany - incredible amounts of info with no subheads and humongous paragraphs; maybe some unacademicizing editing needed, too

Slamball - +much editing, still needs help, esp. on "Teams" section

An American Werewolf in London - someone's personal movie review.

Rally Navigation techniques, tips and tricks. Not encyclopedic  (looks fine to me +sj+)
Instantaneously trained neural networks - stub. obscure AI ref;  +new links for context.

February 11-15

Medical decision making sub-stub; no content; all but orphaned; delete/merge with Decision making. +sj+

Ibo needs deletion/merging w/Igbo for context, clarification. See Talk:Igbo for more.

Probability and statistics substub removed from VfD, with many keep votes. More refs needed.

Mike Herrera, Tom Wisniewski, Yuri Ruley - just bullet lists now

Samuel Renshaw sub-stub. another two words?

ISO 3166-2:AZ, ISO 3166-2:BD, ISO 3166-2:BJ, ISO 3166-2:BY, ISO 3166-2:CN, ISO 3166-2:DE, ISO 3166-2:DO, ISO 3166-2:ER, ISO 3166-2:ET, ISO 3166-2:FI, ISO 3166-2:GE, ISO 3166-2:ID, ISO 3166-2:JP, ISO 3166-2:KZ, ISO 3166-2:LA, ISO 3166-2:MD, ISO 3166-2:MU, ISO 3166-2:MY, ISO 3166-2:NL, ISO 3166-2:NO, ISO 3166-2:SI, ISO 3166-2:TM, ISO 3166-2:TW

Could use links to the related article about the subnational entities, needs ''', possibly an update to the (a bit too uniform) introduction, rm stub notice?

Ignipuncture needs wikif.

1921 Plebiscite in Silesia and Korfanty led violence - title makes no sense, article begins in mid-stream with no context. Needs work

Federal Protective Service substub.

An Enquiry Concerning Human Understanding sub-stub; someone please write a few deep thoughts about this great work.

    I just added a bit about its effect on Kant, and a brief quotation.  Hope you enjoy the change.  

Abdul Wahab Effendi sub-stub; no context

Back-choir sub-stub. needs wikif.

Back-bond EB1911 import; useful definition.
Aino Minako is unencyclopedic.  (seems encyc. to me +sj+)
List of Cantonese-related topics too few items to be list (10-12 now +sj+ 20:43, 2004 Feb 22 (UTC))
Bialgebra not sure how to align images - +sorted, still not a great explanation  (but a great start; move to PNA)
Blackhawk War +redirect to Black Hawk War
Púca - improved/rewritten by Denni; slightly tongue-in-cheek but good.
Zachary Hanson +detail, fmt; a fine art.  can use more wik [links to albums, others in Hanson]; can be moved to PNA.

February 14

Reinhard Heydrich incomplete, should mention Reichssicherheitshauptamt RSHA Andries

xa context? not clear at all -- Mrdice

Register — needs to be made in to a disambiguation page, with separate articles for the different meanings. —Noldoaran (Talk)

Unifying conjecture - Actually just verbosity, candidate for Vfd Charles Matthews

History of perpetual motion machines copyvio issues need to be checked by someone who knows about it more than i do

Intellectual history of time What's encyclopedic in all the tosh? - now had a hard copy edit but needs more - now split in two, with some at time in physics

Bucky Dent - wikify, NPOV +rewrote

Chemical property] mess.

Induction hob. Context please? What's it do?

Marvin Camel - pov

Hollywood cycles - stub. Zoe and I both wonder to what extent this is a term of art. Needs clearer explanation if so.

Ricochet the article seems fine, but it should be moved to Ricochet(Half-Life-Mod) and replaced by a disambig page (see it's "what links here"). We also should check weather Ricochet(Psychology) or something related exists and if not create a stub. I'm too tired for something that complicated Lady Tenar

Jenna Morasca - could be merged with the Survivor article and made into a redirect - Which Survivor article? She could be redirected to three of them. RickK + I added the links, but I think the article should be deleted MK

February 13 Yiyang - every section just one sentence often stating not really special things.

User interface engineering - needs more

Starving Time of 1610 - needs more, or merging somewhere

Thingy.JPG - surely a candidate for instant deletion. seglea + renamed and tidied. + should be edited into main David Icke article.

Siege of Viana - not an article yet

Annunaki - am mess for a gamester to fix. Bmills

Chief Joseph - The timeline is pretty fractured. Jumps from 1863 to 1877, back to 1871, up to 1877, back to 1873, the finally to 1877 and continues as it should. - Rbs

Toledo Reforms - wikify and clarify

Origin of Aztec term to refer to the Mexica - can any pre-Columbian expert see a way of redeeming this? If it can't be improved soon it's a candidate for speedy deletion on grounds of absence of content, etc. seglea

February 12

Surface energy is incomprehensible. Context please! Meelar

Student loan needs info on places other than the US

Culture of Liechtenstein - needs some actual content.

Frankie Laine. A mess. Possibly created by Michael. - it's him --Mrdice 18:46, 2004 Feb 13 (UTC)

Tricycle (World War II) is hard to understand, needs context. Meelar

Walt Disney - too long - no table of contents. + Some work done on subheadings.

Modulo - deserves better + I think I've improved the slang definition. Anything else? - Expanded, but whole redirected modular arithmetic page is now trying to do three things at once

Wizo. Needs work.

Venedes - uh? Can anyone make sense of this? About Wends, no? Good idea to merge and save anything useable about the historic names for them.

Creationism - POV, it reads like an essay rather than an encyclopedia article. Need help. silsor

February 11

American frontier - raw text

Nose flute - raw text

Basil Brooke is a stub. Someone with Irish political history? Meelar

Chick Flick - POV list

Joseph Bologna - sub-stub. Bmills]

Psyduck - another pokemon sub-stub. Bmills

SMDS - sub stub. Bmills

Arbok - pokemon sub-stub. Bmills

Afghan Turkestan - very dated 1911. Bmills

Harold P. Brown sub-stub

Lake Como needs English-language usage, esp. last 'graph seemingly about using idioms that have no English equivalent i can think of.

Vegan (creature) existence/importance, nonsense?

  • Existence - yes, fictional as noted in article; importance - subjective, but I promise this is not self-promotional. A link to this entry has been replaced in the entry vegan in a more reasonable context.

February 6-10

Important Graphing Equations - naive math. Delete ?

LucasVarity - needs fmt, wikis, etc. maybe NPOVing. Bmills

Fartown - place description with no context, not even a country -- added some context--Mishac 04:16, 17 Feb 2004 (UTC)

Charles Herbert Allen - MoS - wikify. --MoS'ed and wikified. Gentgeen 08:52, 16 Feb 2004 (UTC)

Houston, Texas - excessively long, too many photos, takes entirely too long to load, too many long paragraphs that are unwikified. Needs to be broken up into multiple pages

February 9

Arabic literature only a bibliography of 2 books

Sequence points in Control flow. First edit I've made. I think it's in roughly the right place but needs a bit more work.

George Murdoch - lacking context, accurary questioned on talk page

Parti Populaire des Putes - sub stub Bmills

Ukrainian Greek Catholic Church - copied from somewhere? Needs wikifying.

Suicide attack - substub/dict. def Mrwojo

February 8

Sanjay Kumar - needs to be prosified

Andrea di Robilant - substub, unwikified

Real analysis, calculus - is a merge in order?

you're joking, right? - I don't claim to remember, but one of them says it's a name for the other. Jerzy - not a good idea, very different perspectives and likely readers Charles Matthews

Nagpur - one sentence +edit +wiki Mishac

Star Wars and the theory of plagiarism can someone think of a less loaded name for this page - how about "Sources that inspired Star Wars"

Michael Corris just a bibliography

February 7

Aranes - was created as advertising vehicle for aranes.com, advert has been removed. Is this a real place?

National Revolutionary Army - sub-stub, possibly factually inaccurate

Furbo - real place, but needs a little work

List of music videos by year - consensus on VfD not to delete, but needs massive cleanup + listified and wikified; now we need ideas on how best to organize and present. See Talk:List of music videos by year

Aquemini needs NPOVing from a hip hop fan.

were and wight both seemed trivial and/or nonsense to me. I have redirected wight to Isle of Wight, as any content it had seemed to duplicate material there; I propose to delete were in short order if no-one objects. + no obvious nonsense; copied the overwritten text of wight to Talk:Isle of Wight, in case it might inspire an addition to the corresponding article.

Battle of Jutland was Jellico considered a hero? needs overview section

image:Shuttle-enterprise.jpg This is actually a pic of Space Shuttle Endeavour. Could someone who knows anything about images rename it and find/fix all uses of it? -Move of images is not (yet?) possible, so need to re-upload with correct name.


Sandia National Laboratories - formatting +was a copyvio, rewritten into stub

February 6 Traditional medicine - essay needs complete overhaul Jwrosenzweig 22:50, 6 Feb 2004 (UTC)

Cost management, internal control, management accounting, maybe others (these are the only ones by User:81.248.9.34-- all selfpromotion added to normal article. a more qualified economist than I can weed out the dross, but as is it's BAD. -Sean 09:00, 6 Feb 2004 (UTC)

Computer-aided engineering Automated translation, probably from some website. Unreadable, unless you already know what it is. Mikkalai + rewritten; there's surely more to say. Catherine

Tai Chi Chuan needs NPOVing Meelar

KiddChris non wikified, accuracy check from someone in US? + for a radio personality he doesn't get very many Google hits [1]

February 4-5

Divine retribution - looks irredeemably awful from any point of view I can think of seglea

Lap joint - no text, just an svg file. (Do we even use svg here?) SVG is proposed. Anyway, this article is less than a day old. Give it some time.

Graffiti - is about graffiti art--merge w/graffiti art--and needs info on graffiti as problem; Graffiti art needs serious edit Elf

Ferdinando Provesi - copyedit, fact checking

Colligative properties needs rewrite for non-specialist +de-experted, now needs expansion ike9898 02:29, Feb 6, 2004 (UTC)

Impressment needs spelling, wikification, fact checking.

Propafenone - context needed

Zlotow - no article, just facts

Big Buddha - needs work

All for one, and one for all - keep or not to keep? Messy non wiki, saying.

Artistic computer game modification - mess

Tuna - embarrassingly stubby article. Tuna are not warm-blooded.

Pepsi ONE needs much more +some info about the artificial sweeter usedike9898

Negative resistance -- see my comment in talk:Negative resistance

School discipline -- hugely POV article, takes a U.S. pro-authority position - It's a copy straight from here - Move to Wikipedia:Possible copyright infringements then? - not copyvio, source states it is public domain - Started a new Stub, linked to discipline and put a NPOV message and statement about source all at top of article. Already in Wikipedia:Pages needing attention. kiwiinapanic

February 4 Eidolon -- principal deity of the twentieth century? Has anyone heard of this? - So last-century!

Santurce Crabbers (basketball) - nasty stub.

Zlotow County - needs wikification etc

Kinsky-horse - reads like a poor babelfish translation of de:Kinsky-Pferd (as do all the "Kinsky" articles). Needs someone fluent in German and English horse-speak! Lupo Slightly upgraded, but still needs work! +Sj+

Molly Brown House -sub stub

Walking like an Egyptian - fast-track for deletion? - VfD, by all means!!

Neuromodulators - needs some context. Bmills

Ugly Rumours - needs a complete rewrite. Bmills - Spoof text and image removed. User:Tony The Tiger added both of these, as well as adding nonsense to Tony Blair. All his edits need to be checked. Pete/Pcb21 (talk)

Maltese Nobility needs some serious formatting by someone who is good at that (ie, not me :-) ). As it looks copypasted, it might also need copyright-checking, but note that the original contributor seems to be the owner of www.maltagenealogy.com.

The Auteurs - british band. The article is more about Luke Haines, their front man... Lupo

Watch out for self promotion by 66.30.30.130. He's adding his own original research to articles.

Greek lexicon - written in first person, article includes comments, table needs alphabetization, additional data needs integration into table with greek translation, etc., etc...

Harold P. Brown - stub

Stimorol - mini-stub

Ancient philosophy - crap from long ago

February 1-3

Sport is a wordy, meandering contemplation of the concept. Needs sharper focus.

Communications management is an essay. Meelar

Janez Puhar needs context for what he did. Meelar

Video game industry practices. Unwikified

February 2 Aso Kumiko - just a list of awards +birthdate, filmography

Lonnie Jordan - fix or delete

Nazi human experimentation - need wikification and copyedit

Special:Contributions/130.88.96.65 - many POV edits related to Islam

Tim Girvin - vanity page? 300-some Google hits. Linked from The Evergreen State College. According to own website he was responsible for the design of the electronic version of EB. Explain importance or VfD.

February 1

Ray Stevens Collector's Series - is there more to this than just a track listing?

François-Michel Gonnot - expand, is he important?

Michael Corris - just references

Count Kinsky, Elena Ceausescu, Kinsky - work on English

Riot control -- NPOV'ed it ... but needs more; Needs Law enforcement informtaion ... JDR

air travel is a poor thing, which should either be dumped or properly linked to the innumerable places it could link to. seglea

Agnes Grey - stub at best

Wikipedia:Ignored feature requests - archiving needed

January 26-31

Bajirao needs NPOVing and wikifying.

Sportpalast speech - source text, no context

Gilad Sharon is a stub. Meelar

Federal Standard 1037C. Too many links to pages that shouldn't be created.

Bretton Woods. Duplicate article/ needs to be a disambig page. See Talk:Bretton Woods

Tiger Electronics little more than a picture

Bev Harris Does Harris warrant an article? Needs formatting help.

January 30

DNA binding protein list of 4 wikilinks

Blue-collar crime unwikified substub, could be interesting if well written Fabiform

Medieval warfare - good structure, no meat.

29 January

List of comic and cartoon characters. Needs merging. See talk page.

Hetto-Iberian - can someone verify that this (or its related topics) is a theory held by someone other than a single Wikipedia contributor? llywrch

28 January

Biodynamic Agriculture - stub

Angelwings and Finerthings - selfpromotion?

List of civic, fraternal, service, and professional organizations - U.S.-centric. See the talk page. - Scooter

27 January

Ooststellingwerf, Stein, Netherlands, Elsloo, Train stations in the Netherlands - Both Ooststellingwerf and Stein (municipalities in the Netherlands) link to Elsloo as a town located within them. Elsloo redirects to Stein. Meanwhile, Train stations in the Netherlands also links to Elsloo, but which one? Can someone sort this out?

Turned Elsloo into a disambiguation page. Elsloo, Limburg and Elsloo, Friesland are redirects to their municipalities until someone decides to add articles for them. Linked Train stations in the Netherlands to Elsloo, Limburg (the station is called Beek-Elsloo, and Beek is also in Limburg). -- Kimiko 13:25, 2 Mar 2004 (UTC)

26 January

DXM - I've been working on this article significantly, it probably needs a NPOV edit from someone with less (clears throat) personal interest in the subject - we do NOT want to sound like WP is advocating abuse of DXM... Pakaran.

Beaumont Community, Oliver Close - expand? merge into Leyton?

Sant Cassia - need copyedit and enlargement

Reliability testing - needs lots of help

Inxire iO - reads like a sales brochure

January 20-25

Lagardere Active - sub stub

Conscientiology - religion?, science?, VfD? also Waldo Vieira, the inventor.

Brian Harvey - could use some help +stubbed, needs more content.

Luapula - Needs work

Wikipedia:Things to be moved to Wiktionary someone should transwiki all the entries, and the page can be redirected/deleted

January 24 The International Journal of Psychiatry - substub

Inpatient - dictionary

Ishy Bilady - a national anthem? orphaned and no google hits - United Arab Emirates links

23 January

Cosmetology - not very encyclopediac

Lachrymatory - stub. Bmills

Constitution of 1782 - about the Irish parliament - should it be? + All that links to it is about Irish history. If there's another 1782 Constitution, a disambig page can be made if needed. (Smerdis of Tlön)

Lumis and Umbra - needs lots of help. +done, but maybe vfd?

22 January 2004 The Breetles - formatting + are they famous? -435 google hits

No 4th Wall to Break - Web comic nobody's heard of. (I thought this had already been deleted; maybe it's back)

  • Comic is actually quite well known. As can be seen by the large number of information based refinments. -- Dystopian Rhetoric

Cristi Minculescu picture needs shrinking (don't know how myself) Fabiform

Sherwin Wine, Judith Seid - not about the subject

Jason Reso - is the article about the same person? anyone know prof. wrestling?

Saint Patrick's Battalion - duplicate article inserted; needs merging.

21 January 2004

Cf-pollable - needs clarifying

Asphodelus - just a taxobox

Disability rights movement - very stubby stub.

20 January 2004

User:Craigbutz has a long list of pages vocational students are working on -- many have been listed on VFD, most need serious help. All are linked from his user page. - Davodd

List of Puerto Rican comedians 2 items

Institute of Cetacean Research - Needs work

Basava - needs context, wikification

Gold code - needs context.

Shirley Q. Liquor - was on VfD. See talk page.

LEFTOVERS

The following are sub-stubs:

The following are in need of formatting/wikilinking/encyclopedia-friendly language:

Other problems (should probably go to Wikipedia:Pages needing attention when removed):