Talk:DNA/Archive 12

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I dont know if people are just arguing with me for the sake of argument but there is no more procedure for posting on this page (post about any subject wherever you want in whatever section you want). Bensaccount 01:19, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

I think this talk page should be linked to from the "criticism of Wikipedia" page. It would only be NPOV to note that the traditional editing process becomes less and less viable as more and more users attempt to work on a page. Lirath Q. Pynnor

Should we include incorrect phrases if they are common?

As many sources refer to DNA as the "genetic code of life" or as something which contains, transmits, or carries the "genetic code of life" -- I feel that phrase should be part of this article. Furthermore, it should be just as prominently displayed as "molecule of heredity,"; since such "alternate names" are traditionally placed within the first paragraph -- that is where "genetic code of life" should be placed. Lirath Q. Pynnor

This should not be done because:

You are only adding these phrases because you think they are common.
"Genetic code of life" is very abstract and can refer to much more than DNA.
"Molecule of heredity" is not an alternate name for DNA. It is a vague misinterperetation at best. "Molecule of heredity" should be a redirect to heredity because the typer has made a mistake (there is no such molecule). Bensaccount 22:40, 8 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Regardless of your personal pov, the phrase "genetic code of life" is used by a significant number of textbooks, academics, celebrities, television programmes, and websites. Lirath Q. Pynnor

You just proved point number 1 above. Bensaccount 01:33, 9 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Are you disputing that the phrase is used? Lirath Q. Pynnor

No im saying you are only adding the phrase because you think its commonly used. This doesn't make a phrase correct. Ex: Lakes and oceans are blue because they reflect the blue sky (not true). Bensaccount 04:10, 9 Mar 2004 (UTC)

It is your personal POV that the phrase is incorrect. People do use the phrase in reference to DNA; thus, the article should include it. Lirath Q. Pynnor

What you just said was basically: The phrase is correct because it is common (AGAIN). (and yes my POV is to disagree with you because of the 3 reasons above). Bensaccount 16:28, 9 Mar 2004 (UTC)

No, I never said the phrase was correct. What I said is that the phrase is sufficiently common, and thus the article must include it. You appear unaware that the Wikipedia maintains a policy of not determining what is and isn't correct -- we try to include all points of view. Lirath Q. Pynnor

It is acceptable to include all points of view when the correct one is in doubt. It is not acceptable to include points of view that have irrefutably been proven incorrect. Bensaccount 23:06, 9 Mar 2004 (UTC)

It does not matter whether, or not, the phrases are correct. Regardless, since they are used, they must be included here. Lirath Q. Pynnor

You think we should include incorrect phrases? How about calling it deoxynucleic acid its also a common mistake. Bensaccount 23:55, 9 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Absolutely. As you can see here [1] Hartnell College has intentionally used the term "deoxynucleic acid" in reference to DNA. It is our job to list and report all such usages, regardless of whether we personally believe they are technically appropriate. Naturally, you should feel more than free to write in the article why the term might be considered inappropriate -- however, I am merely asserting that the terms should be mentioned as part of the article. If you don't believe that this is standard wikipedia policy, you might wish to ask about this at the mailing list.Lirath Q. Pynnor

Ok I can understand how it could be useful to include incorrect items as long as they are:

Not included in the introduction as a correct description.
Corrected (or at least classified as incorrect).

Therefore I propose creating a section entitled Common mistakes or somesuch name.Bensaccount 02:03, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

That would not be acceptable because it is our personal opinion that it is a mistake to use these terms. We must maintain an objective viewpoint. It would be appropriate to state, "Some people describe DNA as the "genetic code of life"; however, others object to this term because of..." Lirath Q. Pynnor

If you must include a line like "Some people describe DNA as "deoxynucleic acid" because of a typo, however, everyone who knows the real name of DNA object to this term because it is a mistake." it would go in the section entitled common mistakes. There is no reason to put this in the intro. Bensaccount 15:52, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Your problem is that you can't accept something as being a fact unless it is commonly accepted. This is absurd. How would you describe even the simplest things like the shape of a square? "Some people describe the shape of a square as square; however, others object to this term because they think a square is a circle. In conclusion, a square may be shaped like a square or a circle." Bensaccount 16:03, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Even if more people think a square is a circle, it remains a square, so an article about a sqare shouldn't say that people think a square is a circle, it should say that a square is a square. (A completely different article could address the popular opinion that a square is a circle). Bensaccount 16:07, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

A square is not a circle because more people think it is a circle. A square is still a square. DO NOT ARGUE THIS POINT!. (It will make me very angry).

It is the duty of every article about something real (encyclopedia or not) to report what is fact. Anything otherwise is a form of a lie. Bensaccount 16:15, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Allow me to simplify for everyone:

Everytime you write something, you know if you are telling the truth or lying. If you dont, you shouldn't be writing about it, you should be reading about it. There are times when lying is acceptable. This is not one of them. Popular opinion plays no part in this. Bensaccount 16:35, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

If that were true then people who should be doing research and trying to figure things out among themselves would be stuck reading books instead of talking/writing to each other. People may know when they are lying, but many times people say incorrect things without realizing that they contain a hidden flaw. Newton wasn't lying when he wrote this Principia. P0M 06:16, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

How many times must I repeat that I am not asserting that DNA is properly known as deoxynucleic acid or that it is properly described as the "genetic code of life". My sole assertion is that a significant number of people do refer to it as such; and thus, the article must report it in accordance with the basic guidelines of the wikipedia.
- Deoxynucleic acid is not a typo, there are people who deliberately use that term. The information should be at the beginning of the article, because in all articles we attempt to list alternate names/nicknames/metaphors at the beginning.
- As you stated, our goal is report what is fact. It is fact that people refer to DNA as deoxynucleic acid and as the "genetic code of life". Thus, we must report it. Lirath Q. Pynnor

So you think this article should not be about DNA but rather about what has been commonly said about DNA? If this is the article you are looking for, you are on the wrong page. Go edit some page like "What Watson and crick have said about DNA" or "What people who can't spell have said about DNA" Bensaccount 23:48, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

I suggest you review the numerous pages on what sort of information the wikipeda wishes to include. Lirath Q. Pynnor

This article is about DNA not about what has been commonly said about DNA. Bensaccount 00:36, 11 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Summary

Should we include incorrect phrases if they are common?

No we should try and get rid of or correct incorrect phrases.
Being common is not a reason for inclusion; this article is about DNA not about what has been commonly said about DNA. Bensaccount 21:49, 13 Mar 2004 (UTC)

The "genetic code of life" and "deoxynucleic acid" and "molecule of heredity"

Allow me to clarify something for you, Bensaccount. Those of us who have been trying to make progress on this passage already know the realive merits and flaws with this phrase (refer to the archives). I, for one, would prefer if it wasn't used but it was included as a compromise to Lir. Stewart Adcock 17:18, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[Peak:] It is no longer clear which of the three phrases Stewart was referring to, but please note that there was never any compromise with Lir regarding the use of "genetic code of life" as a description of (or alternative name for) DNA in the preamble. Perhaps Stewart is referring to the fact that there was at one point a proposal that included the phrase in the preamble, but it was not as an alternative name. Peak 15:13, 17 Mar 2004 (UTC)

We shouldn't lie to compromise with Lir. Bensaccount 17:51, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[P0M:] At this point I'm not clear which phrase is "this phrase." When people like the writer at Hartnell make a mistake and write "deoxyribonucleic" as "deosribbonocleric" ;-) or whatever, the usual way to to deal with it, if we are required to quote the mistaken passage for some reason, is to follow the error with the Latin word "sic" in parentheses. Ordinarily there would be no reason to catalog every misspelling and beginner's mistake in an article devoted to explaining something.

[P0M:] If we are now actually talking about the "genetic code of life", then I can happily agree with both Lir and Bensaccount. The idea of a "hereditary code-script" has historical importance because it appeared in a seminal book by a physicist, Schrödinger, that got the bio-chemical researchers on the right track. So the idea has to be in the article at the appropriate point. That being said, I started objecting to several things in the introduction a very long time ago (in subjective time) and most of what I said was scrambled in the recent cataclysms. One of the things that I did not like in the introductory passage was this very phrase "genetic code of life". I object to it because it is not the most apposite way to explain what is going on. Now you are probably going to ask me why I have not provided a more apposite way and I will be frank and tell you that I have been discouraged from doing so in part because of the intrinsic difficulty of the task and in part because of the intense partisan attitude that even attempts to provide "a gentle response" have sometimes met on this talk page. P0M 18:42, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Summary

Deoxynucleic acid - This is a common incorrect phrase therefore it should be corrected before inclusion (see above).
~~Molecule of heredity~~"hereditary code-script" - Appeared in a seminal book by a physicist, Schrödinger, that got the bio-chemical researchers on the right track. Therefore should be included in the history subsection.
Genetic code of life - This is a common phrase, but phrases such as "DNA is the genetic code of life" are both incorrect (see Genetic code) and relatively uncommon (see archives for empirical evidence). Thus the preamble could in principle include the phrase, but not as a synonym or characterization of DNA.

The Two-Thirds Majority Version

A consensus-building process has taken place. A two-thirds majority agreed to the version which then became the posted version from 14 February to 6 March, as well as at various times before and since those dates:

Deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA) is a nucleic acid which carries genetic instructions for the biological development of all cellular forms of life and many viruses. DNA is sometimes referred to as the molecule of heredity as it is inherited and used to propagate traits. During reproduction, it is replicated and transmitted to offspring.

In bacteria and other simple cell organisms, DNA is distributed more or less throughout the cell. In the complex cells that make up plants, animals and in other multi-celled organisms, most of the DNA is found in the chromosomes, which are located in the cell nucleus. The energy generating organelles known as chloroplasts and mitochondria also carry DNA, as do many viruses.

Comments on this version

I do not think there is a hurry. There would be a hurry if the current version was factually wrong, or pov. This is not the case. So, rather, let's try to focus on the brand new version :-) FirmLittleFluffyThing

{Peak to Anthere:] Actually, the first sentence is partly incorrect, or at least misleading, because of the use of the word "primary". This was discussed earlier on this Talk page, and my recollection is that this was one of the main reasons for seeking consensus on an improved version. (Ultimately, this led to the "near-consensus version" that you are treating so unkindly.) Here is an extract from Talk:DNA/arhive_2#5:

isolated chromosomes (metaphase) approx. 15% DNA, 12% RNA 70% protein

... There is indeed lots of gunk to hold the chromosomes together. Your source is almost certianly correct. Stewart Adcock

Pros and Cons

DNA is not introduced quickly so that it can be subcatagorized throughout the article. (They try and cover too many aspects). Bensaccount
- This asserts that the preamble fails to introduce DNA quickly enough, but that could be said of any preamble to a complex topic. User: Peak
  - Ok comment disproved. Bensaccount
Once again, genetic instuction is too vague. (see above). Bensaccount
- This is a vague assertion that something else is vague. User: Peak
  - Ok comment disproved. Bensaccount
Developmental biology has to do with the development of organisms. DNA is in no way limited to this. It codes for ALL the structure and functions of organisms. Bensaccount
- is misdirected criticism as the first sentence specifically mentions viruses. User: Peak
  - That is not what I mean - follow the link to developmental biology. Bensaccount
"Molecule of heredity" is not an alternate name for DNA. It is a vague misinterperetation at best. "Molecule of heredity" should be a redirect to heredity because the typer has made a mistake (there is no such molecule). Bensaccount 22:40, 8 Mar 2004 (UTC)
- is irrelevant as there is no claim that the phrase is an "alternate name." User: Peak
  - See updated problems with molecule of heredity above. Bensaccount
The central dogma of cell biology (DNA replication, transcription, translation) is not even mentioned (although part of it is). Bensaccount
- asserts that the "central dogma" should be mentioned in the preamble, but there are many good reasons for not doing so. Basically it introduces a whole "can of worms" where it is least needed. (Like most dogmas, the (original) central dogma proved wrong.) Peak 05:54, 16 Mar 2004 (UTC)
  - Ok dont do the dogma - comment disproved. Bensaccount

In the second paragraph DNA is dichotomized into prokaryotes and eukaryotes. If you are going to dichotomize DNA do it in the subcatagories, not the intro.Bensaccount 16:12, 9 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[Peak:] DNA is not dichotomized in the second paragraph.Peak 05:54, 16 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Yes it is. If not prok vs. euk, then in as location. Bensaccount

All the comments that were disproved were left out of the propositions as of 10/03

Other

Also if you are going to propose a whole new intro, first you have to prove there is something wrong with the old into. I have done this above (archive 9) and suggested a new intro based on the problems and achievements of the old intro. (This is my version in the proposals as of 10/03)

Who was involved in this vote? Bensaccount 22:01, 13 Mar 2004 (UTC)

It is in the archive Bensaccount. FirmLittleFluffyThing

All the comments that were disproved were left out of the propositions as of 10/03

The propositions as of 10/03

The original version (on the page now) was replaced by the near consensus version from above. This vesrion has been broken up into its consecutive paragraphs and they are listed with the other suggestions below.

First paragraph

The first paragraph should be a definition. (Wikipedia:Define_and_describe)

Option0A (in case some of you forgot, this is the "near-consensus" version :-))
Deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA) is a nucleic acid which carries genetic instructions for the biological development of all cellular forms of life and many viruses. DNA is sometimes referred to as the molecule of heredity as it is inherited and used to propagate traits. During reproduction, it is replicated and transmitted to offspring.

- :Lack of clarity around propagate traits (see slru)

It seems perfectly clear to me. I'm not adverse to someone suggesting an alternative wording though. Stewart Adcock

[Peak:] I agree with Stewart. Perhaps Slru would care to make a proposal?Peak 05:33, 18 Mar 2004 (UTC)

The sentence is misleading (same as heredity above). Bensaccount 22:23, 13 Mar 2004 (UTC)

- : "Biological development" is only a fraction of what DNA codes for.

[Peak:] Perhaps, but this part of the paragraph is highlighting what makes DNA especially interesting and important.

- : "Molecule of heredity" is misleading (see above)

[Peak:] I have looked "above" and do not see why you consider the phrase misleading. Slru's concern is with the "propagation of traits". The only other concern I have seen expressed is that sentences such as "DNA has been called the molecule of heredity" could be construed to imply that the double-helical form of DNA is a single molecule, which, from a certain POV, it is not. However, the sentence does not say anything about the double helix, and any confusion there may be about how to count molecules of DNA is dealt with in the body of DNA.

- : DNA replication is less than 1/3 of the role of DNA. If you include it you should include the central dogma first.

[Peak:] Mentioning "biological development" adequately covers the "central dogma" -- please try to think of "biological development" in a broad sense. However, if you still feel that the combination of "biological development" and "reproduction" is missing something important, then perhaps you could state what it is at the same level of abstraction, and thereby improve this version.Peak 05:33, 18 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Option 0S (avoid complications involving "traits" to address Slru's concerns)

Deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA) is a nucleic acid which carries the genetic instructions for the biological development of all cellular forms of life and many viruses. DNA is sometimes referred to as the molecule of heredity as it is inherited and forms the basis of the inheritance of genetically determined characteristics. During reproduction, parental DNA is replicated and transmitted to offspring.

Option 1A
Deoxyribonucleic acid (abbreviated DNA) is a macromolecule that encodes the structure and functions of a cell. This biological information is heritable, hence the common phrase molecule of heredity. DNA can also be found in viruses.

- : "Molecule of heredity" is not a clear formulation and rather mass media information (see pom)

I agree. But, at least that sentence isn't wrong. Stewart Adcock

The sentence is misleading. It should be moved to the history subsection (see above). Bensaccount 22:23, 13 Mar 2004 (UTC)

- : "Biological information" is unclear.

- : technically, it does not encode the structure and functions of a cell; it encodes the structure of proteins for enzymes that are vital to the structure and function of cells and organs. I think this is a very important and too often misunderstood/oversimplified distinction that gives people a misleading view of how inherited traits work. Slrubenstein

+ : I think the link macromolecule is important

Why? Stewart Adcock

It is good to associate DNA with what it is (a macromolecule). More specific would be to say its a nucleic acid. Bensaccount 00:52, 11 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Please tell me if I'm wrong, but haven't we been over this before? My prefered choice has been nucleic acid for a while. Stewart Adcock 00:59, 11 Mar 2004 (UTC) (In fact, Nucleic acid was selected in majority version of the intro. Stewart Adcock 01:39, 11 Mar 2004 (UTC))

~~Option 2A~~

Option 3A
Deoxyribonucleic acid (abbreviated DNA) is a macromolecule that encodes the structure and functions of a cell. It is the first component in the central dogma of molecular biology (DNA → RNA → protein). DNA can also be found in other entities such as viruses.

- : the dogma is not something that is meaningfull to readers as a first sight on the topic. It should be in the body of the article itself

I agree. It belongs here no more than "molecule of heredity" does. The term "dogma" is misleading anyway. When Crick first formulated the idea back in the late 50s, he meant "dogma" as meaning "with no reasonable evidence". Luckily, most people read it as meaning "doctrine" instead. If, bensaccount, you think that it is important to introduce the central dogma in the preamble, then a third paragraph following this is probably the best place to do it.Stewart Adcock

If you don't want the central dogma in the definition I wont argue but you should not include ANY functions of DNA to be consistant. Bensaccount

- : The first sentence mentions cells but not viruses, and is therefore misleading. The first sentence should not be a half-truth.

- : What does it mean to say that something "encodes the structure and function" of something else? It sounds more like metaphysics than science. The use of the word "function" here is particularly problematic, especially in a preamble.

I Disagree function and stucture are very simple words for association and arent metaphysical. Bensaccount 18:40, 17 Mar 2004 (UTC)

technically, it does not encode the structure and functions of a cell; it encodes the structure of proteins for enzymes that are vital to the structure and function of cells and organs. I think this is a very important and too often misunderstood/oversimplified distinction that gives people a misleading view of how inherited traits work. Slrubenstein

- : The phrase "central dogma" introduces too many complexities. To someone who does not already know a lot about DNA, it conveys no specific information, and is more likely to convey vague ideas about religious dogma, or fallacious claims to absolute truth. (The primary meaning of dogma is a "doctrine or a corpus of doctrines relating to matters such as morality and faith, set forth in an authoritative manner by a church." The secondary meaning has to do with "absolute truth".) The sequence DNA->RNA->protein is important but check out the article Central dogma.

Unrelated comments moved to archive 8

Option 4A

Deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA or deoxynucleic acid) is a nucleic acid that carries genetic "instructions" which play a significant role during the biological development of all cellular forms of life, and many viruses; it is, thus, sometimes said to metaphorically be the "genetic code of life". DNA is also referred to as the "molecule of heredity" as it is inherited and used to propagate traits -- during reproduction, it is replicated and transmitted to offspring. This macromolecule encodes the structure and functions of cells; it is the first component of the central dogma of molecular biology.

- :Genetic instruction again

- :Developmental biology again

- :"genetic code of life" is a metaphor for what? (unclear, see above)

- :molecule of heredity again

- :heredity and propagation of traits involves meiosis, genetics (mendels laws etc), the expression of traits (the central dogma) and so much more. DNA is just a nucleic acid.

- :structure and function again

Option 5A (combines pros of above without cons)
Deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA) is a nucleic acid. It encodes the structure and functions of an organism. DNA can be found in all cells and many viruses.

- :structure and function again. Technically, it does not encode the structure and functions of a cell; it encodes the structure of proteins for enzymes that are vital to the structure and function of cells and organs. I think this is a very important and too often misunderstood/oversimplified distinction that gives people a misleading view of how inherited traits work. Slrubenstein

Option 6A (Slrubenstein)
Deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA) is the primary chemical component of chromosomes and is the material of which genes are made. It is sometimes called the "molecule of heredity," because parents transmit copied portions of their own DNA to offspring during reproduction, and because these copied portions play a crucial role in the propogation of traits from one generation to the next.

Second paragraph

(Description?)

Option0B (This is the "near-consensus version of the second paragraph)
In bacteria and other simple cell organisms, DNA is distributed more or less throughout the cell. In the complex cells that make up plants, animals and in other multi-celled organisms, most of the DNA is found in the chromosomes, which are located in the cell nucleus. The energy generating organelles known as chloroplasts and mitochondria also carry DNA, as do many viruses.

- : This paragraph is an attempt to dichotomize prokaryotes and eukaryotes. It should be put into the subheadings. Bensaccount 18:01, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

I don't believe that this paragraph is making such an attempt. It is stating the cellular locations of the DNA which is, of course, distinct accoss these cell types. Stewart Adcock 22:40, 10 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Well then it should go into the Location subheading. Bensaccount 22:33, 13 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[Peak to Bensaccount:] As you yourself pointed out, a preamble is supposed to "define and describe". This paragraph provides a brief but comprehensive description of where DNA can be found in living things, and implicitly makes two important points: it is found everywhere except in some viruses; and it is not just in chromosomes. This paragraph complements the first one, so that together, they provide a roadmap for the remainder of the article. Peak 06:44, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Personal attacks moved to archive 8

propogation of traits

I know people have been doing a great job, but we still need to do something about "because they propagate their traits by doing so." It is inaccurate in part because DNA doesn't exactly "do" things, and because the contribution of DNA to the propogation of traits, however significant, is not total; the propogation of traits involves other things. Slrubenstein

I am not sure, but think the first two paragraphs may be frozen. So I have reverted my own change to the first paragraph. But I hope people will discuss this issue (which I brought up about ten days ago) so we can resolve it, Slrubenstein

You won't see any discussion here unless you join me in demanding that the mediation committee do something. Lirath Q. Pynnor

I din't think I have ever demanded anything, as a contributor to Wikipidia, and this makes me uncomfortable. Are you saying that no one will discuss my ideas because they don't value my ideas? Well, I'm not sure that is true (but I don't mean to sound egotistical), but really, if no one else here thinks my point is valid, that's that. Slrubenstein

We dont need a mediation comittee. We are doing fine. Bensaccount 22:05, 17 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Bensaccount is right. You are doing fine Lir. Please make new propositions, tweak already existing one, and just generally give your opinion. Given the complexity of the issue (multiplicity of contencious points, number of options...), it is probably much wiser to take of the whole issue here, on this talk page.

Please Slru, do not feel like your ideas are no valid just because Lir ask for mediation. Anyway, a mediator does not take side, nor give more value to one option than to another.

Lir, we are currently discussing together to see who could take care of your requests, and I think we are on the way to have specifically someone to discuss with you. Meanwhile, you are all doing fine here.

And Lir, thanks with regards to Erik matter :-) FirmLittleFluffyThing 18:38, 18 Mar 2004 (UTC)

CURRENT PROPOSITIONS (POINT FORM)

These are the current propositions cut up into stand alone points. The second paragraph has not been included as of yet.

The points have been organized according to topic. Bensaccount 19:52, 19 Mar 2004 (UTC)

First paragraph

(The first paragraph is a definition (simple association).)

DNA is a nucleic acid.
DNA is a macromolecule.
DNA is the primary chemical component of chromosomes.
DNA is the material of which genes are made.

DNA can be found in all cellular forms of life and many viruses.
DNA can be found in cells and viruses.
DNA can be found in cells and also in other entities such as viruses.
DNA can be found in all cells and many viruses.

DNA carries genetic instructions for biological development.
DNA encodes the structure and functions of a cell.
DNA carries genetic instructions which play a significant role during biological development.
DNA encodes the structure and functions of an organism.

DNA cointains biological information which is heritable, hence the common phrase molecule of heredity.
DNA is sometimes referred to as the molecule of heredity as it is inherited and used to propagate traits.
DNA is also referred to as the molecule of heredity, as it is inherited and used to propagate traits.
DNA is sometimes called the "molecule of heredity," because parents transmit copied portions of their own DNA to offspring during reproduction, and because these copied portions play a crucial role in the propogation of traits from one generation to the next.

During reproduction, DNA is replicated and transmitted to offspring.

DNA is the first component in the central dogma of molecular biology (DNA → RNA → protein).
DNA is the first component of the central dogma of molecular biology.

DNA is, sometimes said to metaphorically be the genetic code of life.

Article location

I would like to re-open the discussion of moving the content of this article to the title "Deoxyribonucleic acid", as Ben has suggested. The title "DNA" will redirect to "Deoxyribonucleic acid", so no links will be broken; we can leave the disambiguation note at the top of the article, in the same format as the disambiguation note at the top of Artificial intelligence. If no one objects, I will make the move in a day. -- Cyan 19:39, 14 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Except since DNA is the most common name used to refer to this, that move would be a violation of the naming conventions. Lirath Q. Pynnor

True, but that's not necessarily a bad thing; exceptions are permitted when people agree to them. I put forth the suggestion that the setup for the AI set of pages would also be appropriate here; if you (or anyone) do not agree to the move, please state so clearly, and I will not move the article. -- Cyan 21:48, 14 Mar 2004 (UTC)

I think I just did state so clearly. Furthermore, DNA is also known as deoxynucleic acid (also DNA), so moving would be a violation of NPOV as well as the naming conventions. Lirath Q. Pynnor

[P0M:] Are you sure? Check for the two words in Google. They frequently occur in the same article, e.g., in list of chemicals preparations for sale, and appear to have different meanings. For instance, check out [[2]] P0M 04:20, 15 Mar 2004 (UTC)

A number of sources use deoxynucleic instead of deoxyribonucleic. Lirath Q. Pynnor

[P0M:] I think we need a chemist to elucidate the difference between the two terms. P0M 06:04, 15 Mar 2004 (UTC)

There are already two sections of this talk page dedicated to this subject, do we really need another? Bensaccount 15:45, 15 Mar 2004 (UTC)

It doesn't really matter, since the most common term to refer to this is DNA; which is where the article should be. Lirath Q. Pynnor

Agreed. (Yikes.) There are many articles at XYZZY where XYZZY technically has many other meanings. Peak 07:12, 15 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[P0M:] If two different words having two different meanings are both getting abbreviated "DNA" then that would argue for using the appropriate word. It's odd that Watson and Crick used different words in two articles on "DNA" in the same year. Surely there are chemists contributing to this discussion who can explain why different terms are used. Whatever is going on, it seems not to be a simple misspelling. P0M 06:53, 15 Mar 2004 (UTC)

(As a chemist). "deoxyribonucleic acid" is DNA. "deoxynucleic acid" is something different (doesn't have the ribose sugar) but unfortunately, the substitution of "deoxynucleic" for "deoxyribonucleic" is a common typo. We really shouldn't encourage use of a term that only exists in this context due to typing mistakes! It is possible that "deoxynucleic acid" is also abbreviated to DNA, but I think it is highly unlikely that this chemical of minor importance will ever have its own article and, in my opinion, no disambiguation of the abbreviation is needed -- I suspect that many other things share the abbreviation, DNA, but almost everyone is going to always associate those three letters with "deoxyribonucleic acid". Stewart Adcock 19:08, 15 Mar 2004 (UTC)

(Upon reflection, I'm adding an extra note) I need to go and look up what "deoxynucleic acid" actually is because I've just realised that the "deoxy" bit only makes sense with the sugar component. Watch this space! Stewart Adcock 19:11, 15 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Okay, I haven't found a definitive answer, but I believe that "deoxynucleic acid" refers to a set of chemical compounds, of which "deoxyribonucleic acid" is a particular example (specifically, containing a ribosyl moiety). The fact that use of "deoxynucleic acid" is more often than not a typo still stands. Stewart Adcock 19:37, 15 Mar 2004 (UTC)

It may be technically incorrect, but it is used intentionally -- not as a typo. Lirath Q. Pynnor

[P0M:] I believe Lir is correct. Crick and Watson use both terms in the titles of papers during the same year (1953 if memory serves). It's hard to believe that so many people out there are making "typographical" errors of this magnitude. If it is any kind of error, it is not just a typu (sic).

[Peak:] Sometimes fact is stranger than fiction. Consider:

Onelook.com indexes 966 dictionaries, not one of which mentions "deoxynucleic" or "deoxynucleic acid", whereas 36 define "deoxyribonucleic acid".

Google finds two pages for 'Watson Crick "Genetic Implications of the Structure of Deoxynucleic"', and 35 for the same but with "Deoxyribonucleic".

QED. Peak 06:48, 17 Mar 2004 (UTC)

P0M 14:46, 17 Mar 2004 (UTC): Chemistry profs locally say that "deoxynucleic" is a mistake, too. If "deoxynucleic" is considered correct, and if it doesn't have status as a "real word" with a different meaning, then I think it would be better to avoid perpetuating the error by mentioning it in this article. There should simply be a redirect.

[P0M:] As for the title, I would guess that FDR leads to an article on Franklin Delano Roosevelt and that technically the full name is to be preferred, but DNA has the advantage that it takes in the 2 forms of the "full" word. As long as the reader finds the article easily regardless of which one 'e searches for, it's same-same to me. P0M 02:25, 17 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Current state of affairs

There was a reversion by Peak, and resulting discussion, Discussion moved to archive 5.

There was another discussion about the reversion by peak and the basic premise that people should not change something that is disputed without giving an irrefuted reason first. Moved to archive 5

The business to be undertaken is to comment on the proposed intro paragraphs. After a paragraph emerges that everyone agrees upon (with no negative comments only good comments) it will be posted. Bensaccount 23:35, 16 Mar 2004 (UTC)

The section above the current proposals (10/03) is about the 2/3 majority version. This version has had comments made on it and the points that were resolved are not and should not be listed in the discussion of the current proposals. Bensaccount 22:07, 17 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Who can explain the numbering system for the current propositions? Bensaccount 22:12, 17 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Option 0 is the old-consensus version. Next have been added while discussions where going on. Likely, some are now redundants or no more appropriate. Please leave them in place to insure everyone agrees on that, but strike them to make obvious they won't be part of the final choices. This clean up will be most welcome.

The versions have been point formed. The redundant points should be removed. The unimportant points should be highlighted. The remaining points should be fit together. Bensaccount 22:41, 17 Mar 2004 (UTC)

strike what is no more necessary to take care of, rather than removing preferably. Thanks. FirmLittleFluffyThing 18:41, 18 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Ok good point Bensaccount 19:25, 19 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Ok the next thing to do is organize all the points so the same ones are together. (I am doing that today) Bensaccount 19:25, 19 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Now that the points are organized by topic, the next thing to do is to assign a number to each topic and rate them by importance. This is the tough part. If people have different orders in mind then they would have to list all the orders of importance. If a resolution cant be reached the worst that can happen is that every topic is included. This is the wikipedia way - voting is not necessary. Bensaccount 20:02, 19 Mar 2004 (UTC)

History section

In their original publication, Watson and Crick gave a special thanks to Dr. Jerry Donohue. In his book The Double Helix, Watson explains one very critical contribution that Donohue made just before the structure was solved. Watson says that their original molecular models were wrong, and could not pair. When Donohue saw them, he told Watson that the models were wrong and how to correct them. Watson took this advice and had the models remade. Once Watson had the correct models in hand, the pairing solution was obvious. There is considerable drama in the book about this event. It would be nice to record this critical step in the history of the solution with a sentence or two. There is a certain irony in the fact that Donohue's advice was drawn from his experience in Pauling's lab, which he had recently left to come to Cambridge. There is a kind of easy chemical reconfiguration called tautomerization that occurs in the nucleotide bases. The textbook configuration at the time the original models were made showed the bases as what we now accept as the rare tautomers. The original models were made from these pictures. The Pauling group had this critical insight into the predominant chemical form of the bases from their work in x-ray diffraction, but this correction was not yet widely known. When you get into the details, there is a very wiki-like flavor to this discovery. AJim 22:40, 16 Mar 2004 (UTC)

propagation of traits request moved to the section for things that should be included in the intro.

The second paragraph

I dont think we need a second paragraph yet (see wikipedia: define and describe. Bensaccount 18:32, 18 Mar 2004 (UTC)

The proposed second paragraph belongs under the location heading. Bensaccount 18:32, 18 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[Peak:] That is your POV, which you should not impose on others. For example, many people believe that the preamble should mention chromosomes. Since not all DNA is in chromosomes, and since not everything in a chromosome is DNA, some people felt that the connection between DNA and chromosomes could be left to a second paragraph within the preamble. This is not to say that there shouldn't be a section on "Location". That depends on how much we want to squeeze into the preamble. Peak 04:36, 18 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Debate about ____ (insert topic here)

So anyone have any thoughts on how to resolve this endless debate? Lirath Q. Pynnor

Somebody should set himself/herself up as czar and start issuing commandmants.
The Czar should put a "stop" on oposing positions by saying things like:

"I hope nobody wants to argue about this."

and

"DO NOT ARGUE THIS POINT!. (It will make me very angry!)

If the czar does not understand another contributor's point he or she should characterize the other contributor's position as "B.S." or use some alternative fragrant expression.
If the critique is cogent to the czar, but not easy to answer, she or he should look for something else in the posting that can be ridiculed and attack that instead of answering the real point.
If somebody gets the czar a good one, he or she ought to quickly archive that part of the discussion.
In a process of Darwinian "Homo homine lupus," the nastiest survive. To shorten the process one must find the One with the true nastiness gene.

JimJam

A square is not a circle because more people think it is a circle. A square is still a square. DO NOT ARGUE THIS POINT!. (It will make me very angry). Bensaccount 01:05, 19 Mar 2004 (UTC) (see above)

Actually, if you find that most people are telling you that your idea of a "square" is actually what they all refer to as a "circle" -- chances are, they are right and you are wrong. Lirath Q. Pynnor

Are you trying to tell me that a square is a circle? There is NO way that a square can be a circle. Welcome to reality. Bensaccount 03:22, 19 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[] ← This is a circle. (ask a four year old if you are unsure)

[P0M:] I think maybe Lir is trying to say something slightly different. If I say that a person is singing off-key, and dozens of people says that the person is singing "on key" but it's not "on key" to me because I insist on equal temperament and not a Handy Blues tuning, then who is right and who is wrong? "Circles" and "squares" are not very good examples because they are abstractions and do not even exist in the real world. (Only approximations can be ""proven"" to exist.)

[P0M:} "Deoxyribonucleic acid" and "deoxynucleic acid" are more like "aluminium" and "aluminum" than they are like are "circle" and "square." The latter are really not very good examples to use to disprove Lir's original point. I hope that not enough people use "Deoxynucleic acid" to make it as popular as "aluminium," but I think it could happen. (After all, I heard a radio announcer say, "I go hospital every day," just this afternoon. Languages change and people are lazy.) That being said, it would be better to use the term that Crick and Watson preferred and avoid the use of the "mistaken" term regardless of whether they used it intentionally at times, whether it was a lazy editor's fault that a misspelling gained currency, or whether it was a typographical error. (Leaving out four consecutive letters would be some typo.) P0M

For the nth time, I am not advocating that we use deoxynucleic acid -- I am merely advocating that since the term is used, it deserves mention in this article. Lirath Q. Pynnor

{P0M:] I think it would be useful to have an explanation someplace, but not in the first part of the article, of where this term came from. From everything people are telling me it seems to be a "mistake" -- but it is a mistake that Crick and Watson appear to have made themselves at times. That's interesting.

Whats most interesting is that its your POV that its a mistake. There are people who intentionally use deoxynucleic acid. Lirath Q. Pynnor

Actually, it's not my point of view. It is the opinion or the knowledge of the chemists that I have asked about it, and the opinion of some of the people commenting on this talk page who have competency in chemistry. I suppose that I'll have to dig out the 1953 (?) Crick and Watson article and see whether examination of that article will explain what happened. That way I'll at least have an informed opinion about it. P0M 05:33, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Nomination

[Peak:] In response to Lir's question above:

So anyone have any thoughts on how to resolve this endless debate?

Yes! Let's nominate someone to install a version of his or her own choosing. All the people who participate in the nomination process would agree beforehand to respect and to defend the choice of the nominee until such time as there is a vote on this talk page that indicates a preference for a different version, provided it is supported by more individuals than voted for the nominee. Peak 06:24, 19 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Here is a list of candidates. Please only vote for ONE candidate.

Stewart Adcock

Peak

P0M

This is a wiki -- not a "vote for who gets to write the article" website.

Lirath Q. Pynnor

[Peak:] Yes, this is a wiki, but that doesn't mean people cannot work together to come up with some text that is mutually agreeable to them and which they are prepared to defend. My proposal has nothing to do with "voting for who gets to write the article"; instead, it is attempting to address the issues which have driven 168 and others from Wikipedia.Peak 00:32, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

I agree Slrubenstein

Ditto. In three days, I suggest the various propositions are listed and voted upon. Are you all ready :-) ? ant

[Peak to Ant]: It looks like there will be many variations. How do you propose the "vote" will be conducted? Will it be based on one-person-one-vote, some kind of preferential scheme, or approval voting? How will ties be dealt with? Will the vote be advertised elsewhere? Will people be able to change their votes before the voting period ends? Will new proposals be allowed after voting has started? Peak 00:17, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

What if I disagree with the vote? Im pretty sure that there are enough unfriendly people here that my proposals will be voted against because of me, and not because of their quality. Will I still be bound by the vote? Is that the way things work on the wiki? How many times have I "won" a vote only to be told this isn't a democracy -- as I said before, if you want to try voting -- lets try discussing and then voting one sentence at a time. Lirath Q. Pynnor

I would happily and unilaterally compose a preamble for this article. However, I'm not convinced that action would really follow the spirit of a wiki. I suggest that we first give Ant's proposal of listing and voting on all the propositions a try. If that fails to resolve this inane debate, then I have someone in mind as a nominee for writing the preamble. Stewart Adcock 21:49, 19 Mar 2004 (UTC)

This is not the section for the current state of affairs (This section is called "nomination"). If you think that you want to discuss the current state of affairs, we are waiting. Bensaccount 20:07, 19 Mar 2004 (UTC)

I think we should try voting on what the first sentence should be, rather than trying to encompass multiple paragraphs at once. It would be easier to discuss things if we focused our discussion a little more. Lirath Q. Pynnor

This talk page

Can someone explain to me when and how people decided to organize talk pages topically? I am used to comments on the talk page being in chronological order. I find that much easier to follow; all I have to do is go to the bottom of the page to see what people are talking about most recently. Slrubenstein

[Peak:] There are many threads, and so many sections. You might consider using the Page history and diff facilities. Peak 03:40, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Thanks, good idea Slrubenstein

No more need for organization? So be it. Bensaccount 01:03, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Based on my experience, it is generally better to avoid attempting to reorganize other people's contributions on Talk pages. Apart from feathers getting ruffled needlessly, it makes it difficult to see "what's new". Peak 03:40, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Yes, this is my experience too, Slrubenstein

Voting

Proposition

Feedback and criticism welcome

On what do we vote ?

Do you wish to vote soon according to a system like B [3].
Do you wish to vote for the more traditional set of paragraphs [4]
any of the two systems will be okay (default if no opinion is given)

Please add you names and opinion :-)

for voting on alternatives : Peak
for voting on simple sentences : Lir, Bensaccount

Voting system
I suggest that in both cases, the voting system be the same.
If there are 4 sentences for each point, you list all of them by order of preference. The favorite is given 4 points, the least appreciated 1 point. The one with more points win.

For example, there are 4 options : optionA, optionB, optionC, optionD
User:Toto

optionB (yes, this option is really the best ihmo) -> 4 points
optionC -> 3 points
optionA -> 2 points
optionD (this option is ihmo really the least interesting one) -> 1 point

User:Tata

optionA (yes, this option is really the best ihmo) -> 4 points
optionB -> 3 points
optionC -> 2 points
optionD (this option is ihmo really the least interesting one) -> 1 point

Option A gets 6 points Option B gets 7 points Option C gets 5 points Option D gets 2 points

The option A will be the one on the page.

Yes, there is a risk that two options get the same number of points. In this case, we'll secondary separate both.

Who vote
Only the people involved in the edition of the DNA may vote. This is not meant to say that other people opinion is not relevant, but I think here, we try to find a solution for you first.

see argument below

Poll or vote ?
It is a vote, not a poll. And it will be binding. For a full month. Hopefully, you will be able to focus on other matters meanwhile. Editions will be open again after one month.

I wait for your input to indicate when the vote start. Do you think you need much more time ? FirmLittleFluffyThing 05:53, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Discussion

[Peak to Ant:] Unfortunately, I don't understand what you have in mind now. I thought we were going to vote on a list of alternative versions of the preamble. That is the only thing that makes sense (unless you want to have a multi-step process of enormous complexity). However, even given a list of alternatives, I am still unclear about: who may vote; how we are supposed to vote; how the votes will be counted; and how ties will be dealt with. (In short, I think you will soon see the wisdom of nominating an editor :-) Peak 06:27, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

I agree that voting on alternatives will be much easier.

I still do not understand how you think that voting on fragments is going to advance the process, but however we get there, in the end, we need to vote on a fixed set of alternatives. Furthermore, since this new and so-far very confused process could take months, and since many people agree that the current version of the preamble is flawed (or simply wrong - see discussion above about "primary"), I would like to propose that the "near-consensus version" be posted in the meantime. That would at least show some respect for the successful vote that was held before. If all these consensus-building efforts are to be ignored as soon as they are complete, what's the point? Peak 00:05, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Here is precisely why I suggested the only voters should be the editors of this page, rather than the full community. From what I gathered, all those interested and knowledgeable on the mocular biology field are currently participating to the discussion. From what I gathered, other editors either 1) do not care 2), do not want to approach this page or 3) really can not understand what the problem is, because they see all propositions as acceptable. In the end, it is little likely that anyone other than you will come. Let's suppose they do...and vote in a sense that is basically opposed to the general direction you are as a group following, you will end up with a solution that may suit on average most people, but perhaps not suit at all the majority of you. So, we would risk coming to a point where *you*, the current editors of the article spent endless hours discussing fine points of details, to end up generally not satisfied with the outcome. I doubt *very much* that the outcome would be gladly welcome. Since most of the current propositions are acceptable to outsiders, it is best that you, the editors, decide yourself of what the proper version should be. That is my feeling :-) Of course, if you generally disagree, the vote will be open to anyone. I am just trying to help you get out of the black pot.

[Peak to Ant:] Well, you know what they say about good intentions. Peak 00:05, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

How you will vote, I brushed it quickly. I will add an example above.

How long ? I suggest four days if all editors have voted. Up to 7 days otherwise

How to count the votes -> I put an example above

will the vote be binding : yes. During a month. Clearly, there will never be 100% consensus. So, that is not a poll. FirmLittleFluffyThing 20:05, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Last point I forgot...nominating an editor...I see not what you are saying...of course, proposing and discussing the various propositions is entirely in your (you as a group) hands. You (as Peak) are most welcome to participate. I noted that User:Bensaccount was doing a good job at doing synthesis and keeping track of things. He is proposing interesting alternatives for discussion directions, and I can't say that the whole topic has been neglected this week. On one hand, it would be nice that this does not go on forever, and I do not think there can be a 100% consensus between all of you, hence the voting proposition, which would be binding. However, it is clear that discussion is still occuring, propositions made, opposition voiced in a constructive way (I am for example thinking of Slru here), so let's take time and give it a chance.

Regarding the issue of the old near-consensus proposition which should be on the article, if all other editors agree that it be posted till the new near-consensus proposition is voted, fine, let's do that. If one editor does not agree and revert, I hardly see the interest. Again, there is no hurry. What does exactly bug you in the current version on the article ? FirmLittleFluffyThing

[Peak to Ant:] Please see my reply to your comment "I do not think there is a hurry." above. The problem is the inaccuracy of the word "primary". Peak 06:25, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

The fact that other users refuse to admit the NPOV inclusion of alternate names such as "deoxynucleic acid" and "genetic code of life" is what bugs me. Lirath Q. Pynnor

I think we should "vote" on one sentence at a time, starting with the beginning and continuing until everyone wants to go do something else instead. I don't think the votes should be binding, rather, the process of "voting" should serve to fuel a directed discussion which we have still not gotten around to having. I think everyone should be allowed to vote and comment. Lirath Q. Pynnor

Again, when it comes to the process of discussing / editing this page I have to agree with Lir. Bensaccount 17:16, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

As for the actual work to be done...

There is already a general consensus that the first sentence should be one of the following:

DNA is a nucleic acid.
DNA is a macromolecule.
DNA is the primary chemical component of chromosomes.
DNA is the material of which genes are made.

My order of preference is: 1>2>4>3 Mar 2004 (UTC) Is there any disagreement on this?Bensaccount 17:30, 20

[P0M:] I would agree only with choice 1 (with link to nucleic acid) If I had to choose among the others my sequence would be 1, 4, 2, 3. Note that what follows each of these choices could spoil the utility of any of them.

Not if every point is stand alone. Bensaccount 22:13, 20 Mar 2004 (UTC)

I think the first sentence should be, "Deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA or deoxynucleic acid) is a nucleic acid that carries genetic "instructions" which play a significant role during the biological development of all cellular forms of life, and many viruses; it is, thus, sometimes said to metaphorically be the "genetic code of life"." -- thus, in one sentence, we sum up the basic general idea of what DNA is. Lirath Q. Pynnor

This is a run on sentence. Thus the next argument is about grammer. Bensaccount 00:38, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Peak has said that the near consensus version should be posted until a new version is arrived at. (He also seems very confused about the process taking place here). I agree that the near consensus version should be posted, and would like to bring to the attention of the people on this page the reason why this whole process is taking place. The reason is that people were reverting controversial edits without reaching an agreement on the talk page.

[P0M:] I disagree, but I won't SHOUT (much). The problem has always been that people have made controversial changes without reaching an agreement on the talk page. Making a change where nobody has much ego invested in the current text will frequently be accepted by everybody as an improvement. Making an insensitive change the immediate wake of a reversion war reopens the war. Reverting a controversial edit is such a situation is a tit-for-tat response, and reverting the reversion is a tat-for-tit. The way around this problem is to be sensitive in editing, to secure agreement with proposed changes before those changes are made in the article. For one thing, doing so is much kinder to the reader who comes back for a second look at an article 'e has been studying.

People who revert without giving a reason are the problem here. During my time here there has only been one such case (Peak) although I understand before I came there were reversions made by Lir and 168.

[Peak:] If whoever wrote the above paragraph is referring to my reversion of 22:38, 14 Mar 2004, please note that I most emphatically did give a full explanation in the edit Summary. It was: "Revert to last version by Maveric149 as per Anthere's directions not to change preamble without agreement on Talk page". That was the precise reason, so if this is the episode being referred to, I would appreciate a retraction of the erroneous remark. Peak 05:51, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[P0M:] People who change text without giving a reason and without securing agreement to the change are a source of turbulence. To do so is within the rules in this rather uncivilized community. It would be useful to develop mechanisms for self-government within the intentional community formed by people interested in actually making improvements in this article.

I have said this with slightly different wording time and again:

If you have an argument over an edit after an edit has been made, that edit stays frozen (free from reversion) until the argument has been resolved and an unrefuted version has been decided upon.

[P0M:] Are you aware how the above two paragraphs sound to other people?

Reversion is only justified if someone makes an edit of a disputed point and does not give a reason. If a reason is given and undisputed it should not be reverted.

[P0M] I have seen cases that I regard as a user making wholesale changes not supported by legitimate reasons. Are such changes to stand while a long and fruitless process of argument over the supposed reasons for change ensues? I think not. P0M 04:08, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

I hope this clears things up. Bensaccount 00:38, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

You have seen cases where changes for "illigitimate reasons" have occurred. You revert these changes before disputing them.

The other user makes changes for what he sees as "legitimate reasons". He sees his changes reverted for no reason. He decides to do the same as you and reverts back to his version.

Now you have an edit war.

Now try it my way:

I have seen cases where changes for "illigitimate reasons" have occurred. I leave these changes and discuss them on the talk page.

The other user makes changes for what he sees as "legitimate reasons". He does the same as me and discusses the reasons for his change on the talk page.

Now you have a discussion.

Your choice. Bensaccount 05:04, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[P0M:] It is interesting to see how you have personalized your response. I once reverted a page when someone deleted 33 lines of text (here and there) and replaced them with material more in line with his/her own point of view. That change occurred in the wake of a rather intense edit-and-revert war. I've reverted a few clear cases of vandalism (e.g., if somebody replaced a paragraph on careful culling of wild herds with a diatribe on people who love to club baby seals to death, I probably would rever that). But in general I prefer to hash things out on the talk page first, regardless of whether I think the present text is flat-out wrong or just not as clear as it might be. In the one case where I did cut out something that I judged to be groundless I later regretted the hastiness of my action.

[P0M:] You seem to want to privilege the half of the cycle that edits an existing text. I might visit the article on trans-uranium elements and have a go at editing something based on my study of aetherism. I have an entire book on aetherism that I could quote to support my changes. I have an idea I could keep that article in chaos for a good long time.

[P0M:] I do not recommend the approach that reverts a well-intentioned edit with a summary like, "You <bleep>. This article was perfect before you mucked it up." Suppose that a group of people have had a reasoned discussion on the difference between carrier pigeons (an ornamental variety that now can fly only rather badly) and homing pigeons (a work variety capable of making its way home over distances of hundreds of miles), and have noted that carrier pigeons may once, early in the history of the breed, have carried messages, and have included that information in their text. I, being ignorant of anything other than what it says in the encyclopedia I bought at Safeway, correct the page to get rid of all references to "homing pigeons". Do you seriously maintain that my edit should be given higher privilege than that of the original editors of that page (one of whom may be the reigning authority on pigeon breeds, for all I know)? They are supposed to try to argue me out of my ignorance while the article makes a laughingstock out of all pretensions to accuracy?

[P0M:] I grew up thinking that etiquette was a conventional system of stupid rules regarding which finger to extend while drinking tea. One of my teachers gently demonstrated what could happen should one eat from the point of one's knife. I now regard etiquette as a systematic way of avoiding unnecessary conflicts and their ensuing turbulence.

[P0M:] A change is a change. P0M 06:09, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

[P0M:] I note that Bensaccount's first edit materially changed the first two paragraphs, and wiped out the words that had followed them:

 < -- Please DO NOT edit the first two paragraphs, above. These paragraphs   
caused significant debate. Instead,
suggest any putative changes on the talk page. -->
                                                                          
<--THIS PART OF THE ARTICLE IS OPEN FOR EDITION-->

P0M 06:39, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Duplications

WARNING: Anthere's edit of 15:40, 20 Mar 2004 inadvertently messed up page (duplications). What is to be done? Peak 07:02, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Hell if I know, this page is a mess. Lirath Q. Pynnor

arggggghh. I try to see what I can do FirmLittleFluffyThing 15:33, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

It seems to be o.k. now. Thanks, Anthere. ````

When I made my single edit, the section on protection clearly said that edits were allowed. Also, nobody was disputing my edit.

You noticed correctly that I personalized my argument above, POM. As the person who makes the change for "legitimate reasons", you imply that I am ignorant, arrogant, and may be using a safeway encyclopedia.

I may be ignorant, but I am not arrogant. It seems to me that I am the only one here who admits to being wrong. I have dropped more than half my points. The best I have gotten with all the points I have made is: "Please note that I am not saying that there is nothing of value in your proposal. Rather, I am just saying that the version that was hammered out by several people with all kinds of expertise is significantly better." Bensaccount 16:18, 21 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Archives

Should we include incorrect phrases if they are common?

Summary

The "genetic code of life" and "deoxynucleic acid" and "molecule of heredity"

Summary

The Two-Thirds Majority Version

Comments on this version

Pros and Cons

Other

The propositions as of 10/03

First paragraph

Second paragraph

propogation of traits

CURRENT PROPOSITIONS (POINT FORM)

First paragraph

Article location

Current state of affairs

History section

The second paragraph

Debate about ____ (insert topic here)

Nomination

This talk page

Voting

Proposition

Discussion

Duplications