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May 22
How to rehearse - last chance before VfD.
Pain of Salvation - passes the Google test but needs complete rewrite.
C.L.SF.N.S - needs wikification
Poul Schlüter not sentences
Werner Cohn copyvio?
May 21
Muhsin Al-Hakim - de-POVing and dates in the Gregorian Calendar would be a nice start -Note, this is actually a copyright issue. Burgundavia 02:15, May 22, 2004 (UTC)
Trojan horse (computing) -- conceptually confused, examples aren't, needs major work. Important topic for general user understanding given the malware floating around.
Banat - NPOV, more information about Banat in other countries than Romania
Juls, famous?
Oregon Legislative Councel's opinion on gay marriage, source text
Princess Olga of Greece and Denmark -- badly formatted -- Not just badly formatted. The language in this article hurts my head. Nnng... x_@ --Eequor 21:20, 21 May 2004 (UTC)
Sycamore trees -- content needs to be merged into American sycamore (the specific type of sycamore being described here), and the page itself redirected to sycamore. see vfd. Burgundavia 02:36, May 22, 2004 (UTC)
Dice -- Looking over this, it's not the best writing. Can we blame this on 1911 Encyclopædia Britannica? --Eequor 18:56, 21 May 2004 (UTC)
Fernand Verhaegen currently more of a list than an article.
Yiu Tung Shopping Centre, Oi Tung Shopping Centre, Hing Tung Shopping Centre, Hong Kong Shau Kei Wan Judo Club, Island East Sports Centre .. Yellow Pages like, in case someone would want to/knows how to write articles about them.
Pashtunwali - Needs links, NPOV, correcting of vowel-less deity names and other idiosyncratic spellings; contains self-contradictions. - Various edits and wikifications, still needs much work... --Eequor 21:12, 21 May 2004 (UTC)
Paris_Peace_Accords - To Wikisource
How to care for a pet cockatoo was listed on VfD consensus to keep but needs TLC
Shri Mataji Nirmala Shrivastava - Seriously POV
Sting (wrestler) - Spelling, grammar, links, style, tone and content.
May 20
Photohydrogen - substub
Troglodyte - basically a dicdef; much more could be done. Rhymeless 04:32, 21 May 2004 (UTC)
Pashtun - rather POV and subjective, lacking depth, and not all that well written - Jmabel
Andrew L. Harris - big mess of sentence fragments
Obdurodon - needs much work. Copyvio?
Major Major Major Major - formatting, style
Andrew Van Oosten Canadian politics figure--is he significant? - Yes (slightly). In the (probably) coming up Canadian election, he is a canadidate for the major right-wing party, the Conservatives. Note: he is not currently hold any office. And the article is a copyvio anyway. Burgundavia 02:30, May 22, 2004 (UTC)
Dance and music of Latin America wikify
Operation Rainbow - needs NPOVing
The Simpsons Hit & Run - Another newborn article. Full of wikis, but it reads like an eight-year-old wrote it. I know nothing about the game this talks about. Anyone want to take a whack at it? - Lucky 6.9 17:46, 20 May 2004 (UTC) +completely rewritten, could use more plot summary--someone take a look? Meelar
Lee Westwood - Brand new sub-stub about a British golfer. Doesn't give anything other than his DOB and website link. Almost voted for speedy delete. - Lucky 6.9 17:18, 20 May 2004 (UTC)
Looking at United States Naval reactor rthere are some discrepancies between the vessels listed under each reactor type and the reactors namd in the articles describing the individual reactors and vessels (e.g. S3G reactor, USS Will Rogers (SSBN-659), USS Gato (SSN-615) and USS Triton (SSN-586). This will have to be sorted out by somebody with accurate knowledge!
Paul D. Scully-Power - Needs Wikifying.
Daniel Bell Wakefield - Wikifying and cleanup needed.
Isenfluh babelfish bot?
Münchenwiler babelfish bot?
Stechelberg babelfish bot?
Meiringen-Innertkirchen Bahn babelfish bot?
SS Ahnenerbe not sure all of this is believable... cites please?
- googled for it (in German) and got about 5000 hits. Seems pretty believable. Sid + It existed (I've seen PBS documentary) but facts might need checking. Andris
Tang (fish) needs formatting +done, now just has a copyvio photo
Tutor ventris is this accurate? -no, see VFD discussion. —Ed Cormany
Alawite unwikified
Männlichen babelfish bot
Piz Gloria babelfish bot
The annual customs - needs context, relation to Dahomey (merge?)
Software engineering demographicsNeeds to be wikified...but it looks like some of it might be copyrighted.
Clepsydra (animal) unverified
Mark N. Brown unformatted
Mark L. Polansky unformatted
Zordon unwikfied, sub-stub, language
Zogam seems like a copyvio, but nothing on google
Mary L. Cleave unformatted
Martin J. Fettman unformatted
Dune Coon - isn't there a policy on offensive redirects? I don't remember
Udit Narayan and Alka Yagnik - POV, style
May 19
Twyhindi - huh?
René Fonck - needs wikification
Battling companion - needs some cleanup, plus unsure if anyone recognized this genre other than the author.
27Mhz CB27/81 Bandplan. No context.
A00 Sokolsky Opening. No context.
00Axx and 00-xx - what are they?
Subhash Kak - needs NPOV, from someone familiar with India
Muster - Needs to be clarified, and connected with Texas A&M, probably should be added to the Texas A&M page
Hanyu was previously a redirect to Hanyu, Saitama, which contained a bit at the bottom saying that "hanyu" also refers to the Chinese language - but that's plain "hanyu", not "Hanyu, Saitama". So I made Hanyu into a disambiguation page, but I'm not sure whether all dab pages should link to other articles or whether they can simply briefly define things. Specifically, I'm not sure whether the bit about "Chinese name for the Chinese language" should go in a separate article ("Hanyu (Chinese)", perhaps?) or whether it can stay on that page. -- pne
Scaled Composites X-38 - Empty Table.
Tubbataha Reef - no wiki
- seems like a copyright violation, as it is directly copied from the newspaper, and it is not clear that the poster owned the copyright -Yizzerin 17:06, May 19, 2004 (UTC)
Babasaheb Ambedkar - Thin out the hagiography; title should be Bhimrao Ramji Ambedkar but a sysop needs to do the move. Jerzy(t)
Hayward, California - copy-and-pasted student essay needs a second going-over --Smack
Non-Cooperation Movement - needs wikification, NPOV, content?
Hutier tactics - needs wikification, grammar
Saturation - needs to be made into a proper disambig --Smack
- any good now? --Tagishsimon
New Social Movements unwikified
May 18
Sanyo, Okayama - Stub. Astarael
Ralph Abercromby - Could be a copyvio. Reads like it was taken directly out of a bio. Astarael -- Relax; it is from 1911 EB. Mikkalai 23:38, 18 May 2004 (UTC)
Managing Urban America - Reads choppily. Needs general work. Astarael
Strangeways, Here We Come - POV. Possibly pointless. It's basically a track listing for some album. Astarael
- Album by well known band The Smiths but needs article work —Morven
- some album. Philistine ;). Quite a few of the Smiths albums (well, the one I checked) have similar "POV" reviews, but evidently by someone who knows their Smiths and can spin a fairly compelling narritive around atracklisting. It isn't easy being NPOV on albums, IMO, and we might cut the wikipedian some slack. --Tagishsimon
Bristol Cars - Needs a bit of NPOV. - Pls (anyone) discuss specifics on talk? Problem is that one cannot discuss the make in detail without talking about its image. —Morven
Modern Egyptian Language reads like a mission statement. -Sean 22:25, 18 May 2004 (UTC)
Banjo-Kazooie - After a major restructuring and the adding of lots of content in this article i've found it to be somewhat tangled up, especially the Gameplay section, needs to be copyedited, laid out in a better way, fixed for any grammar issues et cetera --Ævar Arnfjörð Bjarmason 22:21, 2004 May 18 (UTC)
Ratfiv programming language style, layout, some wikif.
Wax-Apple unwikified
Reproductive Cycle - We have no article at reproductive cycle either.
Yuwipi - can somebody expand on this?
Jakki Degg, Melinda Messenger, Jinty Stewart, Jane Swinnerton - all very brief, non-wikified bios.
Southern All Stars - messy
- There is also a little POV at the end. Astarael
Iraqi opposition - update? stub.
Sakas - needs significant copyeditand wikifying + Redirected and merged at Saka, wikified, note that the Saka/Saxon link is bunk. This wasn't Kenneth Alan, was it? (Smerdis of Tlön)
RACA and all it's related pages need verification, POV-ectomies, copyright status checking, and wikification.
Youth and Music Development Trust doesn't seem verifiable about of Wikipedia.
May 17
Tathra - some context?
Madeline Talmadge Force-Astor - the wife of JJ Astor, so I added that. I know nothing more about this. - added a bit more, moved it to Madeline Astor, more usual name, and voiding spelling (Talmadge vs Talmage) and hyphenation problems.
Lach - A band, apparently, and I almost speedied it, then almost VfD'd it, and now I wonder if it should perhaps be salvaged. Not much use in its present condition, I'm afraid. UninvitedCompany 21:57, 17 May 2004 (UTC)
Michael Watts - needs proper wikifying
FYAD. POV +redired to Something Awful, where it gets a full explanation. Meelar
Mong Kok full of self-evident statements and not very NPOV
Orell Gessner Füssli in German
Oregon Petition unwikifed, POV tract about global warming
- Also original research. I completely rewrote it. Please see if you think the new version is OK. Securiger 16:59, 17 May 2004 (UTC)
Needs & Assessments lacking context, unwikified, valid topic? copyvio?
- Seems very strange, and definitely copied from somewhere else. The title doesn't have anything to do with the topic, I think that it deserves to be put on VfD, anyone else?
Satellite laser ranging - taken from PD sources, restructrured + expanded, can someone cast a copyediting eye over this, please?
Condensation trail should be merged into contrail.
- Someone did that, I added headings -MGM 11:55, May 17, 2004 (UTC)
Ezzedine Salim - needs copyediting, NPOV
R. Stephen Berry - wikification
ISO 3166-2:SO - needs some type editing/wikification
South China Tiger - needs wikification
- Actually it's now been listed as a copyvio. Securiger 16:59, 17 May 2004 (UTC)
STF - poss. disambig, ugh indeed
Herzogenbuchsee bad translation
The Book of Skulls tone + Removed book-review, added links (Smerdis of Tlön)
Mahatma Jyotirao Phule - needs work
The Fountainhead - needs rewrite/organization --Beelzebubs 00:34, 17 May 2004 (UTC)
Dagmar - lots of spelling and grammar errors
Federal Election Campaign Act in bad need of context and wikification
May 16
X-Play- An 'anonymous' user has rewritten this article. If you look at the article's history ([1]) you will see that there is a bit of useful information added; however, there are numerous spelling/grammar errors which were not present before. -Frazzydee 23:09, 16 May 2004 (UTC)
- Rewrote for tone. How long does it exist exactly? - MGM 10:05, May 17, 2004 (UTC)
- Corrected some minor conventions errors. Astarael
Cheng weishi lun huh?
Toyota MR2 - possible copyvio, not wikied, rewrite needed
- The article is my own, translated from an article I've written earlier in finnish. The images I've added are also photographs I've taken myself. Just forgot to login when I entered the initial article. --Jahalme 16:07, 19 May 2004 (UTC)
Kapaleeshwarar Kovil - rewrite needed
Toledoth_Yeshu - totally incoherent - copied directly from Sources about Jesus Christ
Please see http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Special:Contributions&target=64.252.170.3. The user has created a large number of one-sentence stubs.
- Stubs are alright. "You can help Wikipedia by expanding" them. :-) 199.71.174.100 06:13, 16 May 2004 (UTC)
- Um, that's why I listed them here, and not on VfD.
Little-known facts about S. E. Hinton novels - merge into S.E. Hinton? - yes Charles Matthews
Plant hormones - User:Socrtwo kindly submitted a paper he'd written on this subject, but unfortunately it's in first-person and generally in need of wikification and other tidying up. Bryan 03:31, 16 May 2004 (UTC)
More than a week old
May 14-15
Mob Rules - Black Sabbath album: not a proper article yet.
Sousveillance and inverse surveillance need merging and dePOVing
Alcazarquivir and battle of Alcazarquivir - NPOVing, wikify
Specialist lexicon - poster was mostly posting back whole chunks of Wikipedia under wrong names, mixed with apparent copyvio risks -- this is a sub-stub of what remains...
Tubes and primers for ammunition 1911 text still unwikifed after ~2 years
- This is one of a series of 1911 articles on ammunition Suggestion: move them all to archives under ammunition, then delete. Opinions? Securiger
- I think they could be resuscitated, albeit some might benefit from new titles indicating that we're dealing with turn of the last century matters. I'd be tempted to leave them for a while - a month or so - and see if I got around to doing anything; if not then yes, archive & delete. --Tagishsimon
Phrenology just had a load of POV material dropped in. It's useful, but needs someone who knows something about it. I've cleaned considerably, now experts should take over. Also, User:LHOON is creating numerous articles about the "faculties" of phrenology--check what links to phrenology. Meelar
Rajputana -sub stub
- A bit better now but still needs a lot of work Jam2k 19:21, May 15, 2004 (UTC)
Silver Jews - needs work from someone who has an idea what it's about.
May 13
HMCS Baffin - needs rewrite to make it an article, not list, plus wikify
Cloudless Sulphur - copy edit, formatting -copyvio, see [2]
- Currently in revision, additional info, pictures and ideas from fellow Wikipedians on this article are welcomed on its talk page. - MGM
How Occupation and Employment can affect Identity - formatting, verify reliability
- I submitted this as an assignment. I got a mark of 64% for it. For verification I suggest you try the Open University, they set the assignment.Barbara Shack
Aramaean - very probable copyvio. Anyone care to identify the source? -not copyvio, AFAICT, just a lot of attributed quotes. needs wikified. --Ed Cormany Check Arameans. Rhymeless 02:40, 15 May 2004 (UTC)
Chaos (Sonic the Hedgehog character) needs intro & context
Frank A. Gerbode badly formatted POV text dump (has copy permission) --Ben Brockert
Traumatic Incident Reduction long quacky POV (has copy permission) --Ben Brockert
Metapsychology long quacky POV introduction to book (has copy permission) --Ben Brockert
Anamnesis in Traumatic Incident Reduction long quacky POV, topic first mentioned in paragraph 3 (has copy permission) --Ben Brockert
Peasant tiny microstub, lots to say about peasants -- not all were/are serfs
- I've added in what little there was from the 1911 EB. Ben Brockert
May 11-12
FIFA series unwikified
- +wikified, needs some more copyed Ed Cormany
Direct therapeutic exposure Needs context, content. Says who first used it, what books talk about it, but never what IT is.
Organ transplant -- gives conflicting information on when the first heart-lung transplant occured (and this is a front-page featured anniversary!). Page states both 1981 and 1987 as the first. Some cursory research shows 1981 may be right but I don't have a definitive source. PxT 20:49, 11 May 2004 (UTC)
May 10
Caribbean Basin Trade and Partnership Act taken from govt source; needs more wikifying, and some editing.Alcarillo
NOCTI unwikified. advertisement?
- Could be an ad, but it's not exaggerated enough ;-). I did a bit of formatting & copyediting; but it needs context. - Sid
Ulji Moonduk format
Lord Dudley format
National Mysticism - need NPOV work
TVCG 3 - rewrite English + slight rewrite, could do with fact checking re: 1957 TV antenna - should this be a relay transmitter? --Tagishsimon
Spanish Match - needs sorting out
Quantity dic definition
Democratic egalitarianism dic definition
John Herbert Chapman - exceedingly POV RickK
May 8-9
Alcazarquivir, Battle of Alcazarquivir both look like typed in from a book, although noo google match for e-copy. Mikkalai 21:03, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
Asha Bhosle - just got a lengthy addition of highly-POV and poorly-written text.
Ulf Bergström unformatted, not sentences -- did some cleanup, moved to a cap'ed name. But is he notable?
Shamian Island unformatted, needs more content +some links added Sid 14:00, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
Tony Tony Chopper unformatted, lacks context, is he significant?
Video game industry practices needs NPOV
Hedwig Elisabeth Amelia de Baviere Pfalz-Neuburg needs to be fixed/rewritten - cleaned a bit, there may be other daughters
Pharaoh gives different years than articles on individual Pharaohs (e.g. Amenhotep I or Thutmose I of Egypt). There are disputes about Egyptian chronology but could we try to be consistent between different articles?
Mehdi Mahdavikia needs more links, content, less newspaper crap language +added some links, but I don't know the man Sid 14:00, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
More than two weeks old
May 5-7
Mary Ann Day Brown - article only contains genealogical information and doesn't say why she is individually famous. I left a message on the talk page asking for more info to be included in the article but none has as yet. -- Graham :) | Talk
Soviet tank production during World War II - lacks insightful layout, should be renamed list in it's current form. - MGM 08:36, May 6, 2004 (UTC)
National Chi Nan University - proper formatting; grammar Alcarillo
Statism- The article as written seems to need work on NPOV. Sounds like an entry from the Encyclopedia of Libertarianism. Gwimpey
Panchavati and Tanaji Malusare need context and formatting
History of translation technology - 2 links to copyvios and a whole bunch of red links. Could be an interesting article when complete.
Egg tempera unwikified, format
Carlsbad Decrees unwikified, very stubby
May 4
Chromophil substance - needs context and copyedit
Lockergnome forums needs to be rewritten or deleted (was on vfd)
Pirate Radio needs fact check --- was Francois Mitterrand ever arrested for running a pirate radio station? (Smerdis of Tlön)
Ceramics - needs an opening paragraph and distinction from Pottery (nothing to do with boy wizards, though)- MGM
Copy info from List of books by award or notoriety into List of prizes, medals, and awards and vice versa, create some link between these lists to prevent redundancy
Mystic Records could use a sentence
Historia Britonum - cut down excessive quotes?
Vinnish is this accurate?
IXC unformatted
David Heath (wrestler) unformatted
2001 Conservative leadership election - mainly dealt with at Conservative Party (UK); only linked to from Ann Widdecombe who wasn't even a candidate!
May 2-3
Garrett A. Morgan into which I have merged Garrett Morgan contained information that seems to have been apocryphal or just plain wrong. Aiming for NPOV, I have removed what seemed dubious, although other web pages include it. Please would somebody else have a look at this and correct if necessary? EdH
Will to Power mostly just quotes
James Blake - Somebody needs to make an article out of what is currently a wall poster Chancemill
Vinnie Vincent - needs wikifying, possible fact-check, NPOV, etc. Similarly, Mark St. John, Bruce Kulick, although those look better. Possibly worth checking other KISS related entries too.
Chinese nobility - needs to cover noble titles up to the Qing Dynasty
Cohen v. California unwikified
May 1
California's Gold Describes someone as 'cherubic and fit'. NPOV.
Louis Crane unformatted
Ian McKenzie Anderson - unwikifed, noteworthy enough?
Sandy Burnett - needs a bit attention?
Masaaki Sakai poor english
Gaetano Badalamenti only DOB and DOD
U.S. Marine Corps Force Reconnaissance - needs edit to a user-friendly article directed to the general public (has a lot of military terms).
Ezo - wikify, update (taken from 1911 encyclopedia)
John Demjanjuk looks like story was unfinished, even before yesterday's news that his deportation is underway. --Jerzy(t)
April 29-30
Colon Hydrotherapy (Colonics) Clearly this article has got issues.
Amos Meller rewrite. Makes little sense. All google hits for "Amos Meller" are Wikipedia mirrors. Misspelled? Does not exist?
Amma makes no sense (Makes more sense now, but still despirately needs help --FrankB)
Oakworth Hall sounds like sales brochure
Futami Jouwa from vfd, no consensus, needs tidying up
History of Somalia slightly POV, mostly tongue-in-cheek
Agent 212 unwikified, lacking context
Daryl F. Mallett - fan article about some SciFi editor. Needs massive trimming and rewrite, removing of excessive linking, trimming bibliography, fact check (I couldn't verify the film credits). Maybe even a copyvio? But from where? Lupo
William Melton little more than externals links, this isn't dmoz
April 26-28
Feijoada completa recipe, style, to wikibooks?
Spiritual socialism POV, context
Bear Son Tale huh? context, relevance, etc.
Boris V. Morukov has been wikified, needs to be structured
Nuclear fallout - mess created by merging two articles. The beginning is reasonable, after that, a scrambled file of facts. Some content would be happier at radioactive contamination.
Asana - needs some NPOV and cleanup from someone who knows about this.
Community inquiry labs - needs context
Prophet Onias - very definitely POV, needs fact checking.
- Completely rewritten by anon, might need another check. Mustafaa
- I NPOVed it some, wikilinks, etc.., but have no clue about facts Sam [Spade] 11:45, 19 May 2004 (UTC)
Berenger Sauniere - needs fact-checking and possibly NPOV. Google search suggests that he's controversial and/or surrounded by some conspiracy theories and legends.
April 24-25
Pyrroloquinoline quinone - legitimate? Claims of "new vitamins" are always suspicious. - It's purportedly a vitamin in mice. No deficiency disease has been shown in humans, so it's certainly not a human vitamin.
Ernest Mason Satow - a mess.
Srila Vishnupada, H.D.G. Ramakrishnananda Swami - puff piece, profoundly POV.
Property damage - VfD voted to keep and list on cleanup, see Talk:Property damage. -- Graham :) | Talk
University of Kentucky - Needs a lot of help. Apparently nothing of consequence is taught there (I thought as much), so sports are its only focus. -- Smerdis of Tlön
Authorial intentionality - needs an English major to sort it out.
Early flying machines - unusual style
April 21-23
Tom Wisniewski, Yuri Ruley - just bulleted lists
Mobb Deep -needs expanding
Toaster museum author doesn't seem to know anything about it -[3] for your reference Ed Cormany
Royal Lao Air Force - poor, one line stub.
Bioacoustics - needs to be expanded, just a dicdef now.
RFA_Salviola (A502) needs table filled in.
Phat short article in dictionary format, needs refactor
Salvage Pathway -needs expanding
Sin#Muslim views of sin - POV, hostile tone. I assume atonement from sin is possible in Islam, but am short of particulars. (Smerdis of Tlön) Yes, blame this one on User:RK. It still needs a lot of expansion, but I think I've cleaned up the bias at least. - Mustafaa 05:49, 2 May 2004 (UTC)
Roberto Tirado - from vfd, consensus to keep but requires cleanup. See Talk:Roberto Tirado -- Graham :) | Talk
More than a month old
April 19-20
IO-APIC - incomprehensible to a layman, lacks links
- The topic is one which probably should be thus. Links to interrupt and API might be good. It's not bad (of its ilk) as of today. ww 15:18, 20 May 2004 (UTC)
Agent Cody Banks - outdated information, info on sequel needed. - MGM 07:43, Apr 20, 2004 (UTC)
RJ Sternberg - sub-stub, famous?
Velocette unwikified, in timeline format
April 17-18
Blue Tears - Alice Cooper fans take note and give this some help, format, sub-stub.
Concupiscence - Extant request from 2002 for theologically trained Catholic & Protestant to review this article.
Marine aquarium fish species - Subedit, tone of voice
Remote concentrator - Some sort of telephone exchange multiplexor?
Soundhog - unwikified, needs a lot of work.
Bread and Roses - not sure if it's a copyvio, but it is POV. Rick
Patient empowerment -- unresolved factual dispute
ARY Group grammar, POV
Cyprus Mines Corporation - not written like a encyclopedia article
April 14-16
Scenario planning - interesting but unsure about reliability of "A step-by-step guide to scenario planning" (contained in article)
Venedes - uh? Can anyone make sense of this? About Wends, no? Good idea to merge and save anything useable about the historic names for them.
SMDS - incomprehensible sub stub.
Max and Moritz should be on wikisource, no?
Mnemonic link system - needs major rework, doesn't give definition, mainly list of links currently.
Liberalism and conservatism in Latin America - needs context/merging, unwikified
Tomb of Shah Jamal - unwikified sub-stub
Precising definition - lacks precision, definition and much else Charles Matthews
G protein - unwikified and the name of the contributor. Suggest merging with G protein-coupled receptor. JFW | T@lk
April 13
K. M. Peyton unresolved comment in article.
QR algorithm - seems to be a topic, but needs better context and info.
Sonata da chiesa - no context, unwikified
The Garden of Cyrus - PoV (& copyvio?): Not copyvio; see talk page. (Smerdis of Tlön)
Iraqi National Accord Iraqi anti-Saddam group, article has not been updated since 2002
Abbotsford Saints - Regina Storm - Kamloops Critters - Nanaimo Navigators - Red Deer Outlaws - Lethbridge Dust Devils - All are said to be a part of the Canadian Baseball League, but that league no longer exists. +They were supposed to play there in 2002 season but I'm not sure if the 2002 season actually took place. Andris
Sanctification - messy, unwikfied only from a Christian POV
April 10-12
Johannes Brahms early life all wrong; needs better external source.
Cometbus, unwikified, POV
Dragon Ball Z Live Action Movie needs wikif. and definition early in article. Data needs to be rearranged.
Iraqi Revolution Command Council - very little information - needs expansion, wikification
List of postal codes in Poland — All the Polish characters are broken; might need introductory paragraph; should probably all be wikified
Eye_surgery - format, slight copyvio potential, wikify
List of radio stations in Serbia and Montenegro moved from VfD, organize, copyedit, expand
Boiler Efficiency: taken straight from technical paper (possible copyvio?) - Vardion
Caliculation Routines: same as above - Vardion
April 4-9
Walo is it Walo or Wala?, wikify, expand
Casablanca class escort carrier - Majority of carriers on this list have empty information tables.
Kino no Tabi - needs some NPOV-ing, wikification
H. Irving Hancock unformated, unwikified, copyvio?
Morios - unwikified
Disambiguate the 2 dozens links at Prussian. --Menchi
Chanco - almost fine but states that he was born ca. 1624 and participiated in events that took place in 1622. One of those must be wrong.
The Fever - The Twilight Zone episode, needs making clear what it is at start. Also may need structure tweaking.
Incompetence - copyed, expand. Could be fun. Denni
April 1-3
THC Ministry - POV, famous?
Maîtresse Hounon'gon is another stub. Information? -- Slowking Man
Security camera, unwikified, language
Patient- care, unwikified, language
Nurse assistant skills, only partially wikified
Preschool education has a rewrite, but needs more.
Wachovia Bank of Georgia - the building or the company?
Wikipedia talk:Make only links relevant to the context - conversation too long and convoluted, needs cleanup, but is rightfully POV --rs2
Particle_velocity_level - goes through the motions of describing a physics? term and its use w/o any clarity or understanding
Ito Noriko - sub-stub, famous?
March 26-31
Symbolics seems to repeat itself; also some overlap with Lisp machine.
Wilderness first aid Needs either serious professional attention or serious deletions.
Half Caste - poem explanation needs expanding, poem itself should be cut to a small quote or moved to wikisource
Lea Bridge and Lea Bridge road currently only the location, can anything else be added?
Rohan Gavaskar - lacking content, poor format, sub-stub
Cobra probe - obscure -- Khym Chanur
Quantum brain dynamics - long but hard to understand, pseudo-science
E-Work - marketing-speak -- Khym Chanur
March 23-25
Ambassadors (from Germany to Burkina Faso) 1 redlink does not a list make -- Graham :) | Talk pen Vassula Ryden About a 'modern era prophet'. Very POV at the moment.
Sarah Gordon expand, wikify, format
- There are other problems as well. What do the words Sejm or szlachta or congnates of them mean to an English speaker? Cecropia 18:15, 4 Apr 2004 (UTC)
Publixtheatre Caravan - rather POV at present. Tualha
Toll-like receptor - need a lot more context, deadend, sub-stub
Via net loss - unwikified, more context
Geodesy for the layman - needs rewrite to sound encyclopedic
- nonononono it needs to be moved to Wikibooks, which was made for things like it. -- EmperorBMA / ブライアン 22:27, 10 Apr 2004 (UTC)
Eve Ellis style, overly gushing, unencyclopeic language
- Remedied somewhat, but I wouldn't be surprised that in its current this state this article ends up on VfD. -- llywrch
Stairway - needs wikification (particularly towards end), better sectioning and probably a good copyedit for measure. Zoney
March 21-22
Copyright Act of 1976 sub-stub, needs huge help from someone who knows anything about the act
[[Communes_of_the_Calvados_d%E9partement]] - many articles need the empty sections commented out, and the stub message added
Tintin and the Golden Fleece - sub-stub
Alexandrov topology - please edit this so a numbskull like me can actually understand it... -- Graham :) | Talk
EGBU-15 - just a table
More than two months old
March 17-20
Imperial College Electrical and Electronic Engineering Society - wikify and NPOV
Layer 4 router - context, expand
Afghanistan timeline 1901-1910 - too long paragraphs and probably unreadable as it is. Pfortuny
Al Gore's views - Needs copyed for tense
Midwest POV
Cao Cao Unification of the North - Wikify, context, (re)unification?, maybe better title
March 14-16
Messali Hadj - needs explanation of TLAs, unwikified
Richard Lyons - sub-stub
Media coverage of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict - amateurish, merge elsewhere, VfD
Muhammad Thakurufar Al-Azam needs fact checking.
King Zhuangxiang of Qin - NPOV, wikify Muriel
Jesuit High School - should be a disambiguation page; needs to address that there are multiple Jesuit High Schools, and what they are.
Islamic views of homosexuality - questionable material about same-sex marriage
March 12-13
Technology acceptance model mostly unwikified, orphan, copyvio?
Computer numbering formats - very long article, lots un-wikified. Much info needs redistributed to constituent topics Binary numeral system, Integer (computer science), Floating point, ASCII, Binary coded decimal and Data type. Removed a request to merge with Integer (computer science). See Talk page. Zoney
MediaWiki:Cults - POV and inaccurate
Intellectual property education Probably needs self promotion removed as does perhaps presumed autobio Shaheen Lakhan; Human memory process by same IP (noted at #February 4, 11th item), and those labelled "(Top)" at Contribs of (surely) the same person are also not yet edited by others, and may (or not!) still deserve scrutiny