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June 18
Produce only an image
June 17
Ulbricht Doctrine - wikify, format, explain context
Boston accent phonology - New article I've been working on, fairly complete, but complete enough? Poccil
Zsuzsanna Budapest - I'm not entirely sure what this means.
ZiRC - Ad or information? You decide.
Zhuge Liang Campaign of subduing the Southern tribes - fairly horrible, lacking context
Azygos vein - needs a WikiDoctor to fact check & link it, or VfD it.
Attainder - dicdef
Atrophy - dicdef
Atlanta class cruiser - very empty, but links to some fullsome examples
Asian Highway Network - unwikified and style problems; links to but maybe distinct from (maybe not) Asian Highway
Medicinal psychology - One big unwikified headache.
Ariadne (software) - unwikified. May have hint of Advert about it
Aquatics at the 1924 Summer Olympics - is there any pattern for Olympics pages? This one seems scanty. Candidate for redirection?
American Liberty League - Possible copyvio, unwikified, style problems. US labor history.
Alfred Worden - Astronaut, cut & paste from NASA, unwikified.
Magneti-Marelli - ad?
- They're a pretty well-known company, so I think they're worthy of an entry in Wikipedia.
Phosphodiesterase inhibitor, Phosphodiesterase - quite a bit of revision/expansion/correction is in order
Tradewars - wikify
- I gave it the POV-ectomy, turning it to an article about the Trade Wars game (which goes by any number of names, etc.). I'm not sure that it's worth keeping, though. If folks want to clean & improve it with specific dates and iterations of the game, that would be worthwhile. Otherwise, this is probably a VfD candidate. Geogre 02:12, 18 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Studley from VfD, needs fact checking, expansion
Tintin and the Golden Fleece - sub-stub
Alexandrov topology - please edit this so a numbskull like me can actually understand it... -- Graham :) | Talk
Visual short term memory I have justed added my first article. I would be grateful if people could read through it, wikify it, shorten it etc. There is a pre-existing article on short-term memory, but this is a somewhat different topic and my feeling was that it was better keep two separate pages, but if anyone wants to try merging the two that would be great.
Shosholoza unwikified, needs rewriting. Orphan.
Management by Jugaad Huh? The writing completely obscures whatever it is that this is about. Any Indians want to clarify or nominate for deletion, if not?
Grant Nicholas unwikified
Franjo Liklin - what does this title mean, and what does it have to do with the subject of the article?
- Since they were all the same user, it's unlikely that someone just made a mistake & mistitled the article. The subject and content seem entirely unrelated. A way to substitute "famous Croatians" without competing with the original art.?
Bombing of Guernica -- I just translated this from the Spanish. It's probably more POV than is generally acceptable for the English-language Wikipedia. See further notes at Talk:Bombing of Guernica -- Jmabel 04:42, Jun 17, 2004 (UTC)
June 16
Buttons and Mindy possible copyvio (but google can't find it), nevetheless needs lost of wikifying., also Slappy Squirrel by same user.
WiDEN Help, telephony folks: if this is true, then it needs CU. If it's not true, then it needs to go to VFD.
Imperial College Electrical and Electronic Engineering Society - wikify and NPOV
Layer 4 router - context, expand
Thefacebook.com notable?
William Crawford Sherrod collection of source texts.
- Done by an anon, too. The man rates, but not his autobiography (which is there twice). (sigh) A cleaning is a lot of blanking. Any Civil War folks want to?
Wolfsheim's Discography format, context, unwikified
World in Common notable?
Christopher McCandless wikify.
Russian name - the style is too personal and casual.
Homeschooling is entirely POV. Needs an expert rewrite.
Famous political quotations Wikify, at least. Wikibooks for things like this? I love commonplace books, but this gets into Bartlett's territory, doesn't it? Geogre 13:19, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Gantzs Wikify. Confirm. POV.
Festa wikify
- Needs other "festae," too, as it's also a Latin word, and this article bleeds into 'fete' and 'feast days,' doesn't it? 206.205.115.3 15:35, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Music of Malta wikify
International Risk Governance Council wikify
Slave beads wikify, check for copyvio -- checked, not a copyvio
Microreactors wikify, check for copyvio -- checked, not a copyvio
Indian Attorney General unwikified
Spirituality in The 21st Century not meaningful as far as I can tell
- It isn't. I think it was deleted once before and now it's back. -currently on VfD. DJ Clayworth
When a Man Loves a Woman and Jason Scott Lee - More BS from the B-Movie Bandit. Still can't get the cleanup boilerplate to show. I've listed this user on the "vandalism in progress" page.
- You can tell that it's the same person due to the constant use of the present tense: "So-and-so B-movie-actor stars in so-and-so movie fifteen years ago." TheCustomOfLife 01:25, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Simmern wikify, check for poss copy vio, maybe in German
Barbara Behr wikify, fact check
Yellowstone Plateau wikify, check for copy vio
Gba roms, wikify, complete rewrite, check the url for usefulness
- This page looks like chatspeak from one of the many warez friends I know. I'll rewrite. KirbyMeister 09:30, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- Finished rewrite, please check page for accuracy. The original page contained a myth as fact, advertized a roms website (illegal) and also had poor grammar. KirbyMeister 09:52, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Explosive limit needs work. I can barely understand what it's aiming for. EddEdmondson 13:54, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)
June 15
A Time for Choosing - A speech. 4,626 words. No wikilinks. +to VFD DJ Clayworth
Fuck Marry Kill - Remove first peson point of view and keep the facts about the subject
USS Roanoke (CL-145) - Empty table
- + Added some tech specs, compiled from multiple Googled sites, some still missing Lucanos
Joanne Whalley - A random page search landed me on older "gem" from the B-Movie Bandit. Can't get the boilerplate notice to work, however.
Balan K. Nair - Substub
Peter I of Russia - needs to get sections like in Catherine II of Russia
Alexius Petrovich - awful bunch of text
Paul of Russia - sections like in Alexander I of Russia
Nicholas I of Russia - sections
Alexander III of Russia - sections like in Nicholas II of Russia not just bunch of text
Alison Stewart - unwikified, could do with expansion Nick04 18:48, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Megatokyo forums - POV near-nonsense that's also listed as a possible VfD. Tried to add cleanup boilerplate, but the system's acting up. - Lucky 6.9 18:18, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Media controversy POV & limited to videogames
Wendy O. Koopa: Substub about a character from a videogame. Does this entry do anything? Geogre 14:19, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
CineMagic (film festival): Substub, just a pointer to a website. Geogre 13:57, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Paper chromatography of amino acids: I'm really unsure about this. Is it a paste from a lab manual? Is anyone going to go to an encyclopedia & fill in all that in the search box? Is it a how-to and therefore subject to VFD? Can it be cleaned up by a bio-specialist filling in what paper chromatography has done for the world? Geogre 13:50, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Innerspace substub B-movie; just a pointer to imdb: what could anyone learn?
Giorgos Karagounis wikify
Angelos Basinas wikify, copy edit
NAS battery wikify, poss copy vio
Basil Blackwell sub-stub
Superman's powers unwikified + links added (Smerdis of Tlön)
Bruce Dinwiddy needs formatting. Possible capivio. Academic Challenger
Hamburger Earmuffs - Need wikification, expansion, and a pov-ectomy. Might be copyvio, but I don't think so. Gentgeen
Alkaline battery - Hoo-wee! Bordering on nonsense. - Lucky 6.9 06:40, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
The Witches of Eastwick - from our favorite B-movie troll. TheCustomOfLife 02:37, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
K1A1 - needs wiki format, folks knowledgeable about tanks/military/warfare
Jump, Little Children - unwikified, unformatted and darn near unreadable.
- I doubt that many of the events in this article happened the way the contributor writes them. Another entry says that this band plays at a restaurant in Charleston (I'm assuming South Carolina?). This is a vanity article and I would move to delete. TheCustomOfLife 02:13, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Al Gore's views - Needs copyed for tense
Midwest POV
Henry Ossian Flipper Article places the Mexican-American War (1846-48) in the period between 1882 and 1921. Must mean either Spanish-American War (1898) or Pershing's 1914 Punitive Expedition into Mexico, but which?
June 14
51forth Doesn't look like it should have it's own article, or should be expanded. Without further information about why this variant is special, it looks like it should just be a part of the main Forth article Andy_Christ
Kimberly McCullough - substub number eight. It would be nine, except one appears to be nonsense. - Lucky 6.9 00:13, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Elizabeth Pena, Daphne Reid - This is nuts. Another substub or two, anyone? - Lucky 6.9 23:47, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- Dunc_Harris mistakenly tried to report me for creating too many substubs with too little information. Maybe you could try doing the same at Wikipedia:Vandalism in progress. TheCustomOfLife 23:53, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- Done and done. Thanks for all you do. - Lucky 6.9 00:13, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Magus (Chrono Trigger) - wikify.
Phil Harris, The Jungle Book (1994 film), Tim Reid - More substubs! Phil Harris deserves a lot more than what this fool credits him with. - Lucky 6.9 23:41, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Liga Polskich Rodzin - needs work.
Occator can someone verify this? + Yes: Confirmation from this website
Sexual development 2 links
- Needs redirection to Human sexuality methinks.
Tracey Ross, Kirsten Storms, David Canary, Circle of Friends, Embeth Davidtz, The Mask of Zorro, Capitol (television) and The City (soap opera) - My leetle amigo was rather busy on June 5th under the IP address of 69.0.53.254. Found these on the "short pages" page when I was looking for something else for TheCustomOfLife. - Lucky 6.9 21:59, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- To be fair, Capitol doesn't seem to be from the B-Movie Bandit...that was there when I started writing soap articles. TheCustomOfLife 21:54, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- Betcha it is. The person keeps signing on with a different proxy, sometimes more than once a day. Same guy/gal. - Lucky 6.9 21:59, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- I felt like I didn't phrase most of "The City" correctly when I was writing. There's more info there now but I'm leaving it in cleanup until someone else can add more, or fix what I wrote. TheCustomOfLife 22:17, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- Betcha it is. The person keeps signing on with a different proxy, sometimes more than once a day. Same guy/gal. - Lucky 6.9 21:59, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
The Jungle Book 2 and Always. Ah, today it's B-movies instead of soap operas and Nickelodeon voice actors! More substubs that started (as they always do) as nothing more than the film title, year of release and principal actors. Whee. - Lucky 6.9
Tolerance has been edited by various folks, but still has an uncomfortably polemic feel.
Subliminal message is very pro a subject that almost everyone believes to be tin-foil hattery.
Stanislav Petrov lessen PoV
Tomislav Nikolic and Boris Tadic - one of these men will become president of Serbia, but they don`t have good articles. Nikolic article is stub, and Tadic's article has to be written as text not with * * * and to add some more information
Serbia unusually low amount of information about one country. just intro+subdivisions
RahXephon language, format
Cao Cao Unification of the North - Wikify, context, (re)unification?, maybe better title
Richard Lyons - sub-stub
Guttenburg - Language needs contextualization, improvement, wikification, verification, and moving to a ship's name ?S.S. Guttenburg? "HMS Guttenberg"?
Lord Basava - Wikify, language cleanup
- Also need to check facts. Is this the same person? I cannot find information about anyone else, but the website contradicts the date and place of birth. --Caliper 17:12, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Type 82 Bristol class destroyer - Wikify, language, POV Nick04 10:42, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- Done, then reirdected to Type 82 destroyer, with the former's content on the talk page. Andy Mabbett 13:34, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Ursula Reitemeyer of any importance?
Humbug Mountain only a picture
Luigi Denza - a stub about what appears to be a 19th century musician, but which seems rather incoherent in its current form. Bryan 06:16, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Liberal Elite, elite media -stubby, POV. -Sean Curtin 05:47, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC) + Moved to Liberal elite, standard caps. (Smerdis of Tlön)
Legend of Zelda: Wand of Gamelon - Second-person nouns used, incomplete sentences. Second sentence (although the information is correct), is in need of a rewrite ("such a flop"). The article is also somewhat a stub. Shadowlink1014 05:43, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- Cleaned up. Still somewhat stubby though. - MykReeve 22:22, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Sabians - non-standard layout, non-encyclopaedic tone, no internal links, talk page stuff dumped in the main article, and an edit war, oh my!
Paula Jai Parker, Donna Peele, The Newton Boys - when will these end? - Lucky 6.9 02:13, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Walter Nichols - the character that Jonathan Goldstein plays. Another sub-substub. - Lucky 6.9 02:05, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Jonathan Goldstein - another happy little entertainment B-list substub on which someone made a credible effort to fix. We now go from soap operas to live action kid shows on Nickelodeon with this one. - Lucky 6.9 02:01, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Charles D. Gemar is an astronaut bio, unformatted dump from NASA.
June 13
The Peace Maker - needs wikification
- Done. It should make sense now. Geogre 15:57, 14 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Subconscious mind - has "issues" and possible NPOV.
Muhammad Thakurufar Al-Azam needs fact checking.
King Zhuangxiang of Qin - NPOV, wikify Muriel
Charles Coughlin probably de-PoV & remove source material to WikiSource
Vanir/Aesir theory Reads like someone's pet theory. Needs organisation and serious NPOV work if it's worth saving. -- Derek Ross | Talk
- Work product of User:Kenneth Alan, whose pet theories have been significantly refuted, bu who continues to post this information as if it were fact.
- Weird. The idea that the Vanir were gods of an indigenous people who were conquered by the migrating Germanic tribes, who brought their Aesir with them, goes back to Snorri Sturlusson in 1200 AD. This author takes this (which he doesn't like) and wants to read it all as a political battle inherent in ethnicity today? Very, very weird. "Drink deep or touch not the Pierean Spring," as Pope says. Clean up would mean stripping to the bones or deleting the article. When I studied Anglo-Saxon and Old Norse, we never heard that Snorri was a crypto Nazi. Amazing! Geogre 22:31, 13 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- This article has been listed on Wikipedia:Votes for deletion —Stormie 03:11, Jun 14, 2004 (UTC)
Haakon Lorentzen huh?
Disambiguate half a dozen cities in Prefectures of Japan from Akita to [[Akita, Akita|Akita]].
- Redid links on Prefectures of Japan; a whole bunch of them pointed to redirect links. Also, I moved the half-dozen cities from a page named (capital) to a page named (capital, prefecture), but I didn't do the due-diligence of fixing all of the old links to the (capital) pages. -- Bcordes 01:32, Jun 16, 2004 (UTC)
Julio Dam unwikified <--Done, could use quick readthrough by someone with biblical knowledge. --Caliper 22:58, 13 Jun 2004 (UTC)
United States Army Medical Command unwikified
Happiness by Miyu huh? nothing links to whatever this is
USNS Kingsport (T-AG 164) only a picture
Alive (story) style, facts
Diethyl benzyl benzoate rubbish?
Brehon Laws unwikified
List of Ankara metro stations, nonsensical microstub that could just about be speedily deleted if no one wants to clean it up. Ambivalenthysteria 04:23, 13 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Samkhya cosmology - doesn't explain the term, depends on an external link to do most of the work
WZebra - wikify and expand
- An ad and VFD? Geogre 13:59, 13 Jun 2004 (UTC)
June 12
Salimus - what fictional universe is this from? Needs wikification
Khotan -wikify
White Base needs attention from a Mobile Suit Gundam fan. As do the rest of that user's contributions. Please?
Islamic views of homosexuality - questionable material about same-sex marriage
Technology acceptance model mostly unwikified, orphan, copyvio?
Shimazu - needs rewrite...
Growgame isn't English--is this significant enough? Not sure what language it's in, possibly German or something akin. Meelar
Nice guy syndrome - survived VfD but needs serious revision--NPOV, research or other evidence to substantiate claims. -The related Attraction pathology also needs serious NPOVing.
Kim Criswell - Tiny stub for a stage actress and singer. She's notable enough to escape VFD, except there's not much point in an article this small.
Sayeret Matkal - seems to stray somewhat from NPOV. I don't know enough about the topic to cleanup properly. Also, much of it seems to be a copyvio from http://www.specwarnet.com/world/matkal.htm - some of which has been substantially edited, but much hasn't. - MykReeve 17:12, 12 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Ishibashi Chie - Stub at present; the lady is a voice actress in anime, but the only information given is that she's female and works for a particular company. Listing it on cleanup to flag the attention of anime fans. Geogre 14:13, 12 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Prime Minister of Afghanistan - all it says is "Afghanistan currently does not have a Prime Minister" which is beside the point - historically, it did, and it needs information, like that of the Iraq one. Ambivalenthysteria 10:42, 12 Jun 2004 (UTC)
- Listed past Prime Ministers, still needs work though. supadawg 15:57, 12 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Arsinoe IV - Egypt, around the time of Julius Caesar. I hope the scholarship is better than the writing. Not even consistent on the spelling of the person it is about. -- Jmabel 08:32, Jun 12, 2004 (UTC)
Cobra probe - er, what is it? Needs copyediting, context, wikification, and information. Sub-stub, pretty much.
Global Business Network - Aside from one bit of obvious POV (which I'll fix) there's something that just seems wrong about this article. Someone help?
- Certainly not our standard style & might be self-promotion. Still, I'm sure there is an article here, and I know that enough of these people are connected to one another that their inclusion in such a network does not strain credulity. There's an article here worth having, even if this is not yet it. -- Jmabel 08:34, Jun 12, 2004 (UTC)
The Ataris turn timeline into prose, fact-check carefully (has been target of Michaelish disinformation vandals in the past)
- Have sucessfully turned timeline into lovely prose. Still needs fact-checking.
More than a week old
June 11
American Eagle flight 4184 - hard to understand.
Ex parte Endo - Apparently important court case, relating to Japanese-American internment during World War II. Article is stubby & unwikified (& needs copy edit). -- Jmabel
Akmal - Is this verifiable? No Google hits for "akmal tightrope seattle". -- Jmabel
Shimizu Tetsuo - super substub: birth & death dates are the same; cannot find any information on the author by Google to correct with (authors found on Google are scientists). Geogre
Free networks - POV, sub-stub, might be obsolete
Port Adelaide Enfield - about a place in Australia, looks promotional as it stands. -- Jmabel
Express - poorly written stub about a clothing company. -- Jmabel
Kuwaiti oil fires - there is no article about the fires themselves, just a dispute between two scientists on their possible impact on the environment.
- I took a swipe at it. I will leave it to the nominator to remove the "dispute" and original content, if my revision is sufficient. Geogre
Security Armored Express - looks self-promotional, but might be encyclopedia-worthy. Needs rewrite if it's worth keeping. -- Jmabel
Shape dissection - written like textbook, not encyclopedia article. If it's a copyvio, it's not of anything Google finds, so probably just clean it up. -- Jmabel
Blag looks more like a candidate for vfd than cleanup. - Lady Lysine Ikinsile
Dudd Dudley - unwikifeid lower half, make sure there are no copyright issues: it looks slightly suspect to me. -- Jmabel
Ralph Lane - needs wikification, could be copyvio. -- Jmabel
Love Hina incidental characters== Huh?
Stephen Nichols another substub for our endless amusement. - Lucky 6.9
New Flyer - Stub. Who feels like expanding it? Grunt
June 10
Birmingham Wire Gauge Company I copy edited this a bit (from awful up to bad). It needs fact-checking, expansion, references. The IP address of the original creator is one of a series used by User:Nick Boulevard. See also Talk:Birmingham. Andy Mabbett
Eiko Kadono, Second paragraph of this stub is almost incomprehensible (author of paragraph writes: "She published Kiki in 1985. She's a very kind and generous person.", but then goes to explain the mother's kindness and generosity.). Somebody who knows the story needs to clarify exactly who the kind and generous one is, and give an appropriate example. See also Talk:Eiko Kadono.
William Campbell is credibility-challenged.
Overachievement is a 2-sentence sub stub, and if NPOV'd right now would end up as 1 sentence. Needs content.
Grant Show substub from the anonymous moron, pretty much useless as is.
Myalgic encephalomyelitis - Cut and paste from technical medical source.
Aswang - POV, no wikis. Aswangs are apparently preternatural creatures in Filipino folklore, but the guy wrote this as if they're real.
Moral core - I'm not sure what this article says, or if it's even a concept. I think it should be merged with something else or clarified as to what it means. Just sloppy.
Count Charles Andreas Kinsky - needs wikifying, fact checking, and it reads as if it might come from some external (print?) source. And who is "Father Octavius"?? Lupo
Control theory equation example 1 Certainly a useless title; I suspect this should be integrated into Control theory, the only article that references it. -- Jmabel
American analog set unwikified
Guardo - Medium-length article apparently put through a translation program. In a few places the translation makes no sense. SWAdair | Talk
June 9
Civil Rights Act of 1957 - at best, an unwikified mess that begins in mid-thought. At worst, a copyvio
The Heatskores - Copyvio? At best, an unwikified, POV screed.
Quality engineering - cut and paste from external site. Needs work. - From [1], could require a complete rewrite, probably better to start from scratch. - porge
Vespin Love Kit seems like legitimate band, if small. Currently bordering on vanity page
Aramaean same author as the more substantial mess at Chaldeans
Broadway Is My Beat just a stub but needs wikification (and content rephrasing?)
June 8
Departmentalization Strangely headered. -- user:zanimum + re-headered, cleaned up text a bit, but still needs some work - porge
Enjoy Incubus Just a track listing in HTML (non-wiki) format. sub-stub as it wasn't a particularly history-changing album. --Long, Tall Texan
Doncaster East needs context, wikification
Mary White lacks context.
Levantine Arabic - sub-stub
Polynesian mythology - little description, mostly a jumbled unnavigable list.
Steve Zodiac - Currently a fanboy entry. Person seems real (not VFD), but needs massive NPOV and sensibility edit.
Personal luxury car Desperately needs attention. (1) Rename to American personal luxury car and (2) a real good edit - Disagree on point 1, rename reverted. Name is not ambiguous; articles do not need tagging in title with nationality of term usage. Plz discuss on talk page. Point 2 taken; improvements certainly possible. —Morven
Joe Ryan Abu Ghraib diary April 2004 source text
Luchenbach - see notes on its talk page, + now wikified and linked to Luckenbach, Texas, but still needs a little attention.
Granny knot - Strange formatting
Yuming - malformatted
Meenas - Good content, poor English - needs puntuation, spelling and grammer tidied up and wikification.
Wolf Szmuness - wikify, probably some misc attention needed
Andrew L. Harris - needs cleanup, copy editing and condensing.
Culmer family - format language
June 5-6
Menahem Pressler POV
Directive - disambiguation, stub or VfD? See Talk:Directive --Hdk 14:14, 6 Jun 2004 (UTC)
"Transport on The Amazon" - navel gazing
- Moved this to a version without quotation marks (redirect in place). It needs merging with Amazon River or simply deletion due to prattle. JFW | T@lk 16:37, 9 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Girlfriend Of Steel - anyone familiar with Evangelion? Does this exist?
John Danforth needs fmt work, re-structuring, more on accomplishments in U.S. Senate, more on recent UN Ambassador nom
Contributions by User:64.252.89.86 - see special:contributions/64.252.89.86, special:contributions/69.37.75.93
Owlman - seems not to be patent nonsense [2], but needs further investigation, as in further research I mean. Dunc_Harris|☺
Oropharyngeal lesion - wikify, possible copyvio
Mini Pato - copyedit
Fresnel integral -insert equations & images nicer, text needs to flow, is now a jumble
Ranked Majority Defeat Disqualification - ugly lack of wikification
How to Heal Traumas -- Probaby just needs some TLC, emphasizing from the beginning that the articles concerns psychological (not physical) traumas, moving further from the base copyrighted text (see article history), etc. SWAdair | Talk
June 4
Convalescence - dicdef at present, but might be expandable.
Nancy Sullivan - a totally vacuous sub-stub
Paladin class starship - needs context
LIN Television - I really have no idea what this person's talking about...wikify, gram, fact-check
Lisa Crystal Carver, Cindy Dall, Costes, - all POV by same author
Johann Philipp von Stadion wikfy expand
Phineas Pett poss copy vio, wikify
George Kalafatis needs some more context
June 3
Boynton_v._Virginia - source text in last half
FNN DATE LINE I cleaned up everything I could actually understand, but it was poorly translated from the Japanese article and some of it is incomprehensible. Probably needs someone who can either read & understand the Japanese or research independently. -- Jmabel 09:07, 3 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Paper Computer Game wikify, fact check
Amin al-Majaj wikify
Labor and industrial relations poss copy vio: if not wikify, condense
Rainbow Brite expand, wikify
Nix 5-6 wikify, add more info
Katalyst needs more NPOVing
Nezahualcóyotl one line, needs expansion
Sangli wikify, remove POV, verify accuracy
egg (person) Listed as needing cleanup?
More than two weeks old
June 2
Portuguese personal pronouns - context and formatting
Sailor Art Thomas - substub
Ikkakumon - wikify, align with other digimon articles
South Azerbaijan unwikified, POV
Ethics of technology not an article
The Farewell Sermon. Check copyright; I guess the translation could be copyrighted. Write introduction. Thue
- Source text - replaced with a stub and link to wikisource. Still needs a better introduction. --Robert Merkel 02:24, 18 Jun 2004 (UTC)
Center for the Advancement of Genomics ad
Vivisection A complete mess needs some NPOVing and some ordering
Gramophone Awards unformatted, no intro
Guard tone more explanation
Battle of Vysehrad needs major copyediting, wikify
May 31 - June 1
El Oro rewrite
Spring Creek, Oklahoma - Major copyedits, wikis and additional facts needed - Lucky 6.9
Integrate Departments of Bolivia with the departments added here [3].
CEMAC Looks like an ad. Rewrite or list on vfd.
Permanent press sub-stub, poss dict def
Muzafer Sherif format, fact verify
Atelier sub-stub
Code 128 poss copy vio, format and explain more clearly
Battle of Khadesh and Battle of Kadesh (Redirected from Battle of Qadesh) - the accounts seem similar. Same battle. Merge.
Ward Churchill - substub
E paul du pont - substub
Funchain ad for a website? GreatWhiteNortherner
- I vote it gets moved to VfD. Long, Tall Texan 19:45, Jun 9, 2004 (UTC)
The University of Sri Lanka is written like an ad, but too important to delete. Needs rewrite.
Australia v England 2001 is a incomplete news report and Jam2k
Rafael Alers - substub
Water jet rapids in need of help. Tom-
May 29-30
Punjab University and Panjab University - duplicate articles, must be merged. Apparently, Punjab University was recently renamed as Panjab University. Also more detail is required about the institution. Jam2k
Offal - dict. def.
List of Presidents of Madrid put the entire listing in table format, the rest of the article badly needs wikification. All links lead to non-existent pages Jam2k
Fireball Zone needs context. Who is the band or artist?
Roquepertuse wikify, format
Tourism in Egypt wikify, format
Avant garde metal unwikified needs complete rewrite
John C. Stennis Space Center - IRC channel sez: <DopefishJustin> looks too poorly written to be copyvio
May 28
Anon user 69.37.176.35 insists on posting sub-stubs regarding TV shows, B-movies and their actors. Content is obviously valid, but how does one show this individual how to do it right? - Lucky 6.9. IPs used:
- 64.252.53.43
- 69.37.176.35
- 64.252.172.185
- 69.37.40.95
- 64.252.165.90
George Gabashvili - wikification
- improved the page a bit, but not I still think it needs more work MvD 11:33, June 11, 2004
Duca de Northumbria - unwikified, poss copy vio
Carver Mead is a sub-stub about the founder of Foveon Electronics in Santa Clara. - Lucky 6.9
Psychology of torture - overwrought hysterical tone needs desensationalizing -- Rewrote a few grafs, but there's lots more to tackle. KeithTyler
Columbia College of Columbia University wikification
Moe Smith - sub-stub
Da Band - needs info, copyediting, wikification. (aka, needs a lot of help.)
May 26-27
Vultures (band) - unwikfied, famous?
Metanephridium - need biology professional
Urogenital opening sub-stub, need medical professional
Project Censored reads like a press release
Caraga, Davao Oriental personal account
Guadalupe Caracara - unformatted, incoherent. Fuzheado
Megan Marshak - totally unwikified, not a copy vio
List of murdered porn stars - unwikified, inaccurate (L.F.)?=
Sabine Herold - format
Koos de la Rey - wikify. Very POV, perhaps need total rewrite.
Jubilo Iwata - bad english.
Miscible - unwikified dict. def.
Stars are falling - wikifi, POV.
Shivneri fort - needs some explanations
Saitwal - some translation?
Elitesecurity fmt, famous?
May 25
Maxim Kammerer - wikify
Rollout photography - unformatted, unwikified
Mizuame, Suikazura - unwikified substubs.
Palmas Del Mar Beach Resort - Reads like an ad. Wikify.
Selhurst Park unformatted
These anon contributions - Not vandalism, but clearly promoting a set of related web sites. I'm not sure what to do with these but am loathe to leave them as they are. UninvitedCompany
Kedarnath, Badrinath - Wikify, merge with other articles?
Duchsustus - Wikify.
Telegraph code only info on chinese telegraph
Kenneth E. Boulding unformatted (copyvio?)
Untitled Brain/Buckethead/Bernie Worrell Collaboration - retitle? wikify
Pawel Delag - stub, wikify, english, general lookover
Political history and modern state of the inhabitants of the Alps - Really needs help.
Mutor - substub, encyclopedic? Andrewa
May 23-24
Francisco I. Madero - parts of it very poorly written, needs editing
Espelands Falls - google cannot find Skrijkofossen (the rest seems to be true)
Artesian - looks like three different dicdef's put together. Kieff
KREWE OF MID CITY - Really ugly. unformatted, unwikified. I was really close to listing this on VfD but I thought that it's possibly encyclopedic. blankfaze | ♫
- This entry is copied word for word from their web site.Sketchy
Vincenzo Balsamo - unwikified article. little relation to person. needs biography of Balsamo Yardcock
Indian numerology - does not make any sense. Needs complete re-write from someone who knows astrology. Jam2k
David Weiss HaLivni - format
Post-war Germany vs post-war Japan - rename, rewrite, and if all else fails, vfd
Biodanza - some context?
Verbal Behavior - we never stop talking
- truly awful. Anyone who's ever read any B. F. Skinner should be able to do better than this, even if they hate every word he says. It's not even POV, it's just vacuous. seglea
ModPlug Tracker slightly POV
May 21-22
Otto Maria Carpeaux - needs extensive NPOVing and wikification
Maldivian Democratic Party - needs NPOV editing
Igigi, Nanium, Imi, Elulu, Shu-turul - sub-stubs.
Xu Chu - seems to possibly be a mix of fact and fiction Guanaco
Coleman Medal, spekkie, Gary Ablett, need cleanup. Newbie User:Skankfest created. valid articles I think, but need tweaks, preferably from someone who knows about Aussie football. Duncharris
Nelson Goodman - needs more serious account, NPOV
C.L.SF.N.S - needs wikification, fails Google test (see full name in article)
Poul Schlüter not sentences
- Also, needs someone who knows about him to work on it. There's not enough clear info. Astarael
Pashtunwali - Needs links, NPOV, correcting of vowel-less deity names and other idiosyncratic spellings; contains self-contradictions. - Various edits and wikifications, still needs much work... --Eequor
How to care for a pet cockatoo was listed on VfD consensus to keep but needs TLC
Shri Mataji Nirmala Shrivastava - Seriously POV
Sting (wrestler) - Spelling, grammar, links, style, tone and content.
- Fixed first paragraph, but I don't know enough about wrestling to be able to help the rest. PMC
- Copyed entire doc, rewikified. Still new to this - style, tone OK? bcordes
May 20
Photohydrogen - substub
Pashtun - rather POV and subjective, lacking depth, and not all that well written - Jmabel
Andrew L. Harris - big mess of sentence fragments
Obdurodon - needs much work. Copyvio?
Looking at United States Naval reactor rthere are some discrepancies between the vessels listed under each reactor type and the reactors namd in the articles describing the individual reactors and vessels (e.g. S3G reactor, USS Will Rogers (SSBN-659), USS Gato (SSN-615) and USS Triton (SSN-586). This will have to be sorted out by somebody with accurate knowledge!
Daniel Bell Wakefield - Wikifying and cleanup needed. + major tidy-up and wikify - New Zealand historian needed to do more work Paul W
Meiringen-Innertkirchen Bahn babelfish bot?
The annual customs - needs context, relation to Dahomey (merge?)
Software engineering demographicsNeeds to be wikified...but it looks like some of it might be copyrighted.
Zogam seems like a copyvio, but nothing on google
Mary L. Cleave, Mark N. Brown, Martin J. Fettman unwikified NASA people
Udit Narayan and Alka Yagnik - POV, style
May 18-19
27Mhz CB27/81 Bandplan. No context.
Muster - Needs to be clarified, and connected with Texas A&M, probably should be added to the Texas A&M page
Managing Urban America - Reads choppily. Needs general work, too many quotes.
Ratfiv programming language style, layout, some wikif.
Jakki Degg, Melinda Messenger, Jinty Stewart, Jane Swinnerton - all very brief, unwikified bios. - Added to Melinda Messenger, enough? Rory ☺
Southern All Stars - messy
- There is also a little POV at the end. Astarael
RACA and all it's related pages need verification, POV-ectomies, copyright status checking, and wikification.
More than a month old
May 14-17
Lach - A band, apparently, and I almost speedied it, then almost VfD'd it, and now I wonder if it should perhaps be salvaged. Not much use in its present condition, I'm afraid. UninvitedCompany
ISO 3166-2:SO - needs some type editing/wikification
STF - poss. disambig, ugh indeed
Mahatma Jyotirao Phule - format
Toledoth_Yeshu - totally incoherent - copied directly from Sources about Jesus Christ
Please see http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Special:Contributions&target=64.252.170.3. The user has created a large number of one-sentence stubs
Sousveillance and inverse surveillance need merging and dePOVing
Specialist lexicon - poster waas mostly posting back whole chunks of Wikipedia under wrong names, mixed with apparent copyvio risks -- this is a sub-stub of what remains...
Silver Jews - needs work from someone who has an idea what it's about.
May 10-13
HMCS Baffin - needs rewrite to make it an article, not list, plus wikify
Cloudless Sulphur - copy edit, formatting -copyvio, see [4]
Aramaean needs fewere quotes. should be merged with Arameans
Metapsychology, Anamnesis in Traumatic Incident Reduction, Frank A. Gerbode, Traumatic Incident Reduction all are long quacky POV (have copy permission)
Direct therapeutic exposure Needs context, content. Says who first used it, what books talk about it, but never what IT is.
Organ transplant -- gives conflicting information on when the first heart-lung transplant occured (and this is a front-page featured anniversary!). Page states both 1981 and 1987 as the first. Some cursory research shows 1981 may be right but I don't have a definitive source. PxT
Caribbean Basin Trade and Partnership Act taken from govt source; needs more wikifying, and some editing.Alcarillo
TVCG 3 - is it the main network or only the entertainment channel?
Democratic egalitarianism dic definition
Video game industry practices needs NPOV +perhaps we could incorporate this into video game industry?
Pharaoh gives different years than articles on individual Pharaohs (e.g. Amenhotep I or Thutmose I of Egypt). There are disputes about Egyptian chronology but could we try to be consistent between different articles?
Mehdi Mahdavikia needs more links, content, less newspaper crap language +added some links, but I don't know the man Sid 14:00, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
May 4-7
Soviet tank production during World War II - lacks insightful layout, should be renamed list in it's current form. - MGM 08:36, May 6, 2004 (UTC)
National Chi Nan University - proper formatting; grammar Alcarillo
Statism- The article as written seems to need work on NPOV. Sounds like an entry from the Encyclopedia of Libertarianism. Gwimpey
Tanaji Malusare needs context and formatting
Egg tempera unwikified, format
Chromophil substance - needs context and copyedit
Lockergnome forums needs to be rewritten or deleted (was on vfd)
Copy info from List of books by award or notoriety into List of prizes, medals, and awards and vice versa, create some link between these lists to prevent redundancy
Mystic Records could use a sentence
Historia Britonum - cut down excessive quotes?
Vinnish is this accurate?
May 1-3
Will to Power mostly just quotes
James Blake - Somebody needs to make an article out of what is currently a wall poster Chancemill
Vinnie Vincent - needs wikifying, possible fact-check, NPOV, etc. Similarly, Mark St. John, Bruce Kulick, although those look better. Possibly worth checking other KISS related entries too.
Chinese nobility - needs to cover noble titles up to the Qing Dynasty
Louis Crane unformatted
Ian McKenzie Anderson - unwikifed, noteworthy enough?
Gaetano Badalamenti only DOB and DOD
U.S. Marine Corps Force Reconnaissance - needs edit to a user-friendly article directed to the general public (has a lot of military terms).
Ezo - wikify, update (taken from 1911 encyclopedia)
John Demjanjuk looks like story was unfinished, even before yesterday's news that his deportation is underway. --Jerzy(t)
April 26-30
Colon Hydrotherapy (Colonics) Clearly this article has got issues.
Oakworth Hall sounds like sales brochure
Futami Jouwa from vfd, no consensus, needs tidying up
Agent 212 unwikified, lacking context
Daryl F. Mallett - fan article about some SciFi editor. Needs massive trimming and rewrite, removing of excessive linking, trimming bibliography, fact check (I couldn't verify the film credits). Maybe even a copyvio? But from where? Lupo
Feijoada completa recipe, style, to wikibooks?
Spiritual socialism POV, context
Bear Son Tale huh? context, relevance, etc.
Boris V. Morukov has been wikified, needs to be structured
Asana - needs some NPOV and cleanup from someone who knows about this.
Community inquiry labs - needs context
Berenger Sauniere - needs fact-checking and possibly NPOV. Google search suggests that he's controversial and/or surrounded by some conspiracy theories and legends.
April 20-25
Srila Vishnupada, H.D.G. Ramakrishnananda Swami - puff piece, profoundly POV.
Property damage - VfD voted to keep and list on cleanup, see Talk:Property damage. -- Graham :) | Talk
University of Kentucky - Needs a lot of help. Apparently nothing of consequence is taught there (I thought as much), so sports are its only focus. -- Smerdis of Tlön
Authorial intentionality - needs an English major to sort it out.
Tom Wisniewski, Yuri Ruley - just bulleted lists
Toaster museum author doesn't seem to know anything about it -[5] for your reference Ed Cormany
IO-APIC - incomprehensible to a layman, lacks links
- The topic is one which probably should be thus. Links to interrupt and API might be good. It's not bad (of its ilk) as of today. ww 15:18, 20 May 2004 (UTC)
April 17-19
Agent Cody Banks - outdated information, info on sequel needed. - MGM 07:43, Apr 20, 2004 (UTC)
RJ Sternberg - sub-stub, famous?
Velocette unwikified, in timeline format
Concupiscence - Extant request from 2002 for theologically trained Catholic & Protestant to review this article.
Marine aquarium fish species - Subedit, tone of voice
Remote concentrator - Some sort of telephone exchange multiplexor?
Soundhog - unwikified, needs a lot of work.
Bread and Roses - not sure if it's a copyvio, but it is POV. Rick
- Poem is from 1912, so its fair game. I've reworked the article a bit to make it less POV. It may or may not still need cleanup, someone else should make that judgment. -- Jmabel 05:35, Jun 16, 2004 (UTC)
Patient empowerment -- unresolved factual dispute
ARY Group grammar, POV
Cyprus Mines Corporation - not written like a encyclopedia article
More than two months old
April 14-16
Scenario planning - interesting but unsure about reliability of "A step-by-step guide to scenario planning" (contained in article)
Venedes - uh? Can anyone make sense of this? About Wends, no? Good idea to merge and save anything useable about the historic names for them.
SMDS - incomprehensible sub stub.
Mnemonic link system - needs major rework, doesn't give definition, mainly list of links currently.
Liberalism and conservatism in Latin America - needs context/merging, unwikified
Tomb of Shah Jamal - unwikified sub-stub
Precising definition - lacks precision, definition and much else Charles Matthews
April 10-13
K. M. Peyton unresolved comment in article.
QR algorithm - seems to be a topic, but needs better context and info.
Sonata da chiesa - no context, unwikified
Abbotsford Saints - Regina Storm - Kamloops Critters - Nanaimo Navigators - Red Deer Outlaws - Lethbridge Dust Devils - All are said to be a part of the Canadian Baseball League, but that league no longer exists. +They were supposed to play there in 2002 season but I'm not sure if the 2002 season actually took place. Andris
Sanctification - messy, unwikfied only from a Christian POV
Cometbus, unwikified, POV
Iraqi Revolution Command Council - very little information - needs expansion, wikification
List of postal codes in Poland — All the Polish characters are broken; might need introductory paragraph; should probably all be wikified
April 1-9
Walo is it Walo or Wala?, wikify, expand
Casablanca class escort carrier - Majority of carriers on this list have empty information tables.
Morios - unwikified
Chanco - almost fine but states that he was born ca. 1624 and participiated in events that took place in 1622. One of those must be wrong.
- No longer states birthdate, but still reads like a fairy tale. Historically questionable.
The Fever - The Twilight Zone episode, needs making clear what it is at start. Also may need structure tweaking.
- I gave it a first sentence -- Jmabel 05:17, Jun 16, 2004 (UTC)
Incompetence - copyed, expand. Could be fun. Denni
Nurse assistant skills, only partially wikified
Preschool education has a rewrite, but needs more.
Wachovia Bank of Georgia - the building or the company?
Ito Noriko - sub-stub
March 26-31
Symbolics seems to repeat itself; also some overlap with Lisp machine.
Wilderness first aid Needs either serious professional attention or serious deletions.
Half Caste - poem explanation needs expanding, poem itself should be cut to a small quote or moved to wikisource
Lea Bridge and Lea Bridge road currently only the location, can anything else be added?
E-Work - marketing-speak -- Khym Chanur
March 21-25
Sarah Gordon expand, wikify, format, famous?
Toll-like receptor - need a lot more context, sub-stub
Geodesy for the layman - needs rewrite to sound encyclopedic
- nonononono it needs to be moved to Wikibooks, which was made for things like it. -- EmperorBMA / ブライアン 22:27, 10 Apr 2004 (UTC)
Copyright Act of 1976 sub-stub, needs huge help from someone who knows anything about the act
[[Communes_of_the_Calvados_d%E9partement]] - many articles need the empty sections commented out, and the stub message added