Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Jordanhill railway station/archive1

Jordanhill railway station

Meets all the criteria - Lets roll with this --Nick Catalano _contrib ^talk 02:23, 7 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Good job! Some minor fixes needed:

The info in note 3 is repeated at the end of the lead. Either delete the former or the latter. (I suggest the former)
"The 2005 book White Rage, by Campbell Armstrong, includes scenes at this station." should either not be included or put in a trivia or "in popular culture" section. (doesn't fit under "History")

Mikker ^... 02:42, 7 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Comment Wow...our millionth article has gotten so much attention that it's a FAC in a week. Just wow. — Ilyan e p (Talk) 02:43, 7 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Impressive work in a week, but object:

No discussion of station itself: building materials, architectural qualities, etc. Possibly a map of the station interior would be helpful here.
"The 2005 book White Rage, by Campbell Armstrong, includes scenes at this station." - is there some significance to this? Why is it in the "History" section, of all places?
"In the area" can't really qualify as a fully formed section (or as actual prose, for that matter).
The gallery looks out of place in such a small article. If the pictures cannot be positioned within the text, perhaps they don't need to be included, as we already link to Commons?
The narrow-wide-narrow set of templates at the bottom should be arranged in a more aesthetic fashion. Maybe remove the third one entirely, as I don't really see what it adds to the article.

Finally, some more information on the type of trains servicing the station—both currently and throughout the station's history—might provide some more substance to the article; but this isn't strictly necessary. —Kirill Lok s hin 02:57, 7 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Object, quite inadequate at the moment -- needs information on the history of its construction, e.g. who designed it, how much did it cost, physical improvements through history, etc. How many employees does it have? etc. And I concur with Kirill Lokshin on some of the aesthetic concerns. Well-referenced, but the paucity of physical references suggest that the current article is mainly a result of combing internet sources. Christopher Parham (talk) 03:22, 7 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Weak Oppose one minor point is this It is located near the Jordanhill Campus of the University of Strathclyde and the Jordanhill School then it repeated in the In the area section complete with links. Gnangarra 03:30, 7 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]