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Thanks and Requests !

Dear Aaqib,

Hope you are doing well with your assignments. Thank you very much for the continuous support and help. I have removed most of the external links from the article. I have cited most of it but still doing. Please can you have a look at the article and let me know if I have been doing it right or not. Kindly let me know if there's any thing I missing in the citing.

Thank you again for your help. Kinect regards, Ayesha Ayesha Mallik (talk) 04:17, 3 May 2020 (UTC)

@Ayesha Mallik:, Fixed that, moved some content from the lead to Career. A number of main issues in the article are still without any citations. Anyways, you have done a good work. The article needs some fixes and tone and references so that it is moved to mainspace without any issues. - Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 14:51, 3 May 2020 (UTC)

Thank you again Aaqib! Hope you are well. If it's possible, please can you suggest what parts/paragraphs of the draft of the article we need more citations and references. Please can you make a list of parts where we need citations. Any improvements you suggest ? Ayesha Mallik (talk) 00:27, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

Dear @Ayesha Mallik: I'm almost done with my assignments and most probably maybe be able to look at this issue by today evening. Best. - Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 06:45, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

@Ayesha Mallik:, the early life section needs citations to prove the claims made. Parts in the career section go without citations like:

1. )

   While, Yasir Akhtar was 19 years old, he launched the first ever musical drama serial ‘French Toast’ based on a story of the struggle of musical band in 1995. The seven episode drama serial was way ahead of it’s time. The drama serial was aired on Zee TV in the UK and U.S.A as well as on NTM in Pakistan.

2. )

   ‘Mere Ghar Aik Whirlpool’ was the first ever branded drama serial of Pakistan in 1999. The popular serial started a new trend of brand placement in a subtle way between the scenes of drama productions. The project was sponsored by Phillips - Whirlpool. ‘Mera Ghar Aik Whirlpool launched the careers of Nida Yasir, Adeel Hayat Ansari, Naeem Shaikh, Salman Saqib Sheikh (Hira Mani’s husband) and many others.

3. )

   Yasir Akhtar and his film production company – Pegasus Productions has produced productions for leading organizations like NHS (National Health Service) in the United Kingdom, Phillips, Jazz, Manchester City Council, Mobilink, Whirlpool, EBM – Peak Freans, Gillette, Bradford Council, B4U Music, Tapal Tea, Unilever, Lipton, Brooke Bond – Supreme and many more. Yasir Akhtar has been actively organizing many events for [High Commission for Pakistan] and Bradford. Yasir Akhtar’s productions has been broadcasted successfully on BBC, PTV Home, Zee TV, Sony TV, B4U Music, Geo TV, ARY digital and many other leading channels worldwide.

4. )

   Yasir Akhtar launched the musical band ‘The Arid Zone’] with his friends Kamran Jelani (Keyboards) and Shareb Jaffer (Guitarist). The band took Yasir Akhtar to new heights of fame, nationwide people started loving the performance style and the melodious voice of Yasir Akhtar. ‘The Arid Zone’ became the top band of Pakistan alongside Vital Signs, Strings and Junoon. The band started their journey by performing at the Kidney Centre’s ‘Walk a Cause’ at the Boating Basin, Karachi.

5. )

   ‘The Arid Zone’ started a new trend of concerts in Pakistan. After the success of the first album, the musical group released their second album ‘The Arid Zone - Jogi’in 1997. In 2001, Yasir Akhtar released a solo album ‘Yasir-My Love'. The album released successful songs like Aye Sanam, My Love, Chan Mai, SurMai Sey Shaam and many more. The music videos of this album launched the careers of Zara Sheikh (filmstar) and Tooba Siddiqui (model and actress)

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6. )

   Besides having succesful concerts in Pakistan and United Kingdom, Yasir Akhtar has performed internationally in New York, Chicago, California, Washington DC, Greece, Spain and more. Yasir Akhtar’s musical performances and interviews have been aired on B4U Music, Zee TV, MTV Pakistan, PTV Network, Sony Entertainment, BBC Asian Network and many other prominent television channels.

Please add relevant citations at these places. - Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 14:32, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

Dear Aaqib,

Hope you are well and you have completed your assignments well. Thank you for detailed suggestions. I have added all the citations. Please check and kindly let me know if I need to do more.

Thank you again for your patience and sincere cooperation. Ayesha Mallik (talk) 01:28, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

@Ayesha Mallik:. I've added citation tags wherever citations are required. You may use a single references at multiple places, if claims are verified by that. Best. - Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 02:18, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Dear Aaqib,

Thank you for the suggestions. I have added the citations but still confused about the 'fanpov', i did try to do but couldn't. Please can you add a structure with blank spaces, I will add the details. Also, on the main profile image Yasir Akhtar is written twice on top and bottom of the image. How can we remove to ? Please help/. Ayesha Mallik (talk) 01:14, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

@Ayesha Mallik: I suppose you are talking about caption? Let the fanpov tag be there and submit it for re-review. Any AfC reviewer may check it accordingly. Thanks - Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 05:20, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Asslamualaikum Aaqib,

Thank you for the reply. Please I need to complete the fanpov. Also, I will be reediting the draft and will be toning it down soon. We should not submit it now for AFC reviewing until we are completely satisfied with the draft.

Kindest regards,

Ayesha Mallik (talk) 19:54, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

@Ayesha Mallik:… You should possibly not use we here. Maintenance templates are normal routine of Wikipedia, and I don't think we should fear them. Once addressed, an editor is free to remove the tag. The article has no issues of either WP:GNG, WP:SIGCOV and other related criterion. You may submit it for AfC, any reviewing editor would notice it accordingly. However, there are minor POV issues in early life section which you should address. Best - Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 20:07, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Dear Aaqib,

Thank you for the help. I just need to go through the article tonight and then afterwards I will submit it. I would like to make the box (POV), most of the wikipedia articles have the details in the POV. Just trying to sort out.

Many thanks Ayesha Mallik (talk) 20:18, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

@Ayesha Mallik: - POV means point of view. Please see WP:NPOV - Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 20:21, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Dear Aaqib,

Thank you again. I am checking the article again and will try to take care of POV issues. Please have a look at Hadiqa's wikipedia , there is a yellow info box with her main profile image https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hadiqa_Kiani. How can I make a box like that with all the details. That's a standard way of having a profile on every personality's article. Kindly help. Ayesha Mallik (talk) 22:33, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

@Ayesha Mallik: Open the article in editor and checkout what infobox has been used there. Best - Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 23:01, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Dear Aaqib,

I am still editing the article. As soon as I complete in a day or so I will let you know for a review.

Many thanks Ayesha Mallik (talk) 01:55, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

dyk credit

Can I add your name to the DYK nom too....Do You Remember Kunan Poshpora?....DTM (talk) 14:53, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Template:Did you know nominations/Do You Remember Kunan Poshpora? DTM, you can try adding alt hooks... (talk) 14:54, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Dear DTM, Believe me I have no idea that how DYK works. However, I agree with your nomination of this book for DYK. Best - Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 15:00, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Wikify

Asalam o Alekum,

Please wikify Draft:Muhammad Ali Mirza. Umpteen Thanks in advance.— Hammad (Talk!) 15:26, 9 May 2020 (UTC)