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Senator

There was a very careless mistake in this article that said that her father was a state senator. Her father was a restaurateur. --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) 07:45, 26 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

FBI Files

Comment: It's helpful to have the external link taking readers to the FBI files for this individual. Would it be possible to repair the link-- it doesn't appear to be working as it should.--Historytrain (talk) 19:14, 21 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

A more encyclopedic tone

OSSU - Personally, I think this is an outstanding article. Written with considerable care and obviously well researched, I applaud your hard work. While it reads with ease and a nice flow, I think some would say that it needs more of an encyclopedic tone. For example: in the Townhouse explosion section, you paint a very realistic picture of the scene, but in an emotional sense more than a factual one. Consider going through the article and see where is should focus on the facts rather than descriptions.

Also, it does not appear that you have any citations in the "peanut" or opening paragraph? 69.19.14.28 (talk) 07:22, 30 November 2007 (UTC)OSSU[reply]

Citations

I'm putting a tag on this article because of the style of citations. They are not in accordance with wikipedia styly. Something like "Time Magazine" is not a sufficient citation at all. Murderbike 22:22, 2 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I had kept the Time magazine citation and reference because it was part of the original entry for Diana Oughton, it has now been changed.Crmforclass 05:21, 3 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Links

the link to the Weather Underground Organization (Weatherman (organization) in the opening paragraph is not working. I tried to change it but the whole think looks correct and now matter how many spaces I add or take out, the link still does not work! Please help!

It actually didn't need to be linked since it's linked about three sentences before that. Murderbike (talk) 03:32, 7 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I just tried it again, the very first reference to the Weathermen in the opening sentence, and the link doesn't work. I click on the one that is linked, but it doesn't take me to the proper site.--Lalalajane (talk) 00:19, 14 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed, sorry about that. Murderbike (talk) 00:22, 14 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

think we fixed it at the same time... haha--Lalalajane (talk) 00:23, 14 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Reference to Indians -- Guatemala Section

It should be noted that the reference to "Indians" should be clarified as indigenous people or North American Indians.

User: ChrisTi, April 21, 2008

Tragic?

The Townhouse Explosion was the tragic and dramatic culmination of the grim political direction in which Weatherman had been headed.

Why was the explosion "tragic"? They were killed in the midst of illegally fabricating devices to murder others. If anything, it was karmic. Shawn D. (talk) 17:15, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]