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Metaphysics (Aristotle)

• Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
• Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? This article is neutral. I could not detect any signs of bias and it did not seem as though the authors were trying to persuade readers.
• Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? I believe the early ideas were underrepresented. I was unclear of the beliefs
• Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
• Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? Yes it seems that most of the references are from Greek text.
• Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added? I thought that there should be more information concerning the amount of work Aristotle had on Metaphysics in general. Or at least that it should be mentioned more.
• Check out the Talk page of the article. What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
• How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
• How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?

Peer Review - Bioactive glass

• In the first paragraph, I think it would be helpful to mention what batching is. If I didn't know what it was previously then I wouldn't have known what was being done to the glass.
• Overall, I got a good understanding of bioactive glass from your additions. I have personally researched bioactive glass previously so the additional information was very good.
• I think some pictures of the glass would be beneficial since it is not just regular glass.

Peer Review Response

I'm glad that, overall, you liked it! I agree with your response about the terms "slave" and "free". It seems more appropriate when talking about people because terms like "slave" and "free man" because those terms dehumanize people.

For my edition specifically, I will mention the Dred Scott case because it is important in understanding Lewis' upbringing. It was the reason that his father left his family years later.