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Article evaluation

Regarding the article on To Build a Fire, I have to wonder if the initial section is entirely accurate. The entirety of it is based on one source and it may be confusing for some as they may think parts of the section have no source to draw from. The article is mostly neutral, perhaps the foreshadowing section sways a little but not glaringly so. Also connecting to the section on foreshadowing, it seems to lack further and necessary detail. It is too short to give foreshadowing its justice nor be able to explain, in detail, its use in the story. The links provided for the sources work and the information seems to be still up-to-date. Along with this, the information included in the article reflects previous discussions in class. However, the discussion of multiple versions of the story was not discussed in class before. All in all, it is a solid article that can stand on its own but must be noted that it could use some improvements.