User:Lijil/AfC-feedback

Well done on creating the draft, and it may potentially meet the relevant requirements (including WP:GNG, WP:ANYBIO, WP:NACTOR) but presently it is not clear that it does. You would need to show that he acted in a number of films, but that he had multiple significant roles in notable films (see WP:Notability (films) to find out what counts as a notable film. So don't just list the films, but show what was said about them in reliable, independent sources. Substantial coverage about Applebaum himself in reliable, independent sources would also be helpful.

Please see the articles ‘Your First Article’, ‘Referencing for Beginners’ and ‘Easier Referencing for Beginners’.

Please familiarise yourself with these pages before amending the draft. If you feel you can meet these requirements, then please make the necessary amendments before resubmitting the page. It would help our volunteer reviewers by identifying, on the draft's talk page, the WP:THREE best sources that establish notability of the subject.

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It would also be helpful if you could please identify with specificity, exactly which criteria you believe the page meets (eg "I think the page now meets WP:NACTOR criteria #3, because XXXXX"). Once you have implemented these suggestions, you may also wish to leave a note for me on my talk page and I would be happy to reassess.

Possibly reusable

It is important that you don't make claims that aren't supported by your sources. For example, you wrote that "Party" was "praised for its original voice and emotional resonance" but that is not stated in the source you reference, which is an interview that states the short film is in post-production, so it is not a review of the film.