User talk:Mdoherty44/sandbox

Sophia's Peer Review

Hello, I really like the layout of the article on aquatic therapy. The overview is very thorough, and I think that the section on current variations in its practice is very informative. However, I found that the final two sections, on licensing and therapeutic potential, were a bit small for their relevance to the topic. I think that if you were to increase these sections, it might provide more of a sense of the real world applications of this therapy. Great job!

Charlene's Peer Review

Hey there, You did a great job with the history of aquatic therapy and how the usage of water as therapy has developed overtime. If possible, I think one way to improve the article is to expand even more upon the applications of aquatic therapy. You could also write about the benefits of using aquatic therapy. Other than that your article looks good so far! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Charleneguo (talk • contribs) 16:26, 26 February 2019 (UTC)

Munseong Chang Peer Review

Hi! I thought that this was an extremely informative and interesting topic and article! I liked how you organized the sections and gave overview background before you went into the applications and the processes of aquatic therapy. I definitely learned a lot reading your work! I'm not sure if you're editing an existing article but one thing I would recommend to improve this article is to give a little more information on the definition of aquatic therapy and more information about the different uses and procedures. I also found a fragment sentence in the first paragraph when it says: "in the form of hydrotherapy, with records suggesting that ancient Egyptian, Assyrian, and Mohammedan cultures utilized mineral waters which were thought to have curative properties through the 18th century." it seems like something is missing from that sentence? Other than that the article was well laid out and the sources were nicely placed. Edwarchng (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 23:33, 26 February 2019 (UTC)