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GA review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 01:47, 21 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:24, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:24, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments

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  • He spent the 1986 season on injured reserve and began 1987 there before returning mid-season and playing in four games.-->He spent the 1986 season and part of the 1987 season on injured reserve before returning mid-season and playing in four games.
  • in his last year there
  • USC's win 20–17.-->USC's 20–17 victory.
  • Should his career history include 1988, since he was rostered on the Packers?
  • References:
    • All are consistently formatted
    • All are appropriate for what is being cited
    • Spot checks: since there were only 8, I checked them all
    • Ref 6: the recipient of USC's Howard Jones Incentive Award for best improvement in grade-point average (GPA). this doesn't appear true, the media guide says Matt Koart won this award
      • Koart won the Howard Jones Alumni Club Award (best GPA), while Moore won the Howard Jones Incentive Award (best GPA improvement).
    • Ref 2 lists his degree, this should be added

Nice work. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:11, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.