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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hali Welly (July 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jlwoodwa was:

Your draft shows signs of having been generated by a large language model, such as ChatGPT. Their outputs usually have multiple issues that prevent them from meeting our guidelines on writing articles. These include:

Promotional tone, editorializing and other words to watch
Vague, generic, and speculative statements extrapolated from similar subjects
Essay-like writing
Hallucinations (plausible-sounding, but false information) and non-existent references
Close paraphrasing

Please address these issues. The best way to do it is usually to read reliable sources and summarize them, instead of using a large language model. See our help page on large language models.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Hali Welly and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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jlwoodwa (talk) 02:24, 2 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Bernthefirst! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! jlwoodwa (talk) 02:24, 2 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I appreciate your feedback on the review. After reading your feedback and going through the draft I submitted, I realized I made several errors. With the references, I cite some of the references improperly and even placed a few references by the wrong block of text. I am embarrassed by my bad referencing and I should have taken my time to proofread. I noticed also wrote it so it sounds nice which I think gave it the vagueness, promotional tone, and essay-like flow.

I have made the necessary corrections so it is a factual piece that is straight to the point. I have rewritten everything and adjusted the tone and style so it is neutral. I gone through all the references and corrected all mistakes. I really hope you can review it once again. Also, I will appreciate any direct mistake you can point out. This is my first submission. Bernthefirst (talk) 18:49, 2 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]