User talk:Cmac0520/sandbox

Cmac0520 Peer Review

I think the most important revisions to make are minor. First, I would make sure that "Nesn" is capitalized to be "NESN" everywhere, unless you have sources that consistently do not capitalize the entire abbreviation. I would also make sure proper nouns such as "Facebook" are capitalized. This may seem silly but I would suggest beginning your paragraph by stating that nesn.com is a website. The other paragraphs in the same section all begin by simply stating what the service is, and then they go into describing the services. If you can try to add a little more information, I think that would also be beneficial. Is there more to know about nesn.com? Is there any other section or subsection that seems to be lacking in information? I like your statistic about more men using nesn.com, but I think it could be more useful in a section about NESN's audience.

I think you provide clear information that is accurate and relevant to your topic, which is a definite plus. You do a great job at providing information in a way that is neutral. The FVP (talk) 23:47, 6 March 2018 (UTC)