Wikipedia:Cleanup

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Some editors prefer that helpers work on leftovers and older articles, just to deal with them and get them out of the way. See the cleanup calendar for requests from previous months. But either preference, new or old; all help is appreciated. If you have a cleanup routine, add your name and your routine preferences (how often, old/new articles, what subjects, etc ) to the cleanup routine list.

This month

September 12

William Baylebridge - I assume this person is an author? Rick K 00:13, Sep 12, 2004 (UTC)
Australian poet of philosophical Vitalism and populist nationalism. How attractive that sounds. Hope original contributor has plans for more; if not, I'll add a couple of sentences. Bishonen 01:06, 12 Sep 2004 (UTC)

September 11

Jaroslav jezek--no content, is he real? [[User:Meelar|Meelar (talk)]]
Two-in, two-out firefighting. stub. merge? Dunc_Harris|☺ 22:33, 11 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Obstetrics - Poor for such an important topic. Perhaps some parts of it should be split into other sections (antenatal care and induction, for example). If not, then the sections need quite a bit of work to flesh them out. violet/riga (t)
Cash dog - No idea what this article is about. Needs grammar, wikification, etc. [[User:Mike Storm|Mike∞Storm]] 20:22, 11 Sep 2004 (UTC)
- Vfd'd. [[User:Meelar|Meelar (talk)]] 23:42, Sep 11, 2004 (UTC)
Bill Lonero - needs wikification, grammar, npov, etc. [[User:Neutrality|Neutrality (talk)]] 20:11, 11 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Bananas (album) an album. by whom? POV, etc. Dunc_Harris|☺
Anchor Bay Entertainment - reads like an advertisement and has annoying hard line breaks --Chessphoon
- Not recommending for vfd because Google returns 111,000 results for google:Anchor Bay Entertainment --Chessphoon
- Yuk! I'm removing the promotespeak and linebreaks. Bishonen
- The reason it reads like an advert is because it's straight off the company's website. Send it to Copyright Problems? --rbrwr ˆ
Orchard Road Livajo
Fire-bellied toad--any Tree of Lifers? [[User:Meelar|Meelar (talk)]]
Telecom Tower Berlin-Schaeferberg - another eccentric translation from de: --rbrwr ˆ

re-did translation --Deelkar

Tarita Teriipia - dictionary-style incomplete sentences; list of children differs from that at Marlon Brando which is what worries me most. --rbrwr ˆ

formed complete sentences and linked the text, no particular knowledge of the children, so I let that one be. --Deelkar

Popular culture studies - an essay. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
Greatest Hits: My Prerogative - Little context. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
Outline - surely there's a lot more to be said on outlines. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
Alivaltiosihteeri - Little context. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
Braehead - just needs tidying and a bit of extra content.
The Game (film) - too much list like.
Taouk - prominent family in Lebanon, apparently, I don't know how notable they really are. Stub. Now wikified. --rbrwr ˆ
Talca Province - seems to be about the city rather than the province; not great English --rbrwr ˆ
Take - dicdef; to Wiktionary? --rbrwr ˆ
Inner peace - Missing definition, only quotes that should be moved to Wikiquote. May be this article should go to VFD and get deleted. Andries 12:33, 11 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Kalsubai - Climbing guide for a mountain. Not really an encyclopedic article. Not wikified. Thue | talk
Flask - As it stands, the article is little more than a substub with an ASCII drawing of a flask. -- Bobdoe
Nivea - informal, rambling, and hard to follow.

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Fernando Grillo - needs a lot of help. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
Longitude of the periapsis - I don't understand it, but it needs cleaning. --Chessphoon
Dandelion Wine --Chessphoon
- Made into a substub. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
Internet security -- was the result of someone completely overwriting Computer network security. Another user reverted the rewrite and split this off as its own article. I've cleaned it up a little, but it is a how-to article for protecting your computer and recommends specific software to the reader. Needs attention from someone knowledgeable who can remove the adspeak but leave the core info. Might be better placed at Network security, which is currently a redirect to Computer security.
Slaughter house - a set of rules for a playground game. Unclear.

September 10

Quartz monzonite --[[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 02:41, Sep 11, 2004 (UTC)
National Academy for Gifted and Talented Youth — in urgent need of NPOV. Reads like an advertisement. Bishonen
Brown-Sequard syndrome - very rough. Subject has potential for a good article, but needs content. --Senca 23:25, 10 Sep 2004 (UTC)
- +I wikified and categorized. It's in complete English sentences now at least. Still very short. —Rory ☺
Psi ball - pseudoscientific term that needs wikification and de-POVing. Livajo 23:03, 10 Sep 2004 (UTC)
- Wingmakers and Biokinesis. More articles from the same user. Livajo 23:22, 10 Sep 2004 (UTC)
  - I claened it up a bit but It needs a check on how widespread this belife isGeni 05:39, 11 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Final Cut Pro 4 and the Art of Filmmaking - consists primarily of the book's table of contents; not exactly a useful exhibit. RJH
Bluetspur - unwikified, no context. RickK
- +I added a single line of context. Perhaps all of the domains of Ravenloft should have a brief description in the list of Ravenloft domains, rather than seperate articles? —Rory ☺
Markovia reads like nonsense. is it? Dunc_Harris|☺
- No, but it's pretty horribly written. Moreau refers to Dr. Moreau of The Island of Dr. Moreau, Ravenloft is a fantasy world in AD&D, very dark and gothic, unfortunately, I don't know much about that world other than a general overview. -Vina 23:16, 10 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Student loan - US financial aid section needs encyclopedic tone. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
Wakin - needs tidying up, formatting Ianb
Whitening - needs fact-checking and expansion The Anome 12:37, 10 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Hell seal terre - looks like patent nonsense to me (and certainly Google knows nothing about it), but maybe it's something from some fiction? Any ideas, anyone? Stormie
- It's on VFD, looks pretty bad for survival... -Vina 23:13, 10 Sep 2004 (UTC)
R-Mall - survived VFD, but there's not much to it, could do with some work. Stormie
Emperor (Warhammer 40,000) - survived VFD, desperately needs a cleanup. Stormie
- + I added an opening sentence to give context. It still needs a Warhammer 40,000 player to really fix it and expand it. —Rory ☺
War on Drugs The parts about arguments for and against are a mess -Vina 23:13, 10 Sep 2004 (UTC)

September 9

Martin de Hoyarçabal stub, 80% of text is non-English Mikkalai 23:32, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Reverse course - stub about US foreign policy post-WWII. Per VfD discussion, needs detail and context. Rossami 23:20, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Assen Jordanoff - unwikified. Rick K 20:31, Sep 9, 2004 (UTC) - Did some wikify, but could use some more rewriting
What Is Enlightenment? - an article on the subject might be useful, but just a list of various translations does not an encyclopedia article make. And it should be at What is Enlightenment?, anyway. Rick K 19:35, Sep 9, 2004 (UTC)
Hodge 301 - Nice pic, but needs some content please! [[User:Nickshanks|Nick | ✎]]
Camberwell_carrot - not sure what this is. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 18:39, Sep 9, 2004 (UTC) Slang for large marijuana joint, from Withnail and I--put on VfD by User:Deb. Niteowlneils 19:49, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Mustafa Sandal-fact check langs spoken, title of song, wikify if verified. Niteowlneils 18:34, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
How_to_distinguish_a_monocot_from_a_dicot - Stops in mid-thought; not really encyclopedic. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 18:09, Sep 9, 2004 (UTC)
PG Tips - the UK's #1 tea brand
Category:Art Materials could do with a few additional entries (and one deletion).Jackiespeel 17:36, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Trnopolje - unwikified mess - needs factchecking, NPOV adjustment, copyedit, wikification.

Delete fast (immediately???) - as of now it looks like a genocide apologist, 100% point of view rant represented by no credible experts. If this has any backing at all it must be referenced properly (links, ISBNs, newspaper pages, non Serbian sources) before this can even be considered being left in. Particularly critical would be a pair of comparative photos of the concentration camp scene at the same moment from the point of view of both television companiesMozzerati 20:42, 2004 Sep 9 (UTC)

office building needs major work

combined into office expanded and rounded out... could still do with some more work e.g. temporary offices, office space companies, major company headquarters, some word about about architects, but it's definitely better, and most of the links at least work.

Prostitution in Nevada - Lots of POV and seemingly baseless statements ("Few of the prostitutes use condoms in their private lives, however.") in sections. blankfaze | (беседа!) 05:14, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Aba - Wow. I don't even know what the heck is going on there. One huge mess. blankfaze | (беседа!) 05:01, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
- Somewhat cleaner (William M. Connolley 22:11, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC))
List of famous left-handed people -- originally submitted at WP:VFD (see Wikipedia:Votes for deletion/List of famous left-handed people). Needs verification of some entries. -- Netoholic @ 00:13, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Bob Lee - vague, unwikied, stubbish. I'm not even certain what this is about. - Lucky 6.9 00:07, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC) - It's basically about Black Panther activist Fred Hampton and the [Rainbow/PUSH Coalition], but I daren't clean it because I can't figure what's meant by calling Bob Lee one of the "authors" of the "Rainbow Coalition". Anybody? Was it a famous manifesto, besides being a movement? Bishonen 10:54, 11 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Squick - Needs refactoring to Wikipedia style; some history of the term might be nice, to keep it from dicdef-hood. Tregoweth 00:50, Sep 10, 2004 (UTC)

September 8

National Urban Runoff Program needs expansion and explanation —siro χ o
Amos Tutuola - needs wikification, wikistkle. [[User:Neutrality|Neutrality (talk)]]
Pi through experiment - "proof" section needs thorough checking and copyediting. The Anome 23:24, 8 Sep 2004 (UTC)
DoubleClick - reads almost like a company writeup. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 23:13, Sep 8, 2004 (UTC)
Atypical gender identities - work in progress, last edited in February.
Peter Vardy (theologian)- non-notable?
Moon for sale - merge with Moon ? - The treaty part maybe; the remainder belongs in hoaxes.
ISAP - needs extensive reworking. Actually, copyvio. Mikkalai 18:25, 8 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Neil Shipperley - unwikied, unformatted, written by a fan.
Tom Brown (hero) - needs fleshing out & context -FZ
Donald clarke - writer for the Irish Times; notable? [[User:Meelar|Meelar (talk)]]
Ethane - Overlap problem, same with propane, the rest of the alkanes need the same formatting. - I don't understand, do you mean Butane and others actually need format cleanup? CHL

I did an arguably kludgy tweak to Template:Alkanes the avoids the overlap[1], but maybe someone can come up with a better solution. Niteowlneils 00:48, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)

PS I believe the overlap problem only existed on the three with Infoboxes: methane, ethane, and propane. Niteowlneils 01:15, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)

Zackquill Morgan - unwikified -FZ
Darryl Morris - Format is gossipy and requires knowledge of the TV series. — RJH
Montana Senate Upper case - > lower case, find category, construct a table for the messy data --Fenice 05:48, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
- Names converted and table built. But I don't know what column headings to use. Also the McNutt row has an extra column of data. RJH 21:51, 10 Sep 2004 (UTC)

September 7

Office of Congressional and Public Services - Only one wiki link on the whole page. I wonder if it's just copied from a government web page? - Eisnel - it is, see [2] Deus Ex 18:25, 8 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Relevance - vague dictionary definition. Someone could have some fun with this if they remember the Sixties. Smerdis of Tlön
Michael Cretu - written by native English speaker. Uses a breezy, personal style. Rick K
Semantic models of perceptional filters needs some explanation and expansion by an expert —siro χ o
Middle East Airlines - needs some nice grammatical cleanup. Spatch + I did my best but there must be more; it also needs expansion and reorganization - Bill the Greek
Monica de Bruyn - "diseased or deceased"? Needs grammer clean up, as well as a more NPOV.
Ink could be separated into "ink for writing" and "ink for printing" as they are somewhat different. Jackiespeel - Writing ink & Printer's ink i think are standard; having them parallel each other is less valuable than having each be a natural term. & of course, Ink becomes a dab. --Jerzy (t)

I meant two sections within the article itself rather than two separate articles. Jackiespeel 15:58, 8 Sep 2004 (UTC)

Florin Popentiu Vladicescu - appears to be a CV. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
TTA, Time-Triggered Protocol, to kill marketing pitch. Mikkalai
Compensation Essay a huge, verbose, eloquent excerpt from an essay. Mikkalai
Surface Transportation Board and all its "descendants" are a dump from webpage. Must be summarized into articles. Mikkalai
Zonguldak Province: nonwikified, reads like a copyvio. ato
Francis Bacon - appears to have been scanned in - it says a page of text is missing! Anyone familiar with the man able to fill in this and check the text? - Ta bu shi da yu + I cleaned this up (still needs much wikification, section breaks, etc.). Please see Talk:Francis Bacon for details. ffirehorse
Bomb disposal - EOD part seems to be copy-pasted from some other place. --Iediteverything

September 6

Ajda pekkan turkish pop singerette Dunc_Harris|☺ 22:53, 6 Sep 2004 (UTC)
- Improper capitalization, too. Rick K 18:48, Sep 7, 2004 (UTC)
The Fabulous Moolah a wrestlette. Dunc_Harris|☺ 22:48, 6 Sep 2004 (UTC)
European National Socialism - can't really understand it. --Slowking Man 22:43, Sep 6, 2004 (UTC)
Carole MacNeil Dunc_Harris|☺ 22:40, 6 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Great Hospital - Needs an intro section —siro χ o
Ford Ecosport- needs all Mikkalai 19:15, 6 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Cannabis - Needs post merge cleaning. Davodd 18:17, Sep 6, 2004 (UTC)
Alfa 33 - I assume this is some sort of car. Anyhow, it needs to be changed to paragraph form, complete with verbs and periods and commas and all that stuff. Livajo

Now merges to Alfa_Romeo_33, better but still needs attention, better but not much. - Hobie 19:47, 2004 Sep 6 (UTC)

Whiskers - text is confusingly worded; article could be expanded significantly. Psychonaut - "Whiskers are non-living matter"? 212.85.6.26 + Yes, non-living, tho "inert" is probably clearer. Now Whisker (mammals) after rename and dab; did major copy-ed & fixed some logic; not necessarily done. --Jerzy (t)
see Talk:Paddle tennis; apparently paddle tennis is different to table tennis. Dunc_Harris|☺
The Mask of La Roche-Cotard - another seeming copyvio. Rick K
Venus of Brassempouy - starts in mid-thought, seems to be copied from somewhere else. Rick K
Blended learning - is there anything here worth keeping? Rick K - Speaking as an educator, heck no. Bishonen 11:03, 11 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Wayans brothers - leftover patch job on an old B-Movie Bandit listing. Bare bones as it stands. - Lucky 6.9
Edward Kennedy - the section on his driving record is about three times as long as the rest of the article. Rick K
John Stein-POV-ectomy, possibly fact-check (check talk if considering other actions) Niteowlneils
Soobahk general wikification, formatting rhyax

September 5

Start of injection - unwikified. Reads like a copyvio. Rick K 23:45, Sep 5, 2004 (UTC)
DJ Laz - unwikified. Rick K 22:01, Sep 5, 2004 (UTC)
Göinge Mekaniska AB steel building company -- notable? Dunc_Harris|☺ 18:52, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)
The_MERLIN_Project - More establishment of accuracy and neutrality needed. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 17:37, Sep 5, 2004 (UTC)
Badui and Sasak-Mostly unwikified, dense text. Could also use better context, and probably fact-check. Niteowlneils 12:39, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Table of Judgments - I never really understood Kant and this doesn't help much. Mostly consists of ext links. --rbrwr ˆ
Spike Breakwell - needs a more neutral tone. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 06:14, Sep 5, 2004 (UTC)
Tania Cagnotto - by a newbie
Abraham Kovoor - needs wikification, other help. Rick K 05:52, Sep 5, 2004 (UTC)
Joe schmo - needs wikification, proper capitalization. Rick K 05:52, Sep 5, 2004 (UTC)
Flag of Argentina -- questionable content, esp. in the 3rd paragraph. (as pointed out by an Anon. on the talk page)
Burma Campaign - full of notes to editors that need to be converted to article text
Rules of Construction, needs wfy and some cleanup from someone knowledgable in the field.
Indian_massacre - POV issues [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 02:54, Sep 5, 2004 (UTC)
Experian - Cleanup this company page, and tie-in with Credit report and Credit score -- Netoholic @ 02:01, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Demish - There were numerous pidgin languages. The factuality of this article, as well as its significance, is in some doubt. Geogre 01:39, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Richard Blumenthal - Attorney General. I've done a bit of it, but it's still an incomplete stub. I'd like to get an image of Richard Blumenthal as well. - Ta bu shi da yu 04:36, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)

I fixed some typos, and removed some confusion between US attorney general and US state attorney general, but there may be more. Niteowlneils 14:01, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)

MAC address - needs to be reorganised. Intro is too big! - Ta bu shi da yu 06:48, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Allmendingen bei Bern - expansion, wikification, clarification. - Ta bu shi da yu 11:07, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)

September 4

Veal with large lima beans - recipe [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 01:02, Sep 5, 2004 (UTC)

Lou Blonger - POV issues. Bunco ring? Grafters? [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 00:22, Sep 5, 2004 (UTC)

Theodore Roosevelt - SOOO much of it is scattered gobbledygook. jengod 23:07, Sep 4, 2004 (UTC)
THESM - a Brazilian poet; largely consists of quoted poetry in Portugese. --rbrwr ˆ
Elizabeth Eckford No idea what to do with her. It looks like some quotes from her regarding her part in Little Rock Crisis. Przepla 20:43, 4 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Training corset needs cleaning for readability, coherence. [[User:Meelar|Meelar (talk)]]
Tequila Sunrise -- Just a recipe. The recipe can go to Wikibooks and be replaced with an article. Guan aco
bikini -- some new external links. need to be checked for porn for someone brave enough.

Not porn, but all link to www.the-Bikini.com--we should try to find some less commercial image links. Niteowlneils 13:40, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)

Plato - needs some cleanup, expansion, removal of weasel words and some unnecessary verbosity. See Talk:Plato#Cleanup for more info. - Ta bu shi da yu 10:04, 4 Sep 2004 (UTC)

ASAP - dicdef right now, but could maybe be expanded to an article. sjorford
British National Party - can someone address my concerns? See Talk:British_National_Party#All_seems_fine.

Alternative 3 - no wiki, people leaving notes to each other in the article, just a mess. Tregoweth

Linkword - half-baked description of a language learning method (poss. commercial). --Ianb

FYI-has been posted on VfD. Niteowlneils 13:40, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)

September 3

Medical intuitive - POV, advert?
India Arie - unwikified, POV.
Diner - lots of new text (not a copyvio, see talk!), but needs major toning down and wikification. Images should be checked for licensing status. Lupo
Imperial Dramon Fighter Mode dijinonsense. Dunc_Harris|☺ 20:46, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Sahaj marg - unwikified, rambling, POV?
American diner - wikify; possible copyright violation, as seen at the bottom of the article. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 20:09, Sep 3, 2004 (UTC)
Vratsa - unwikfied, apparently written by a non-native English speaker.
Dune: The Machine Crusade Dunc_Harris|☺ 19:14, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Lemora minor horror film. verify, wikify, etc Dunc_Harris|☺ 18:33, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
'72 Live! an album by a band who don't have an entry; hierachy upside down. Dunc_Harris|☺ 18:29, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
In-Q-Tel sthg to do w/ CIA Dunc_Harris|☺ 18:23, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Raya Dunayevskaya wikifcy, POV? notable? wtf? Dunc_Harris|☺ 17:04, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Humanitasia gets no google hits. Any more information welcome. DJ Clayworth 16:14, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
- Same problem with The Wheezer Bros. by the same contributor. Supposedly recent NBC series but google can't find them. Andris 19:40, Sep 4, 2004 (UTC)
Ozone depletion - lots of redundant text / restatement, needs aggressive refactor. JTN
Chumbawamba - Discography needs to be sorted out. Aecis
Yamato ishida - this stub on a digimon needs to be re-written with proper English and the images properly loaded
John Barnes (computer scientist) - wikify, expand, add bibliography. Lupo
Steomac - sub-stub, needs more context. Lupo
Kumbh Mela - copyedit, clarify questions in talk whump

I've copyedited the article, someone who knows more about Kumbh Mela needs to look at the questions in Talk. Aecis

Prigorodny District, Republic of North Ossetia-Alania - wikify, expand, needs locator map. Lupo
- I've wikified and somewhat expanded it (also moved to a proper name), but I do not have a locator map (whoever is going to add it should probably add a map to the articles on other districts of the republic).--Ëzhiki (erinaceus europeaus) 13:56, Sep 3, 2004 (UTC)
The Barber - an unwikified mess. Facts such as plot elements, cast credits, and awards won are mixed with review language buzz words. 172.142.246.188 06:31, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
- I've asked the poster if this is a copyright violation, but he/she hasn't responded. I did list it on Copyright problems, though. Rick K 17:55, Sep 3, 2004 (UTC)
21 Jump Street - surely someone could expand this? - Ta bu shi da yu 04:39, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
33 Canada Square - is this notable? - Ta bu shi da yu 04:44, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
- Maybe merge this and 25 Canada Square to Canary Wharf? DJ Clayworth 16:17, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
4-1-1 - can this be updated any further? - Ta bu shi da yu 04:50, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Sarah Wright - hopefully a stub can be salvaged from this mess. sjorford

List of video game music series

The following articles are lists. They require wikification. There is no index, the table is messy, and although the information for each game or CD might be correct, the table information does not line up with the content data. (i.e. A date is used for Studio Name) -- AllyUnion (Talk) 07:48, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)

Additional note, a few of these articles still exceed 32 K. Some consideration might be taken when cleaning up these pages. --[[User:Allyunion| AllyUnion (Talk)]] 08:00, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)

+I added a TOC for all of the articles, MHO is that we should get rid of the tables (or at least this formatting of them), put a little less information in the articles here, and give them all their own articles. This'll take forever, but...hey, it'll look a lot better! — Ilγαηερ (Tαlκ) 14:21, 5 Sep 2004 (UTC)

Is it just me, or do these lists have "copyvio" written all over them? Compare the first listing on List of video game music A ".hack// GAME MUSIC Perfect Collection (Limited Edition)" with this page. I found many other matches to various websites, all of which have copyright notices posted. If so, then these need to be removed ASAP. -- Netoholic @ 04:37, 6 Sep 2004 (UTC)

If these are copyvio -- then leave the foundation of the page there (the TOC, etc.) and let's start over, possibly make this a wikiproject to make a bunch of articles + this list. — Ilγαηερ (Tαlκ) 18:15, 6 Sep 2004 (UTC)

September 2

Michael J. Adams - needs wikification and probably some reformatting to improve readability.
Westland Gardens After reading this, I'm still not even sure what exactly this place is, and what if anything is notable about it. Also needs wikification.

Livajo 15:10, 2 Sep 2004 (UTC)

- Created a substub. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 00:01, Sep 12, 2004 (UTC)
Dolly Parton Decent biography needs a general cleanup: grammar, format, wiki, NPOV. --Davodd 11:36, Sep 2, 2004 (UTC)
Russell Noftsker little info. Dunc_Harris|☺ 11:08, 2 Sep 2004 (UTC)

Fletcher - substub that's not really relevant to anything. --DMG413 00:31, 2 Sep 2004 (UTC)
War of 1812 - has informative sections on the motives of the parties to the conflict, but I think they need to be formalized and NPOVed. Gazpacho 16:06, 2 Sep 2004 (UTC)

September 1

"To Live and Shave in L.A." - unwikied text dump in need of POVectomy.
- Note: User keeps removing cleanup notice. Naughty. I've left polite word. - Lucky 6.9 23:29, 1 Sep 2004 (UTC)
  - Really reads like a copyvio. RickK 23:37, Sep 1, 2004 (UTC)
    - User:GJKWiki It's not a copyvio. I wrote it, and I'm a fan of the group. I'm sorry about mucking up the Wiki rules - I didn't realize there were so many!
      - User:GJKWiki Please accept my apology - I assumed that the "cleanup" tag that appeared was some sort of a reminder. The FAQ is a little daunting. Sorry about the too-POV'd writing. Guess I'm not quite ready for Encyclopedia Britannica.
Vassilakis - needs tons of work and a major POV-ectomy. Also at wrong title. Rick K 19:53, Sep 1, 2004 (UTC)
Meaning Needs formatting, more encyclopedic style, someone who can explain the 'alternate approach' a little better. -- Sparky the Seventh Chaos
Fresh off the boat seems to need a look for potential POV issues. ffirehorse
Politics of the Maldives - minor POV issue; see this diff. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
Nominalism - needs encyclopedic tone. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]]
Quba needs expansion Lacrimosus
Drew Bledsoe deserves a much cleaner article, esp. that focuses on things other than his yardage and what teams he's played against. - KeithTyler
Markovian Parallax Denigrate POV, conspiracy theories, speculation

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