Wikipedia:Cleanup

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The cleanup page is a place where articles with problems (ungrammatical, poorly formatted, confusing, etc.) can be listed. Any user can fix or list articles here. Feel free to make use of the Wikipedia:Cleanup resources.

Older cleanup: Category:Cleanup by month. Pages are archived by month, but are still in need of cleanup (or de-listing if they have already been cleaned up).

Also remember that you can submit an article in need of cleanup to the Cleanup Taskforce (which is always looking for members).

For more detailed information about this page, see Wikipedia:Cleanup process.

Just to let everyone know, there were 14,898 articles tagged for cleanup as of 20 June 2006. This means that we are working on 1.24% of English Wikipedia's articles. Most of these articles can be found under Category:Cleanup by month and are not listed below. Anything you can do to help clear the backlog would be greatly appreciated.

Oldest listings

Please help reduce the size of this page by removing listings from previous months that have already been fixed. You may also remove listings that have not been fixed, as long as you move any outstanding comments to the article's talk page, and make sure that the article itself is still tagged for cleanup.

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To view articles by topic, see Wikipedia:Pages needing attention (currently being reorganized to include all articles tagged for cleanup)
To view articles by type of problem, see Category:Wikipedia cleanup categories. (Not all articles classified by type of problem show up in the general cleanup queue.)

June 2006

June 28, 2006

Role of women in religion Somewhat Non-POV: could be merged on development with Women as theological figures as the intro - or linked into Feminist theology User:Jackiespeel 18:08, 28 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

When God Was a Woman Non-NPOV. Jackiespeel 18:08, 28 June 2006 (UTC)
March on Rome - needs general copyediting. It's currently two massive rambling paragraphs.
9/11 conspiracy theories - Needs to be shortened, and have the lists conformed. Also need to have 'bullshit' (i.e., nonsourced and highly opinionated statements) removed. Less than 10% of the statements have sources, even after checking the references at the bottom of the page.

June 27, 2006

Ruben Iván Martínez Andrade - needs basic formatting, full sentences and sources. Is he a first division player and is any other type even notable? - Mgm|^(talk) 10:37, 28 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Spring Valley, Washington, D.C.
1. The section on the chemical weapons needs a little work. - bolesjohnb
Dave Mustaine:
1. This article is really hard to follow. Many of the sentences have multiple objects. There is no order to the paragraphs other than a chronological breeze through Dave's life. There are lots of facts, but none of it has context or meaning. 67.49.249.169 02:02, 28 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Use of death penalty worldwide:
1. The following claim has been added to the article: "Federal law provides the death penalty for drug trafficking, although no prosecution has ever been brought under that provision." Could somebody verify existence of this law? See my comment at the talk page.
2. The map (Image:DeathPenaltyWorldMap.JPG), as well as its Commons version (Image:Death Penalty World Map.png), is incorrect: Belarus did use capital punishment in 2004, and so it doesn't constitute a country abolitionist in practice. - Mike Rosoft 09:59, 27 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Banasthali Vidyapith:
1. Marking as an article which reads like an advertisement, particularly since it is -- it's based (with apparent permission) off the school's promotional brochure. Also, it has no links and is missing much of the standard information (like quality information on academic programs) one would expect from a university article. Likely needs someone from India or who is personally familiar with the institution to tackle it. - Beginning 01:02, 28 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 26, 2006

Women's suffrage - needs some polishing. Jackiespeel 17:27, 26 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
William Bullock Clark Slight repetition, and the "not to be confused with" could possibly be turned into a "see also." Jackiespeel 16:39, 26 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Sir Thomas Adams, 1st Baronet A touch hagiographical - and possibly copied directly from the early 19th century document referred to (when was the late descendent referred to actually around?). Jackiespeel 16:37, 26 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 25, 2006

Guillaume - Needs descriptions, templates, and categories. Mo-Al 06:11, 25 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oswego, Illinois - Paragraphs need formatting. As wells the pictures. --Mjvan12 08:34, 25 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Ernst Moerman - Unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere. - Mike Rosoft 08:36, 25 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Tyler Courtroom Shooting - Needs complete rewrite; please see Talk page notes - Hedgey42 09:01, 25 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Filial piety - Article was translated from Chinese and has a number of common Chinese translation issues. Needs copyediting. --Daduzi ^talk 18:11, 25 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Dancing Beijing - Same issues as above. --Daduzi ^talk 18:17, 25 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 24, 2006

Knights of the Dinner Table - Much of this article was plagiarized from the bios in the comics (possibly quotation marks are due). Mo-Al 04:45, 25 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The Catwalk (Enterprise episode) - Needs to lose the POV slant to it.
What If? (2001 song) - Just... a really bad article - ^Рэд _хот 14:16, 24 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
David W. Taylor (lawyer) - Looks like a promotional. - Mike Rosoft 15:39, 24 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 23, 2006

Clock Tower (series) - the video game series created by Capcom. It's a cult classic series and will get attraction towards it due to the announcement of the film. --Empty2005 02:18, 24 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Gangaji - more formal style? Jackiespeel 23:11, 23 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
1990s fads and trends Old article in which some sections use informal tones and generalizations. --Gray Porpoise 17:34, 23 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Gillian Lynne New article on notable subject. Plenty of material, but it needs organising and formatting.
Primerica Old article that's in a constant edit war by critics and supporters. Some previous versions have excellent info, but wading through the history takes time. 72.139.184.107 13:45, 23 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Narcissism (psychology), just decided to start adding citations and cleaning up a bit when I noticed that even the references in the text don't seem to match the text. I feel like I am looking at the tip of the iceberg and this article needs all the help it can get. There is an excellent section on the talkpage by User:Katana on reworking the article and to my mind the problem is all of that plus the fact that the existing text seems largely unreferenced or incorrectly referenced. Maybe a case for a total rewrite? It's an important page that should be retained and maintained to a far higher standard than this.--Zeraeph 22:31, 23 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 21, 2006

Professional audiovisual industry Hard to tell what this page is even talking about. Mo-Al 22:40, 21 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Nerodia sipedon This appears to have been lifted from a Web page or book. Chrissnell 07:03, 21 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Big Brother Australia series 1 Needs an encyclopedic tone and less cliche. Ste4k 11:09, 21 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Big Brother Australia series 3 Needs reformatting per discussion. Ste4k 11:21, 21 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Vo Duc Van Could someone who knows what this is all about make it plainer? - Richardcavell 03:19, 22 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Category:Pfarrer, Charles Patrick, III - Is there a way to fix the namespace of this without copy-and-pasting ? -- User:Docu

June 20, 2006

Prairie Parkway Not in Wikipedia format, grammar issues, needs more detail, out of date. DarkAsSin 23:30, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Mini chopper This one is written in a very odd style. Mo-Al 22:12, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Kidada jones I can't even begin to explain the problems with this - it's pretty self-explanatory.Mo-Al 22:12, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Rob Jones (footballer born 1979) would have to be #very# tall to be carried by hundreds of football fans. Jackiespeel 21:57, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Serena Waldman Strange tone, vocabulary, and needs wikification (plus only 2 or 3 pages link to it) Mo-Al 18:32, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Arve Walde Too short, and what exists is badly written. Mo-Al 18:18, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Gyula Háy The talk page disagrees with what is said in the main body of the article. Jackiespeel 11:52, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Genichi Taguchi Slightly opaque/over technical (anyone wish to create an article explaining the technicalities?) Jackiespeel 11:44, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Sir William Brockman. Just spotted this orphaned cleanup tag. I had a go a while back, but met resistance. Needs summarisation of long quotes of original sources, and a hard assessment of linked NN genealogy cruft such as James Brockman Esq b1626 and William Brockman Esq. Tearlach 23:30, 19 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Fourier optics. Important topic, but only has a brief introduction written in a fairly informal tone. -dmmaus 06:02, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Hierotheos the Thesmothete Needs to be wikified. --Dakart 05:20, 21 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 19, 2006

Baby transport Covers a wide area Jackiespeel 21:18, 19 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Peter Bruff -- needs formatting. CPAScott 15:58, 19 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Brickfields -- need formatting. --William Pembroke 18:56, 19 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 18, 2006

Clonduff - Does not assert its importance, badly formatted, no links --Mo-Al 16:23, 18 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Baum (onomastics) - The problems are self-evident. --Mo-Al 16:00, 18 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
[List_of_Turkish_pop_music_performers]] Lots of broken links! Also lacking information. --Matt 22:47, 18 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 17 2006

Miami Seaquarium This article is an advertisement
Fisherian runaway This article is somewhat confusing and could also use some citations.
Transport in Cyprus This article is basically just a selection of facts and figures and needs reformatting and restructuring into sentences. --Daduzi ^talk 05:59, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Heritage tourism fails to define the context of heritage, confuses it with religious pilgrimage and needs a more global view--JBellis 11:39, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Choo San Goh Horribly formatted, one large lump of text. skorpion 14:02, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Miss Nana Incoherent main section. --Charlesknight 16:27, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 16, 2006

Urushiol-Induced Contact Dermatitis. Its not a horribly messy article but could still use some minor cleanup. Also, it needs to be written in a fromal tone.--GorillazFan Adam 00:38, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The "Origins and variations of the word" section in Werewolf is messy and seems like it needs more citations. --66.241.95.65 16:10, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 14, 2006

Wald (onomastics). No idea how to fix. -- User:Docu
Horse Article is long, disorganized and unwieldy. Also contains material already created in related subtopics. Repeats itself in several places, sometimes contradicts itself--probably in part due to length. Needs serious reorganization. Too much for one person to work on alone, especially someone as new as myself, needs people with good Wikipedia editing skills to create some new articles, merge sections of this article with existing ones, maybe expand the disambiguation page. Or make suggestions on the Talk:Horse page. This page also has been having some minor problems with vandalism. Montanabw 18:46, 14 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 12, 2006

Al Leong Terrible page. Filled with "clever" comments. Ace ofspade 18:52, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Durham Miners Gala Link unlinked - and more context? Jackiespeel 16:46, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Racko - Reads like a game manual; poorly formatted. bob rulz 07:09, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 11, 2006

Durham Fair - This article featured outdated information, so I fixed it.
Royal Guards (Thailand) - This article is a total mess and barely in english

I fixed up the introduction with a major rewrite, but the rest of the article needs cleanup from a referreed source. Decadencecavy 04:55, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 10, 2006

Lalitaditya Muktapida - This article needs just some general editing (i.e. correction of spelling/grammatical errors) and also perhaps more research (Only one page out of one history book is cited).
Montreal hot dog- This stub is hard to look at, its so damn messy.--GorillazFan Adam 03:49, 11 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Cult film - the article used to be pretty good. Now, it's a total mess! (Ibaranoff24 19:06, 10 June 2006 (UTC)) - It should be better now. Someone should, however, have a second look at it (17:22, 24 June 2006 (UTC))[reply]
Mundelein - "Also in 2005/2006 Mundelein has began to flourish. Many corperations have made their way into this suburb, such as Staples, TJ Max (and more), the amazing SUPER Target, White Castle, Pay Less Shoes, Pier 1 Imports, Fine Liquors, Jimmy Johns, Little Ceasars, Pet Supplies Plus, Home Depot, and Applebee's (which unfortunately had poor service upon its grand opening). It is apparent that Mundelein is booming and should no longer be considered a "bedroom" community." This paragraph seems somewhat biased, especially the comment on Applebee's service. Political Mind 00:42, 11 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 9, 2006

Primark -- article has been hacked around by various people and now has sentences out of place and is in general need of help!
Demetri Martin -- quite a of bit unencyclopedaic prose and uncited reports.
Social War - Confusing structure, needs more sections and better organization, no references at all. Red1 07:09, 9 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Ian Allan Publishing - Blatant advert. Tivedshambo 07:11, 9 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 8, 2006

Vitamin D - Article is confusing and is also missing information and explanations, I'm unsure which cleanup tag to use, but it definitely needs one. LuNatic 03:48, 8 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Watchmen - This article is up for a Feature Article designation, and needs copyediting to push it forward. If you can copyedit, you are encouraged to take a look and help out.--P-Chan 05:13, 8 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Minyanville - Needs formal tone improvement and other grammatical help. (Nick 13:56, 8 June 2006 (UTC))[reply]
Hurricane Andrew-needs cleaning up, numerous typing errors, and lack of concrete information.
British Sign Language - added some sections as requested, but the sections on becoming an interpreter seem inappropriate in tone, sounding like a 'how-to' guide.Andrew Spinner 17:09, 8 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 7, 2006

A Shocker On Shock Street - A real book from a popular series (Goosebumps), but the page needs a lot of work. Zagalejo 18:14, 7 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Pakistan Ordnance Factories - Reads like a (very poorly written) advertisement for POF, and needs some serious attention to bring it up to scratch. -Commander Zulu 00:42, 7 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 6, 2006

Il Dottore Slightly colloquial in places, could do with some Wikification etc. Jackiespeel 22:01, 6 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
James Purdey and Sons. Needs rewrite. This same article appeared under several different but closely associated names. Moriori 06:40, 6 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Garnet Valley School District - Looks like a promotional poster/website, not an encyclopedia article. - Mike Rosoft 07:47, 6 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Ricky Wilson (Kaiser Chiefs). Needs complete rewrite, as paragraphs are quite poorly organized and reading the article takes too much effort. Bobryuu 15:43, 6 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 5, 2006

Jacob Calero - Article has a written account which provides good detail but it is a little informal and is missing standard structure. --Wootonius 19:20, 5 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Big Biz Tycoon - Article uses weasel words, awkard grammar, very little background information about the game. Green451 15:04, 5 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Nicole bennett has been subject to persistent vandalism for days. I have semi-protected the page. I managed to remove some clearly nonsensical content, but I am not sure if what stands is accurate. Needs immediate attention Chancemill 11:42, 5 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 4, 2006

Objectivity (philosophy) is confused, uncited, poorly written, and poorly formatted. It is a rewrite of the disambiguity page for objectivity. Much of the content is erroneous as well as irrelevant to the specific nature of the article title.

June 3, 2006

Anna Phoebe is a blatant advertisement and needs to have sections. Jman14141414 00:51, 4 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- I rewrote it some to make it more clear and less POV, but it is still largely plagiarized from it's only source. --Mo-Al 23:59, 4 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

June 2, 2006

United States national basketball team was moved from Dream Team (basketball) and does not contain information prior to 1992. It also has too many references to the team being called Dream Team.

June 1, 2006

skorpion 05:49, 1 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Joe Louis Arena need to be divided into sections, and almost completely rewritten. Right now it is just a random assortment of facts Grhs126student 17:32, 1 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 2006

May 31, 2006

Chan Kau-tai More detail/significance? Jackiespeel 22:13, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Caviomorpha Could be made clearer for those less familar with terminology for ancient beasties. Jackiespeel 18:32, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Armand Barbault - Unwikified, partially copied from [1]. - Mike Rosoft 16:33, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 30, 2006

Bulimia nervosa is badly in need of some expert input and serious restructuring / editing. - Vaughan 10:37, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Martha Washingtonians is badly in need of some expert input and serious restructuring and needs more sources. - Sajun777 11:17, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
We're Coming Home It is written more like a promotional piece of writing than an informational piece. 147.10.17.211 13:53, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
John Brown Russwurm - Unwikified, contains a lot of vanity content. - Mike Rosoft 19:18, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Mandy (Billy and Mandy) needs to be proofread, rephrased, and reorganized. Currently the biography section is unfocused and rather random. Perhaps break it up into sections? LordSarir 19:30, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Return of premium life insurance advertisement and completely undetailed--Chiyocide 22:56, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 29, 2006

Floricienta - I made a lot of changes, added a side bar etc but this article still needs a LOT of attention, preferably from someone who knows a bit about the content as well.
Gus Fink - Perhaps a fairly notable artist (at least, makes a claim of notability), but the article is unwikified and contains a lot of unencyclopedic material. - Mike Rosoft 09:27, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Marion College, Missouri - Notable as a former college, but like many former college articles, it's totally out of format. I've done a lot of these as of late and frankly would like a bit of a break. Sorry. :/ Beginning 23:00, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Thirty most populous cities in the world - Article is of dubious content. Needs attention.--68.236.5.240 02:13, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 28, 2006

The Open Boat and Other Tales - Much of this makes no sense and is written in the first person.
Marshall Middle School (Pittsburgh) - Spelling is poor and it needs some work in general. I removed a number of non-NPOV comments and wikified the page.
Rule 144 - Makes little sense. In dire need of general cleanup, perhaps an entire re-write. Political Mind 15:51, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Drawball - Needs more editors to clean it up, and keep it clean. See Talk:Drawball. The article is one of the worst on Wikipedia, entirely full of unencyclopedic unsourced subtrivia. Every time an experienced editor removes something, it's replaced with more online webforum dick wagging over who has the biggest picture. - Hahnch e n 03:48, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The X-Files - Contains way too many lists, which comprise roughly 1/3 to 1/2 of the page. A substantial amount of information on the page is fan speculation rather than sourced references. The show was important in the history of television, but the Wikipedia page has become a collection of fan trivia. Much of the information can be integrated into the rest of the page (with some effort). The page also needs reorganization. Zepheus 05:27, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
History of NHL - Unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere. - Mike Rosoft 08:48, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Lyn Duff - Too many external links, unencyclopedic style, possibly copied from somewhere. - Mike Rosoft 08:52, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Justicia In Mundo - Unwikified, contains the text of the encyclical which would belong to Wikisource, not to Wikipedia (as long as it is really in public domain; the encyclical was written in 1971). - Mike Rosoft 08:58, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
List of Dukes of Alba - An anonymous user has changed María del Rosario Cayetana Fitz-James Stuart y Silva, 28th Duchess of Alba to María del Rosario Cayetana Fitz-James Stuart y Silva, 18th Duchess of Alba (and made a similar change for the previous one). I don't know whether the edit should be reverted as vandalism, or whether it is legitimate. - Mike Rosoft 17:45, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
DeltaAnime - Reads like an advertisment, many inaccurate facts are also listed in this page. Added more content.PhilGreen 14:06, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
Alonissos substantial chunks of the English are poor. Much ambiguous writing. Article discusses an island, a village, and a municipality with the same name in such a way that the reader is not sure which is being discussed. Needs general cleanup. Jd2718 21:00, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 27, 2006

Darkest Hour Needs to have sources and most of most of the article isn't written in a NPOV. New York Daily News Needs sources and has a bunch of weasel words. Jackyl reads like an ad. 71.251.20.73 06:13, 27 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Maharishi Mahesh Yogi - Due to edits of Peterklutz (talk · contribs), the article looks like promotional of transcendental meditation. - Mike Rosoft 12:43, 27 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Bishopric of Bordeaux - Copied from (public domain) Catholic Encyclopedia, outdated information. - Mike Rosoft 12:54, 27 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Also Bishopric of Limoges, Bishopric of Troyes, Bishopric of Nice. - Mike Rosoft 13:33, 27 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Muhammed Yusuf Khan - needs wikification and general cleanup. - Mike Rosoft 20:30, 27 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 26, 2006

Carola Unterberger-Probst Needs some grammar / style correction. I think the article is by a non-native English speaker or a computer translation? Rjwilmsi 08:11, 26 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Gopaldas Neeraj - Unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere, in any case the style is completely inappropriate and needs to be rewritten. - Mike Rosoft 08:28, 26 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Bratz (TV series) - A bit crufty and just needs a bit of a cleanup. Beno1000 16:13, 26 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
CHIC (band) - In dire need of a complete rewrite/copyedit/formatting. --FuriousFreddy 01:52, 27 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 25, 2006

Kazuyoshi Ishii: Too much referencing to Kazuyoshi Ishii by full name with ages repeated; POV issue - K-1 "began with the revolutionary vision of Japan's Kazuyoshi Ishii."; grammar issues. JRHorse 23:10, 25 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
[[2]] is not very clear or coherent. I have made specific suggestions on the talk page. Please comment and advise on suitability and/or help with re-organization of the pages. --Michel M Verstraete 22:24, 25 May 2006 (UTC).[reply]

Post-structuralism Article not coherent --Mikkel Bue Lykkegaard 21:22, 25 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Irving T Bush Beating about the bush (g)? Jackiespeel 18:21, 25 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Mario Encarnacion Lurid
Kerri-Anne Kennerly - Australian TV presenter, is pretty unclear - Awiseman 16:00, 25 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Yoshi032192 (talk · contribs) has added a lot of vanity in the article. Somebody should clean it up (and remove most of it). - Mike Rosoft 17:40, 27 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Southeast Raleigh Magnet High School - The page has very incorrect information, no citations, questionable neutrality, and isn't anything like a good wikipedia page. - User:Electric Knight

May 23, 2006

Bibliography of the Penguin Should be "marched into" ;) a merger with relevant page(s) as purely a list Jackiespeel 16:25, 24 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Stewart McPherson lots of things wrong with this - broken images, loose html code, parts of articles pasted in the article, etc. --Awiseman 20:34, 23 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
PublicSecrecy needs NPOV'ing and is partly in first-person Supadawg - [[User_talk:Supadawg|Talk]] 21:09, 23 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Bloodscalp Tribe - A tribe of World of Warcraft trolls. I have just removed a load of spam from the article (a long list of World of Warcraft guilds, complete with their websites). What is left is a substandard stub. Needs context etc. - Mike Rosoft 09:07, 24 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- There is also Bloodscalp. I have formerly deleted it as a vanity page; now I think that some of its history may be useful to be merged into Bloodscalp Tribe. - Mike Rosoft 12:14, 24 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 22, 2006

The Unimportance of Being Oscar In serious need of a complete rewrite. Gershwinrb 00:22, 23 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Phosphate - overall a good article but needs some work - rearrange things, so that nonliving examples of phosphates aren't included in "Living Systems", for example. 65.11.217.59 18:26, 22 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Reservation_in_India - Article needs some work. Possible questions with neutrality, language issues in the sections Reservation_in_India#Why_the_government_is_increasing_quota and Reservation_in_India#What are OBC's saying
Blowhard - Badly written stub for a (minor?) Spyro the Dragon series character. I am proposing it for deletion, but perhaps it can be salvaged? - Mike Rosoft 13:00, 23 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I rewrote it, however I could not find any sources.--Mo-Al 05:03, 26 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 21, 2006

ChapStick - still needs some work (both expansion and cleanup)--Mo-Al 00:56, 22 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Iron Guard - needs to clean up notes. PeterKristo 23:07, 21 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Chelsea boy - needs to include other definitions. Onishenko 20:43, 21 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
American kestrel - Description section is potentially confusing with many redundancies. Algebra 18:13, 21 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Mirage Koas - Needs to be rewritten. States opinions and is full of grammatical errors. Ramzacloud 01:52, 22 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 20, 2006

List of Transformers: Cybertron episodes - needs copyediting. TheMadBaron 16:24, 20 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The Other Side Of The Hedge - short story by E. M. Forster. Article needs formatting, proofreading, rephrasing. TheMadBaron 13:24, 20 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Politician-Definition renders whole article unsound see objections at Talk:Politician#Definition.Jerzy•t
The Cottage School content generally sound, needs formatting properly though. Chrisd87 13:43, 20 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Definitely needs editing for NPOV, if not deletion- is this school notable? Cpastern 20:44, 25 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Hermann Raupach - Incompletely translated from Russian (possibly from Russian Wikipedia). I have just fixed the broken format. - Mike Rosoft 16:05, 20 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Nissan Figaro - Needs better formatting. --ApolloBoy 01:33, 21 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- And an expert to boot. (I tried with the formating... just could not get the topic)Eagle talk 03:31, 21 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 19, 2006

Cal Ripken Written more like a magazine feature than an encyclopedia article. --Napthene 01:36, 19 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Palm Island, Queensland - poor layout. QazPlm 00:37, 19 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Sydney Ling - anyone care to kick this around a bit? There appears to be a grain of notability in there, but it needs a major fact-check for some fairly extravagant claims. Tearlach 00:33, 19 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 18, 2006

Lives of the Twelve Caesars Long summary of the Julius Caesar section just added, unfortunately with illiteracies and misspellings. Has someone time to improve it? Andrew Dalby 09:16, 18 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Recast the "Influences Sources and veracity" paragraphs into single paragrapgh, "Veracity, criticism, and influences." MOved info about subjecetivity of Claudius section to "Veracity, critcism, and influences" section. Minor cleanup, typos. Minor cleanup Julius Caesar. :) Dlohcierekim 19:09, 18 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 17, 2006

fr:Titre de noblesse/[[3]] My French is not up to finding the relevant cleanup page - "summat fishy" going on with the pictures. (Can someone past as relevant please) Jackiespeel 15:48, 17 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Me and My Katamari - Various unencyclopedic comments have been added into the article, such as: "As always, the King sends the Prince to the Sunflower Continent, since it is full of stuff." - Mike Rosoft 18:28, 17 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Contract killing - mainly poor grammar, and I removed the unencyclopedic line "Examples of contract killing can be found in the fictitious series, the Alex Rider Series, only in certain books, by Anthony Horowitz." 70.68.181.189 03:34, 18 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 16, 2006

Satwa, Dubai - Low on relevant information, also awkwardly written. --Strawberryfire 22:08, 16 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Koga (Inuyasha) Could be "made more elegant" - slightly breathless style. Jackiespeel 18:16, 16 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Swallow (Video Game Weapon) - Unwikified, short on details, and awkwardly written. --Yggdrasil 04:16, 16 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 15, 2006

Uniform Crime Reports - In addition to expansion, the Index crime section is overly long and poorly formatted. The criticism sections should either be merged or defined separately. CRobey 17:35, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 14, 2006

North Queensland Cowboys - Very informal language. Overly lengthy. --dan, dan and dan 09:50, 14 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Carlos Salinas- POV everywhere, along with a very informal voice. There may be some basic spelling and grammatical mistakes as well.
According to Arthur Conan Doyle, the author "helped form Portsmouth Football Club, playing as the club's first goalkeeper and occasionally as a right back between 1884 and 1890." Portsmouth F.C., otoh, calls that assertion "a common myth." It can't be both. Could someone who knows either the club or the author, do some factchecking? Aecis ^Apple ^knocker ^Flophouse 18:23, 14 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Ramona article's summary is poorly written and could use some more information.
Daniel Coburn article is very poorly written and does not conform to WP:BIO standards. Also used to include lots of POV.

May 13, 2006

Toyota Supra - Way too convoluted and some of the words need to be decapitalized. --ApolloBoy 00:02, 14 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I have attempted the cleanup, but it may still need attention from an expert in order to simplify what is being said, but I have got rid of repetition, grammar errors, stylistic errors and the like. --Knucmo2 10:31, 14 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 11, 2006

Religion and class. I created a stub on this with the suggestion of eventual merger with Religion and politics on development: the case for a separate article was, I admit, marginal. The redirect has been made, but no transfer of the stub. (And if there are other "(specific religion) and politics" and related articles, please add to the main one.) Jackiespeel 16:35, 11 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 9, 2006

WCBI-TV - I can live with the first two sections... but everything below that needs to be looked at and/or overhauled. It seems like the article just dabbles way too much in minutiae. Amnewsboy 23:49, 9 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Spring holiday – I created this article, I'm somewhat emotionally involved in the subject. Would like some help with POV and organization. The article is very professionally collaberated, though, with alot of citations. Also would like some input on a possible article name change. — CRAZY`(IN)`SANE 04:02, 9 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 8, 2006

Sex, Toys & Chocolate - User:Ardenn marked this page for cleanup without reason. I've changed the wording slightly in the description, and cleaned up the episode list a bit. I'm still waiting for confirmation that the episode order presented is accurate.--Superwad 00:49, 7 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 7, 2006

Carla the Jackal needs attention -- wikify, format, references, etc.--Marysunshine 23:12, 7 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Planet Sound needs attention 136.167.66.114 05:30, 8 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 6, 2006

Edmund Nelson(bio of rector & perhaps fa. of Horatio Nelson) - Ugly confusion between Edward & Edmund, here, in Rdr, & maybe another article. Details at talk:Edmund Nelson.Jerzy•t
Banja Koviljača needs citations, and its English needs some help. --Mo-Al 00:33, 6 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 5, 2006

AtlantaBlueSky.com reads like vanity (see page history) and an advert. Needs wikifying. Aecis ^Mr.^Mojo ^risin' 18:18, 5 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Many of the albums listed in Dolly Parton#Charting Albums seem to be 2 minutes and 40 seconds long. See for instance My Tennessee Mountain Home, Bubbling Over, Jolene and Love Is Like A Butterfly. I'm not a Dolly Parton fan, to say the least, so someone who is more into her music probably knows the correct playing times of each album a lot better than I do. Aecis ^Mr.^Mojo ^risin' 18:35, 5 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

May 4, 2006

Pope Sixtus IV - References do not support article; in particular, I cannot find any references for the claim that Pope Sixtus IV was either of Jewish ancestry or secretly a practicing Jew. Adambondy 10:14, 5 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
William Adlam(Bio of 18th-cen & Napol.-era Brit. Gen.)+ Added struc, chron, etc. - Still needs work: General c-u, & be sure who was shot on Nelson's ship; Dates!Jerzy•t
Women as theological figures Has been developed somewhat since I started it: and starting to go all over the place. Anyone care to make it more elegant? Jackiespeel 17:56, 4 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Adlam(English surname mixed with apparent family military history)+Rem self-lks; Turn truly ugly sentence into somewhat ugly list; stub & c-u tags; added Cat. - Not a Del candidate, but possibly should be reduced to a Dab; other options abound.Jerzy•t

May 1, 2006

Longship - the article has a lot improved due to recently added material and subsequent editing for accuracy. However, it is far from what it could be (a great featured article), and needs more attention for language, factual accuracy, and structure. Cleanup tag originally added by User:Grumpy444grumpy, but I fully agree.--Stephan Schulz 11:38, 1 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Bully - The article was a bit of a mess to begin with, but has suddenly been dominated by a couple of well meaning, agenda driven, newbies. It needs some input from experienced editors to get it into shape --Zeraeph 20:37, 1 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Workplace bullying - At first glance this looks like a good article, until you realise nothing is cited or referenced and the whole piece may well be POV. --Zeraeph 20:37, 1 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

April 2006

April 30, 2006

Visoko - Poor grasp of English; seems to have NPOV problems (sounds like inappropriate support for an archeological issue.) Adambondy 10:21, 30 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Nipponisation - Messy. May not be the correct term for the phenomenon. See talk page. -Seventh Holy Scripture 01:02, 30 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Kulachi - I did some minor wikifying and typo correction, but it needs grammatical improvements, possibly some rewriting as well, and I don't know the subject at all (got there via "Random article"). Jamoche 08:05, 30 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
True-believer syndrome - Much of the article is about Robert T. Carroll and his book Skeptic's Dictionary, becasue it has an entry on it, instead of about the topic itself. Caroll himself has objected to so much of it being about him and his book rather than the topic itself. Bubba73 (talk), 18:51, 30 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

April 29, 2006

The International Relations Institute of Cameroon - IRIC (yaounde) reeks of copyvio, but it definitely needs cleaning up. The tone is a bit too promotional, it needs wikifying and it should probably be moved to International Relations Institute of Cameroon. Aecis ^Mr.^Mojo ^risin' 21:06, 29 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

April 28, 2006

Modern Spain seems to be little more than the succeding election results after 1978, and the whole article needs cleaning.
Ardengus needs working on to make it more encyclopedic, and needs much more information in the article-- right now the bibliography is longer than the main article itself! ekedolphin 06:50, 28 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Tadeusz Piechura needs some major, major clean-up work done on it-- in fact it's arguably an AFD candidate as it just seems to be a list of awards the person has won, and doesn't really help to indicate his notability. ekedolphin 23:43, 28 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- looks like polish graphic designers scene. rename to nnn nnn_(designer) etc. if international relevant. Akidd dublin•tl•ctr-l 14:07, 4 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Girija Prasad Koirala, which is linked to on the front page, no less, needs a huge clean-up job. Currently it contains a whole lot of opinion, even going so far as to include the word "I", not to mention the poor grammar and capitalization. Valadius 01:30, 29 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

April 27, 2006

Aesthetic Realism needs a serious cleanup. It seems to have been a battleground of an edit war in the past, and has received little attention after being unprotected to make it less rife with mudslinging from both sides and more encyclopaedic. beekman 19:18, 27 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

April 26, 2006

Foreign relations of Afghanistan is very much out of date. It mainly involves the Taliban's relations with neighboring countries and mentions little about the changed relations since the fall of Afghanistan, especially with relation to Pakistan and the United States. I may have time to eventually get around to it. Helmandsare 17:35, 26 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Alex Glasgow isn't terribly well written, and is lacking references and sources. It could also do with rearranging into a more logical order. I don't know enough about the subject though to do it myself though. DWaterson 19:39, 26 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

April 24, 2006

The Long Winters needs some serious npov'ing. Aecis ^Mr.^Mojo ^risin' 09:07, 24 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

April 23, 2006

Shuckin' and jivin' Dicdef? Jackiespeel 20:59, 23 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Galanthamine - I did some cleanup, but the page still has some organization issues and formatting problems that I don't currently have time to deal with. Exabyte (talk) 19:12, 23 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

April 21, 2006

Hiberno-English - A lot of unencycolpaedic phrasing at present. Doesn't cite sources for a lot of stuff. - ^Red _Hot 15:54, 21 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Incarceration - definition needs to be clearer, and also some POV.

April 18, 2006

Volkswagen Gol - This is a total mess with far too many pictures... --ApolloBoy 05:12, 18 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- I took some pictures off the top thing, but the bottom can still use some cleanup, and I didn't check the article itself much. Blackcanoflysol
- Removed most of the images, leaving only one example of each model. All the images remani in the code, but will not appear in the article. Alexvickers
Matt Winston(Amer. actor, StarTrek & al)- bare stub that attempts to duplicate his IMDb page. Needs drastic weeding.Jerzy•t
Gahlot needs cleaning up. It's written very much from an insider perspective, it contains too much jargon to inform the unknowing reader. Aecis ^Mr.^Mojo ^risin' 20:32, 18 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

April 16, 2006

Unlimited_paenga_tawhiti - looks as though it was written by staff or pupils of the school. need to be checked for copyvios from their website[4] (I couldn't check because the popups on their website are broken.dramatic 11:04, 17 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]